Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32070Internalized stigma in patients with schizophrenia: a hospital-based cross-sectional study from NepalPLOS ONE Dear Corresponding Author and team, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As an academic editor, I encourage you to focus on all the comments by reviewers carefully and modify accordingly. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 05 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The aim of the study is not clear, the introduction in abstract can be reframed. Line 77- 78 need reframing The inclusion criteria does not mention about presence or stance on other axis 1 psychiatric disorders, also how was the diagnosis of schizophrenia confirmed. From line 125 line 141 is it desired to put this under the ethical issues section or rather the methodology section. Line 164 - were these 15 participants included in the final analysis In the results section either use numerical to describe percentages or words, kindly maintain uniformity for better readability. In table 1 please mention units for relevant variables. For patients of duration of illness how was the diagnosis of Schizophrenia made considering time stipulations. Line 214 -217 need to be rearranged talk about categorization either in methodology or describe it before the sub scale scores. How is the score of stigma resistance interpreted as in if the scores are coded in reverse - a low score means less resistance if so then has that been take care of during calculating the mean score of the scale? Have all other studies done with the ISMI scale compared to the current findings in the discussion? Reviewer #2: Thank-you for the opportunity to review your article ‘Internalized stigma in patients with schizophrenia: a hospital-based cross-sectional study from Nepal’. The article is on a critical area, being stigma in patients with schizophrenia as stigma impacts upon other outcomes for patients with schizophrenia. As stigma erodes the patient’s self-esteem and thus has broad impacts on the patient's quality of life and wellbeing. Please see revisions below. Abstract: Line 33 – English phrasing ‘to fill up’ please revise Introduction: The introduction provides a good concise summary of stigma and the associated impacts on individuals with schizophrenia. The inconsistency in previous research pertaining to the relationship between stigma and sociodemographic variables is noted. However, the introduction may benefit from the addition of more information pertaining to the inconsistent results. Further the introduction would benefit from a thorough proofread with particular attention to English phrasing, please see below. Line 54 - ‘stigma’ is missing after the comma Line 57 - English phrasing ‘people around persons’ please revise Line 59 - English phrasing ‘constitute in defining’ please revise Line 77 - ‘being’ is omitted Line 79/80 - English phrasing Line 81 – results not ‘relations’ Methods: The authors provided enough detail in the methods section for the study to be replicated. Further the authors provided a good summary of the measure used. Please address the issues noted below. Line 94/95 - English phrasing ‘and took’ please revise possibly recruiting Line 95 - English phrasing Line 96/99 – Clinic or centre omitted from sentence Line 120/126 – Completed not filled Line 129 – Revise sentence Line 140/141 - in omitted Line 143 – The internalized stigma of mental illness scale (re-state title) Line 159 – revise Line 166/167 - Remove Line 176 – revise ‘were done’ Results: The results are well presented and summarized. Please see points below. Line 182 – Percent not percentage Line 216 – please clarify “Considering scoring, 4 categories were used”. Line 242 – revise ‘seen’ Line 242-245 – Please revise Discussion: The discussion requires a thorough proofread and revision to enhance the clarity of the points being made especially in the section comparing the current research to previous research as well as the limitations section. Line 252/253 - revise start of sentence Line 257 – add disorders after psychotic and remove and before therefore Line 264/265 - Revise Line 268 – studies Line 277 – change taken Line 285 – 287 – please revise Reviewer #3: Presence of stigmas and their negative effects on the clinical outcome in schizophrenia is an established matter. But, this study tried to explore it from a perspective of an Asian and developing country. And that is the rationality of this study. The study overall highlighted some new findings from Nepal's perspective. But, I have some minor suggestions- 1) Introduction section can be rewritten in more concise manner. 2) Sample size determination process is not necessary in details, it can be omitted or can be written in a single sentence mentioning the p = 44% 3) Ethical issue section and The Internalized Stigma of Mental Illness (ISMI) scale section should be more concise. 4) Result section should be more concise excluding the repetition of not so important findings described in description as well as shown in table 5) Discussion section should include the socio-demographic sections to highlight the similarities and differences with other studies, which is necessary for comparison 6) Limitation section includes several limitations, which is good. But, should include clarification how they were resolved, or why this study is yet important with these limitations. 7) Conclusion section revealed as there is nothing new in this study. 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Internalized stigma in patients with schizophrenia: a hospital-based cross-sectional study from Nepal PONE-D-21-32070R1 Dear Dr. Dhungana, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Soumitra Das Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The authors covered up all the queries made before. If other reviewers are agreed, this study could be accepted. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr Prateek Varshney Reviewer #3: Yes: Panchanan Acharjee |
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PONE-D-21-32070R1 Internalized stigma in patients with schizophrenia: a hospital-based cross-sectional study from Nepal Dear Dr. Dhungana: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Soumitra Das Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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