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PONE-D-21-19495 Therapeutic efficacy of Artemether-Lumefantrine, Artesunate-Amodiaquine and Dihydroartemisinin -Piperaquine in the treatment of uncomplicated malaria in Sub-Saharan Africa. A decade after the introduction: a systematic review and meta-analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marwa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In addition to addressing reviewer comments, please be sure to reference other similar recent work and compare your findings. For example the similar meta-analysis by Rathmes et al Mal J 2020 Global estimation of anti-malarial drug effectiveness for the treatment of uncomplicated Plasmodium falciparum malaria 1991–2019. https://malariajournal.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s12936-020-03446-8 Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 27 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Unfortunately, it has major deficiencies including gaps in the adequacy/correctness of publicly available facts/information as listed below: • Title: 'Therapeutic efficacy of Artemether-Lumefantrine, Artesunate-Amodiaquine and Dihydroartemisinin -Piperaquine in the treatment of uncomplicated malaria in Sub-Saharan Africa. A decade after the introduction: a systematic review and meta-analysis". The phrase "A decade after the introduction" applies to AL and ASAQ, but not to DHA -PPQ, which has only recently been recommended in Africa. Therefore, the authors should revise the title. • Often, efficacy studies are published several years after they were conducted. Therefore, not all studies conducted between 2010-2020 are included in this review. This should be stated in the study limitation. • "P. falciparum" should always be "P. falciparum" in italics. The authors should correct this in the manuscript. Lines: 58-60: Authors should use the most recent malaria burden data from the World Malaria Report 2020. • Lines 61-64: These statements need reference/s. • Line 63: change "partnerdrugs" to "partner drugs". • Lines 65-66: the reference cited by the authors for the statement "Artemether-lumefantrine and artesunate-amodiaquine are the currently most commonly employed ACTs in 66 Sub-Saharan Africa [1]" is not appropriate. The reference is about the updated treatment guidelines that include ACTs and NOT, which ACTs are most commonly recommended. The correct reference is World Malaria report 2020 (see ANNEX 3 - B. ANTIMALARIAL DRUG POLICY, 2019). • Line 67: "Artesunate-mefloquine and artesunate-pyronaridine are not used in most countries in the region." Should be revised as "Artesunate-mefloquine and artesunate-pyronaridine are not recommended in countries in the Region." • Lines 68-70: "ACTs not endorsed by WHO for Africa but are available in the market for some Sub-Saharan countries include artesunate-sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine, arterolane-piperaquine, artemisinin-naphthoquine, and artemisinin-piperaquine [1, 3]." As clearly stated in the WHO treatment guidelines, WHO provides global guidelines and does not dictate which ACTs are recommended at the country level. It is the countries that decide which ACT/s they prefer. Artesunate-sulfadoxine-pyrimethamine has been used in African countries (Somalia and Sudan), although it has recently been abandoned. Therefore, the authors need to revise the statement, "ACTs that are not recommended by African countries (wmr 2020) but are available on the market for some Sub-Saharan countries include arterolane-piperaquine, artemisinin-naphthoquine, and artemisinin-piperaquine [3]." • Lines 81-83: "Recently, a de novo mutation at codon R561H was reported in eastern Rwanda, although it was not linked with delayed parasite clearance in vivo but gene editing demonstrated its potential to drive in vitro artemisinin resistance." The statement needs a reference. Also, the authors should be aware that a subsequent study in Rwanda showed a higher number of R561H mutations and an association between the mutation and delayed parasite clearance. • Lines 88-89: "The pfmp2 multicopy parasites have also been reported in some parts of Africa, including Mali, Tanzania, Uganda, and Ethiopia [13, 14]." There are other studies that detected pfmp2 multicopy parasites in Africa: A study by Leroy et al 2019, with 2014/2015 samples collected from Benin, Burkina Faso, DRC, Mozambique and Uganda reported multicopy Pfpm2 varying from 11.3% to 33.9%. The authors need to conduct a proper literature search on this topic. • Line 92-93: Statement "In the effort to facilitate early detection of resistance for artemisinin derivatives and partner drugs, WHO recommends monitoring of ACT's efficacy in the malaria-endemic countries [15]. This document has recently been updated and authors should use the new version: "WHO. Report on antimalarial drug efficacy, resistance and response: 10 years of surveillance (2010-2019). Geneva: World Health Organization; 2020b. https://www.who.int/publications/i/item/9789240012813. • Lines 98-99: "Most studies to assess the efficacy of ACTs in Africa were conducted between 2005 and 2009, just few years post the introduction of the drugs." This is incorrect. There are many efficacy studies that were conducted after 2009. • Lines 99-100: "In this systematic review and meta-analysis, we summarize the evidence on the efficacy of ACTs used in Sub Saharan Africa for the past ten years." It would be better to provide reference points: from which year to which year. Suggest: "In this systematic review and meta-analysis, we summarize the evidence on the efficacy of ACTs used in sub-Saharan Africa from 2010 to 2020." • Lines 234-236: "The present metanalysis shows that the ACTs evaluated are still efficacious with PCR corrected efficacies greater than 95% which is the WHO minimum threshold requirement for recommendation of a change in the treatment policy [7, 22]." WHO recommends treatment policy change when the efficacy of ACT falls below 90%. The 95% threshold applies to newly introduced first-line treatments. Therefore, the statement should be revised to read, "The present meta-analysis shows that the ACTs evaluated are still efficacious with PCR-corrected efficacies greater than 90%, which is the WHO minimum threshold requirement for recommending a change in treatment policy [WHO. Report on antimalarial drug efficacy, resistance and response: 10 years of surveillance (2010-2019)]." • In the tables: the authors need to correct the first author of the Mozambique study published in 2017. It is Salvador et al. 2017 as in the reference list, not Warsame M. • References: o The authors have used different styles for the author of WHO: e.g Organization WH. and WHO. Some of these references are not complete. The author should follow the Malaria Journal reference style. o The authors used outdated WHO documents, although updated versions are available: o World Malaria Report 2015 (refs 7 and 2) and World Malaria Report 2019 are used. Suggest to use World Malaria Report 2020. o Ref 8: "WHO. Artemisinin and artemisinin-based combination therapy resistance: status - report. World Health Organization, 2016." There are many updates to this series after this version. Authors must use the latest update. I would suggest that the authors use the updated document on the topic "WHO. Report on antimalarial drug efficacy, resistance and response: 10 years of surveillance (2010-2019). Geneva: World Health Organization; 2020b. " ext-link-type="uri" xlink:type="simple">https://www.who.int/publications/i/item/9789240012813." o Ref 15: "Organization WH. Global report on antimalarial drug efficacy and drug resistance: 2000-2010. The reference is out of date and also does not conform to the MJ reference style. Authors must use the new updated version "WHO. Report on antimalarial drug efficacy, resistance and response: 10 years of surveillance (2010-2019). Geneva: World Health Organization; 2020b. " ext-link-type="uri" xlink:type="simple">https://www.who.int/publications/i/item/9789240012813." o Ref 22: "Organization WH. Methods for surveillance of antimalarial drug efficacy. 2009." Is not consistent with MJ style. All referenced WHO documents in the manuscript should be carefuly revised. o Ref #5 as listed in the manuscript is wrong: Njagi EN, Orinda GO, Thiongo K, Kimani FT, Matoke-Muhia D. Clinical efficacy of artemisininlumefantrine and status of antifolate drug resistance markers in western Kenya. 2019. Correct Ref #5: Kishoyian G, Njagi ENM, Orinda GO, Kimani FT, Thiongo K, Matoke-Muhia D. Efficacy of artemisinin-lumefantrine for treatment of uncomplicated malaria after more than a decade of its use in Kenya. Epidemiol Infect. 2021 Jan 5;149:e27. doi: 10.1017/S0950268820003167. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled “Therapeutic efficacy of Artemether-Lumefantrine, Artesunate-Amodiaquine and Dihydroartemisinin -Piperaquine in the treatment of uncomplicated malaria in Sub Saharan Africa. A decade after the introduction: a systematic review and meta-analysis” (PONE-D-21-19495) is well written. In this manuscript the authors discussed one of the important issues. While I have no doubt that this was a very interesting study and well planned. The followings are the concern of the MS. 1. The study for all the drug was conducted in Sub Saharan Africa and the number of studies for each drug may be presented in a table form with more cohesive manner as provided in line no 176-178 is very confusing. 2. Table no. 1 is need to reframe as it is not in presentable form. 3. Author should provide the others factor responsible for high difference in efficacy among PCR corrected vs uncorrected case and also the transmission aspect may be discussed. 4. The above finding clearly indicated that there is need to monitor the molecular markers of both the drugs and the policy makers may consider this as on priority. 5. I believe that parasite clearance time should be tabled as it is important findings. 1. I feel that the concluding message from author based on the review and meta-analysis is need more attention for the policy makers as well as the other stakeholders as author fail to discuss the importance of the results of the study. 6. The language is mostly suitable for publication; however, the entire article would benefit from a careful review to eliminate some few grammatical and spelling errors. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Therapeutic efficacy of Artemether-Lumefantrine, Artesunate-Amodiaquine and Dihydroartemisinin -Piperaquine in the treatment of uncomplicated Plasmodium falciparum malaria in Sub-Saharan Africa: A systematic review and meta-analysis PONE-D-21-19495R1 Dear Dr. Marwa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Lucy C. Okell Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-19495R1 Therapeutic efficacy of Artemether-Lumefantrine, Artesunate-Amodiaquine and Dihydroartemisinin -Piperaquine in the treatment of uncomplicated Plasmodium falciparum malaria in Sub-Saharan Africa: A systematic review and meta-analysis Dear Dr. Marwa: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Lucy C. Okell Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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