Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-17857The perceptions of different professionals on school absenteeism and the role of school health care. A focus group study.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Melander, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In addition to reviewers comments, address the following: -It is unclear what the objective of this study was from a Public/Global Health perspective. -I am concerned that this study was conducted about 4 years ago. Are the findings still applicable? e.g. When the focus groups were conducted, basic education ended after nine years of basic education or at age 17 (line 86-87). Is this still the same or has changed? If this has changed, what are the implications of the findings. -The focus groups were organized between spring 2016 and winter 2017 and focus groups were digitally recorded and transcribed verbatim in 2018. What did "organizing" actually entail considering it took nearly a year? What is the reason behind the time lag between "organizing" and conducting (winter of 2017 and 2018). Perhaps it would help to simply say when the FGDs were conducted instead of saying when they were organized e.g. focus groups were digitally recorded from January to February 2018. -Abstract - Data analysis was both inductive and deductive (line 31-32). All identified themes were derived from the recorded data (line 189). The latter assumes an entire inductive approach? -Total number of participants was 55. On average, each FGD had about 6 participants? A FGD generally comprises 8-12 participants. This ensures validity of findings. In results, include a range of FGD participants e.g. 6-10. Also, comment on relatively low number of participants under limitations. Also, the FGD's inherent limitations should be mentioned. -Still, it is unlikely that a study with just 55 participants could influence policy even if at national level? Discussion could end with a recommendation of additional/larger studies? -Move lines 71-76 to Methods (lines 180-186). Introduction could end instead with why this study was conducted e.g. to inform XX interventions. -Leave out lines 149-151. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: My comments also in a separate file. The perceptions of different professionals on school absenteeism and the role of school health care. A focus group study. Number PONE-D-21-17857 This is an interesting and well designed qualitative research. Its aim is to assess the role of school health services in decreasing absenteeism among adolescent pupils 13 to 15 years in Finland. The potential limit of the paper is that the results may not apply to other countries, but this problem is counter-balanced by the fact that the authors provide a thorough description of the context of education, schooling and school health in their country. The paper should be revised and specify how the issue of absenteeism has been operationalized: it is different to skip school once or twice in a year for a flu or a broken leg, or to repeatedly miss periods and days for vague reasons or for reasons that are even not provided. Also, the authors rightly mention the issue of “drop-outs”, that is youngsters who do not appear anymore for long periods or definitively, but do not tackle this issue specifically. The introduction and the methods sections should thus be modified accordingly. It would be as well useful to know what the content is of the yearly nurses’ check-ups; same applies to the doctors’ check-ups. The analysis of the data is carefully described and meets the standards of a qualitative research. I have no comments on the results. The discussion is well presented. It would be useful to comment on the lessons learned for readers from outside Finland regarding the role of school health services. Also, I miss a few remarks on what the authors plan to do, as they point out that there is room for improvement in this area. I think, but this is a personal opinion, that many school health services spend a lot of time on screening procedures whose effectiveness is not necessarily evidence-based. They may thus devote more time to the support given to vulnerable pupils and health promotion. But the authors don’t need to comment on this issue. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the article, “The perceptions of different professionals on school absenteeism and the role of school health care - A focus group study.” This study addresses important topics, specifically the perceptions of Finnish education professionals of the reasons students miss school and the potential role - if any - of Finnish school health care (SHC) in mitigating student absenteeism. While there are some merits to the article with respect to originality, research questions, and findings, the quality of the research design does not meet the high standards of a journal like PLoS ONE. I hope that my comments and suggestions are helpful to the authors as they revisit the manuscript. If the authors intend to resubmit this for review, I recommend significant revisions to both the introduction and methods. I detail my concerns below. Introduction The introduction seems incomplete. I feel the authors haven’t adequately positioned their research in the absenteeism literature or policy context - i.e., why should I care about this study? What is the Finnish policy context? Why is absenteeism of such concern? What gaps does this study fill in the extant literature? More specific to this study, why might we have reason to believe that SHC has an important role to play in mitigating absenteeism? Research Questions Research questions 1 and 3 are interesting, but I think they would be more compelling if the aforementioned introduction adequately made a better case for research question 2, which the authors hint at in the final paragraph of the introduction. Method The study focus is somewhat narrow, looking only at 13-15 year olds. The authors provide some evidence that is when absenteeism usually increases, but the research questions address the issue more broadly. The reasons 13-15 year olds miss school are likely not the same reasons older or younger students miss. That is not to say that the narrow study design is not worthwhile, merely that it does not answer the research questions as currently constructed. Further, there is no mention of this age group in the literature review. The rationale for the selection of a focus group design is not made clear by the authors. Focus groups can obviously be a useful method, but rarely are used as a stand-alone technique. I am concerned about the credibility of participant responses when answering within a focus group setting. Ideally, the researchers would be able to follow up with at least some of the participants one-on-one to ensure their responses were adequately forthcoming and truthful. In lines 429-431, the authors write that “Based on the pilot focus groups, we decided that the groups could be heterogenous (sic) in composition, including participants from different professions, in an attempt to enhance rich interaction.” While participant interaction is certainly a valuable feature of focus groups, it does not adequately address my concerns about participants’ willingness to give the most honest and complete responses. I certainly appreciate the authors’ attention to credibility through triangulation and discussion, but those strategies address the credibility of the data already collected, rather than ensure that the highest quality data are collected in the first place. Results The findings of this study are interesting and carry clear policy implications for the role of SHC in improving student attendance, especially regarding improving communication between school staff and school health professionals. If the issues above are addressed, I think this paper could be a valuable contribution to the absenteeism literature. The authors may want to consider how their findings fit in into the existing literature, for example “Absent from School: Understanding and Addressing Student Absenteeism” edited by Gottfried and Hutt (which has a chapter on school-based health centers). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-17857R1The perceptions of different professionals on school absenteeism and the role of school health care. A focus group study.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Melander, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. We are about to accept the manuscript. Please address the following: Consider changing title to: The perceptions of different professionals on school absenteeism and the role of school health care: A focus group study conducted in Finland Full form of SHC should be given the first time abbreviation is used. Would say "topic guide" instead of questionnaire. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The perceptions of different professionals on school absenteeism and the role of school health care. A focus group study conducted in Finland. PONE-D-21-17857R2 Dear Dr. Melander, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Webster Mavhu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-17857R2 The perceptions of different professionals on school absenteeism and the role of school health care: A focus group study conducted in Finland. Dear Dr. Melander: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Webster Mavhu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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