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PONE-D-21-39431Mental Health of Individuals Infected with SARS-CoV-2 during Mandated Isolation and Compliance with Recommendations - a Population-Based Cohort StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Milo A Puhan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In this review, two reviewers provided excellent comments. Please address all issues to polish your work. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 28, 2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Important note: This review pertains only to ‘statistical aspects’ of the study and so ‘clinical aspects’ [like medical importance, relevance of the study, ‘clinical significance and implication(s)’ of the whole study, etc.] are to be evaluated [should be assessed] separately/independently. Further please note that any ‘statistical review’ is generally done under the assumption that (such) study specific methodological [as well as execution] issues are perfectly taken care of by the investigator(s). This review is not an exception to that and so does not cover clinical aspects {however, seldom comments are made only if those issues are intimately / scientifically related & intermingle with ‘statistical aspects’ of the study}. Agreed that ‘statistical methods’ are used as just tools here, however, they are vital part of methodology [and so should be given due importance]. To improve the article/presentation, clues/hints may be taken from this review but should not limit the process by adhering to those points alone. COMMENTS: Although the study is very important, of current interest and the study is well conducted, I have few concerns. According to account given in lines 116-122 [We enrolled two populations of SARS-CoV-2 infected individuals. The first, henceforth referred to as “retrospectively recruited”, included all eligible individuals who were diagnosed with a SARS-CoV-2 infection prior to the start of the study (i.e., between 27 February 2020 and 05 August 2020). These individuals were enrolled between 06 October 2020 and 26 January 2021, at a median of 7.2 months after their diagnosis. The second, referred to as “prospectively recruited”, included an age-stratified random sample of all eligible individuals diagnosed between 06 August 2020 and 19 January 2021. These individuals were enrolled upon or shortly after diagnosis.], however, for analyses (example: application of ‘multivariable ordinal regression’ – table-2) you seem to have combined these samples. Even if (refer to lines 203-4) observing that “There were no considerable differences regarding the sociodemographic characteristics of the two sample populations (Table 1)”, is that {combining samples} correct? [Agreed that there were no considerable differences regarding the sociodemographic characteristics but the fact is these two samples collected by different methods] In ‘abstract- Methods and Findings’ section, lines 33-35 only prospective cohort study [“This population-based prospective cohort study enrolled 1547 adults from the general population with SARS-CoV-2 infection] is mentioned. This mixing confusion is seen at other places also {example: Section on ‘Study design and Population’ (line 108 onwards) “This analysis is based on the Zurich SARS-CoV-2 Cohort study, an ongoing observational, population-based cohort study of individuals in the Canton of Zurich with polymerase chain reaction (PCR) -confirmed SARS-CoV-2 infection”. Please address this issue to clarify more. [No problem if it is so, but should be clarified, remember that this is a scientific/academic document and so all details should be clearly/correctly communicated] In the context of information given in lines 144-46 [“To evaluate worries, positive experiences, and difficulties during isolation, we used five-point Likert scale questions with scales ranging from “extremely worried” to “not worried at all”, “strongly agree” to “strongly disagree” and “very difficult” to “very easy”, respectively], please note the following { pasted from one standard textbook on ‘Research Methodology’}: Whenever response options ranged from 1=strongly disagree to 4=strongly agree (or ranging from 1 (strongly disagree) to 6 (strongly agree) or from 1=very bad to 3=neither good nor bad to 5=very good), while using a ‘Likert’ scale responses, recoding [like strongly disagree=-2, disagree=-1, neutral=0, agree=1, strongly agree=2] may yield correct and meaningful ‘arithmetic mean’ which is useful not only for comparison but has absolute meaning. Application of any statistical test(s) assume that meaning of entity used (mean, SD, etc) has a particular meaning. Though ‘α’ [alpha] or most other measures of reliability/correlation will remain same, however, use of non-parametric methods should/may be preferred while dealing with data yielded by any questionnaire/score. Also consider that reported (observed) value of Nagelkerke’s R2 (=0.127) in table-2 is small and table-3 ( R2=0.068 ) is very very small. That the amount of variation explained is all most negligible. From (lines 157-8: Calculation and imputation of DASS-21 scores is described in previously published research from our study and followed official guidance (21).) it seems that the present sample is a sub-sample of some other study. If so, why this fact is not made clear in the beginning? Again, remember that this is a scientific/academic document and so all details should be clearly/correctly communicated. Most of the statistical values/results are not interpreted adequately [example: Odds Ratios in table-3, male Sex (=0.90); Living Alone (=0.60)]. Study has potential, however, I suggest to consider above points. Reviewer #2: The authors investigated impacts on the mental health due to the isolation experience in the general population with SARS-CoV-2 infection in Zurich, Switzerland. They found that the proportion of participants affected by depression or anxiety increased during isolation from 10·0% to 17·1% and 9·1% to 17·6%, respectively. They also found that taking care of children increased the difficulty of isolation (OR 2·10, CI 1·43 – 3·08) and risk of non-compliance (OR 1·63, CI 1·05 – 2·53), especially in younger participants. The topic seems to be interesting for researchers and practitioners in public health. In general, this is a well-designed, -analyzed and -written paper. I have some comments to improve this paper. 1. The description of the results about free text comments, i.e. Results - Free text comments - separate Box – (Line 344 to 435), is redundant for the readers. Results of free text comments should be summarized in one paragraph in the main manuscript. The original description of the results about free text comments should be presented as a supplementary material, if needed. 2. Clarification of the Figure 1 are needed. The lines of the all graphs are indistinguishable for the readers, e.g. the lines for “Any” and “Severe” in overall with severity, and the lines for “Very severe”, “Severe”, “Moderate” and “Mild” in COVID-19 Symptoms. 3. There are some typos in the manuscript: Line 208, 55 participants … Line 214, that that participants … Line 252, when isolation has ended Results are … Line 254, COVID-19 symptoms at infection Out of 1105 … ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Mental Health of Individuals Infected with SARS-CoV-2 during Mandated Isolation and Compliance with Recommendations - a Population-Based Cohort Study PONE-D-21-39431R1 Dear Dr. Milo A Puhan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: COMMENTS: All of the comments made on earlier draft by me (and hopefully by other respected reviewers also) were/are attended [though I had suggested minor points and mentioned that the article is excellent by all the means]. I recommend the acceptance as the manuscript now (even earlier I accepted/appreciated the potential of this article) has achieved acceptable level, in my opinion. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Sanjeev Sarmukaddam Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-39431R1 Mental Health of Individuals Infected with SARS-CoV-2 during Mandated Isolation and Compliance with Recommendations – a Population-Based Cohort Study Dear Dr. Puhan: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Wen-Wei Sung Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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