Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-21870 Evaluation of the Adverse Events Following Immunization Surveillance System, Ghana, 2019 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Frimpong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The authors present an evaluation of Ghana’s AEFI surveillance system (i.e. does the system meet the programme’s objectives) using an adaptation of a CDC tool. Vaccine safety is an important area of research and underserved in sub-Saharan Africa and the study has the potential to add to the knowledge base. Unfortunately, in its current form, the manuscript does not meet the criteria for publication. The overall methodology is very unclear, although some study procedures are described. At present it is difficult to relate the methods to the objectives and results. Reviewer 2 has offered a very thorough summary with constructive suggestions. Please also review my more detailed comments in the attached document. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The present manuscript (Evaluation of the Adverse Events Following Immunization Surveillance System, Ghana, 2019) seeks to evaluate Ghana’s AEFI surveillance system. Although the subject regarding AEFI in children is certainly of general interest, the manuscript is not uniform and easy to read, and has several English inaccuracies. Given the low quality of the methods and the poor originality of the findings, the manuscript in its current version is not acceptable for publication. Reviewer #2: This study is a good assessment of the AEFI reporting system in Ghana and is a valuable contribution to the world of vaccine safety surveillance and system strengthening. A good deal of information has been gathered. However, it is a little difficult to connect the methodology to the results. There would be benefit in revising the layout so that objective and measurable are clearer. Specific commets: Abstract: Line 40: The three updates within last decade appears not to be included in the main body of text Line 43: ‘All (16/16) Community Health Nurses interviewed indicated “fear of being victimized”’ doesn’t connect to the second part of the sentence; needs to be made more clearer Introduction: Line 54: “Vaccine safe and effective; however adverse events following immunization”: this is contradictory; although I agree vaccines are generally safe; perhaps add the word, Generally vaccines are safe and effective; Also it would be beneficial to add something that vaccines undergo extensive safety testing during clinical trials but rare events can be detected through post marketing surveillance Line 60 ; serious and non-serious should not be confused with severity; based on the outcome of the event (e.g. hospitalization, death); seriousness is not based on severity; this sentence should be corrected. Line 66: vaccine hesitancy is a public health issue; I would suggest replacing the term “concerns” with vaccine hesitancy: 67: There should be an explanation on why surveillance on immunization is essential; I.e.: to build trust; to reassure the public that AEFIs are being monitored and actions to reduce risks are being taken Line 69:AEFI to AEFIs Line 69: Under reporting is a well-known with routine reporting systems Line70: the term routine is preferable to passive Line 70: HICs also rely on routine systems; under reporting is a general limitation of passive/routine systems; but is there any other reason that LMICs have additional underreporting? Line 70 -72: perhaps rephrase to emphasize the link: underreporting was addressed via the GVSI. One of the targets of… was set. Materials and methods Line 93: is there a reference for CDC guidelines for evaluating ? Line 94: how were these guidelines adapted? What were the quantitative and qualitative data that was collected? Line 98: Study area paragraph: The evaluation was made through interviewing stakeholders in this region? And reviewing reports in this district? Perhaps clarify what resources in this area was used to do the evaluation. Line 125: I don’t think the term detect can be applied here; perhaps just state that caregivers/ vaccinees report to health facilities. How do they report? Using a reporting form? Line 126: What is meant by manage reports? They receive and code them? And they transfer the reports? Line 153: title says data collection and analysis, but no analysis was described: perhaps expand on the analysis or remove analysis from title. Also please make data sources clearer :by stating five different sources of data was collected data included: a) interviews .. b) case-based forms; c) IDSR reports; d) DHIMS2; e) TAC.VBP reports Line 159: explanation of what TAC-VBP reports are? Line 165: explain what is meant by hypothesis generation; is this signal detection?; Line 199; prefer to use the word understood rather than knew Line 205 section on performance of the surveillance system in meeting objectives: objective were; 1) detect, correct and prevent immunization error-related AEFIs; 2) identify problems with vaccine lots or brands leading to vaccine reactions, 3) prevent false blame arising from coincidental adverse events, 4) maintain confidence by properly responding to community concerns, 5) generate new hypotheses about vaccine reactions and estimate rates of occurrence of AEFIs. Use subtitles to indicate the results of assessment of each of these objectives; Line 208: would it be better to say 463/476 (97%) of all serious cases were investigated? Line 209: suggest to rephrase replace the word exonerate; By investigating deaths that followed vaccination and performing causality assessments the system has been able to prevent misinformation speculating that the vaccine attributed to the deaths? Also link tis to the objective of prevent false blame arising from coincidental adverse events Line 211: link lot/batch number to objective: identify problems with vaccine lots or brands leading to vaccine reactions Line 212: I would replace the word victim; perhaps individual; Line 212: who paid for the management of the AEFIs? Line 214: it is difficult to get an incidence rate with spontaneous reporting as there is always under reporting. Even if exposure information is known, the actual number of AEFIs collected through spontaneous reporting is an under estimation of incidence. Active surveillance methods are needed to estimate the incidence Line 212-213: does this refer to signal ( hypothesis generated)? This needs to be made more clearer Line 215: how was the usefulness assessed? Was this through interviews? Where did this information come from? Line 223-224: case definition of AEDI reports?, Line 224: please do not use the word victim; an individual is suspected to have AEFI; causality is not determined; the word victim gives a negative connotation, when most of the time benefits of the vaccine outweigh the risk Line 225-230: was 15 minutes to fill a report and investigations into serious cases considered to be simple? Line 280-281: was this a human error or a problem with the tools? Line 308: in Ghana is this the case, do caregivers have to go back to the facility to report? Or are there tools in place to allow patient/caregiver reporting? Line 344: full stop (.) after system Line 349: does Whatsapp platforms compromise the completeness of reports? Another limitation is recall bias in interviews; as study was conducted in 2019 , investigating from year 2014. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-21870R1Evaluation of the Adverse Events Following Immunization Surveillance System, Ghana, 2019PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Frimpong, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Many thanks and apologies for the delay. The presentation is much clearer. Lines 229-270, the case definitions, should be within the Methods Section. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 05 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Evaluation of the Adverse Events Following Immunization Surveillance System, Ghana, 2019 PONE-D-21-21870R2 Dear Dr. Frimpong, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Emma K. Kalk Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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