Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 2, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-03274The Simple One-step stool processing method for detection of Pulmonary tuberculosis: a study protocol to assess the robustness, stool storage conditions and sampling strategy for global implementation and scale-upPLOS ONE Dear Dr. de haas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The study protocol is presented well and well throughout. But it does need improvement and clarity. As suggested by the reviewer the flow charts could be simple. I hope the comments would help you improve the manuscript and I look forward for your resubmitted manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 07 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I hope the comments would help you improve the manuscript and I look forward for your resubmitted manuscript. Best Priya [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? The research question outlined is expected to address a valid academic problem or topic and contribute to the base of knowledge in the field. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The protocol proposed by De Haas and colleagues aims to assess different components of stool collection and processing which could influence detection of MTB by Xpert Ultra. The flow charts are rather complex but have clearly been thought through carefully. My main points of criticism are the following: - The background information needs to be more balanced to accurately summarize current evidence of different stool processing methods for TB diagnosis (see details below) - I am uncertain about the sample size calculation and whether the estimated sample size will be able to detect a meaningful difference between the experiments and the baseline method. Abstract General: The abstract uses the terms “samples” and “sampling” loosely to mean specimen, statistical sampling and testing different parts of a sample. I recommend reviewing the entire abstract to use more accurate terminology. Other: Line 21: “Xpert MTB/RIF Ultra (Xpert-Ultra) provides timely results with good sensitivity and acceptable specificity with stool samples in children for bacteriological confirmation of tuberculosis (TB).” There are actually no data on Ultra on stool in children- only Xpert MTB/RIF. Line 41: Reword: “The sample size is estimated to be 50 participants.” Line 43-47: Reword: “We will use EpiData for data entry and Stata for data analysis purposes. The main analyses will include computing the loss or gain in the Xpert-Ultra MTB positivity rate compared to ..., and rates of unsuccessful test results. The differences in the positivity rate by regarding testing more than one sample per child, and using different storage, and processing conditions, will be compared to the baseline (on-site) Xpert-Ultra result.” Introduction WHO has made no recommendation on stool as a sample for use with Ultra due to lack of evidence. The recommendation for stool is for Xpert MTB RIF only, and it is based on low certainty of evidence. Lines 71-72: “This shows that there is a lack of standardized stool preparation and testing protocols and warrants the optimization and standardization of the stool processing methods that can be used at the decentralized level.” Suggest rewording: “The lack of standardized stool preparation and testing protocols warrants the optimization and standardization of stool processing methods that can be used at the decentralized level Lines 81-82: I suggest rewording: A pilot study conducted in multiple laboratories across Ethiopia demonstrated acceptably low rates of unsuccessful test results (6%). Lines 83-84: “Furthermore, a head-to-head comparison study, in which the SOS method is compared to other stool processing methods showed similar sensitivity and specificity.” I think it is rash to make this statement based on a laboratory spiking study which tested a small number of samples. Even so, the Walters-centrifugation method appeared superior in detecting BCG at lower concentrations, which is relevant in the case of young children/infants, who have more extreme forms of paucibacillary disease and for whom stool is more attractive than for older children and adolescents. I would favour a more balanced summary of the quoted study. Methods Enrolment: I would strongly advise enriching for young children and infants <2 years of age, as this is the group for whom stool-based diagnosis is most relevant. This is also the group more likely to have very low bacillary concentrations in sputum and hence stool. A stool-based method that can detect TB in older children with adult-type cavitary TB and other forms of TB with higher bacillary loads (many of these children will be able to produce sputum) is not as relevant. Lines 192-196 : The sentence is grammatically incorrect. Please clarify if the primary outcome is the Ultra positivity rate of the index experiment vs the on-site Ultra stool result? Is the secondary outcomes measure also a comparison of the index experiment vs on-site Ultra stool? Please edit accordingly. I am not an expert in statistics, but I have some concerns regarding the sample size calculation and the effect size that such a sample size will be able to achieve. In the footnote to the figure, the authors say that the SS calculations do not take into account for correlation between stool samples from the same individual. Surely, this should be considered? Secondly, even assuming that all the samples are collected, the minimum difference in detection (from negative to positive) that will be measured with statistical significance is 10%. Does that mean that ANY of the experiments will be able to detect 10% more TB than the baseline test? Is that meaningful? Should the sample size not be calculated to achieve an meaningful increase in detection for every experiment? As I am not an expert in this, I think the statistical methods should be reviewed by a statistician, and clarified for a non-expert readership. Discussion Lines 262-263. I know that other stool processing methods have undergone similar pre-clinical testing, but the protocols were not published. So rather say that this is the first protocol to be published... Line 265: The experiments will actually be conducted on confirmed TB cases based on the inclusion criteria, not presumptive TB cases. Line 266-267: There are a number of published studies assessing stool-based TB diagnosis which have used clinical samples (not only spiked samples). Minor: Line 70: rather quite- redundancy Line 212: Suggest rewording: “Data collected will include age...” Line 214: “of stool of collection”- delete second “of” Reviewer #2: This study protocol is very elaborative and well designed. The authors here would like to emphasize on the need of a simple and standard protocol for Mtb diagnosis from stool samples. Their study protocol is easy to understand with enough supporting information. I would like to provide my concerns/suggestions listed below. 1. Which sample will be used as baseline? the stool or the sputum or both? 2. Will the samples be collected on two/three consecutive days from the study population or there will be some duration between two samples collected from the same person? My suggestion will be to include this information in the study protocol as well as in the consent form. 3. Are you going to enroll Mtb negative population for this study as a control group? 4. For experiment 2, to study the effect of storage conditions, you have not proposed to freeze any samples. I believe the addition of freezing as a stool storage temperature and then study the effect of freezing on Mtb detection using your proposed SOS method would add value to your studies and also help others in future. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-03274R1The Simple One-step stool processing method for detection of Pulmonary tuberculosis: a study protocol to assess the robustness, stool storage conditions and sampling strategy for global implementation and scale-upPLOS ONE Dear Dr. de haas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The above manuscript is greatly improved int the revised version. I am mostly satisfied with your response to the reviewers concerns. The protocol carries much better clarity. However, right statistics do play a major role in determining the sample size and the analysis of the proposed study. I am not sure if the use of Statulator.com is enough for such studies. I do like to see the study established in consultation with an expert statistician, especially if enrolling a small number of MTB confirmed negative patients might help them establish their specificity. I understand the financial and resource limitations, but strongly recommend it, as this would be very important in understanding the application of the proposed method for routine use. Therefore I am recommending minor revision to the protocol.********** Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 09 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Padmapriya P Banada, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The above manuscript is greatly improved int the revised version. I am mostly satisfied with your response to the reviewers concerns. The protocol carries much better clarity. However, right statistics do play a major role in determining the sample size and the analysis of the proposed study. I am not sure if the use of Statulator.com is enough for such studies. I do like to see the study established in consultation with an expert statistician, especially if enrolling a small number of MTB confirmed negative patients might help them establish their specificity. I understand the financial and resource limitations, but strongly recommend it, as this would be very important in understanding the application of the proposed method for routine use. Therefore I am recommending minor revision to the protocol. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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The Simple One-step stool processing method for detection of Pulmonary tuberculosis: a study protocol to assess the robustness, stool storage conditions and sampling strategy for global implementation and scale-up PONE-D-22-03274R2 Dear Dr. de haas, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Padmapriya P Banada, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-03274R2 The Simple One-step stool processing method for detection of Pulmonary tuberculosis: a study protocol to assess the robustness, stool storage conditions and sampling strategy for global implementation and scale-up Dear Dr. de haas: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Padmapriya P Banada Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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