Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 28, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-40812Pacemaker translocations and power laws in 2D stem cell-derived cardiomyocyte culturesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dunham, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper reports pacemaker translocations occurring in 2-dimensional hPSC-derived cardiomyocyte culture and power law analysis of these translocation events. While it is interesting to see analysis of cardiomyocyte behaviors based on a statistical power-law relation, several aspects of the manuscript can be potentially improved. The detailed comments are as follows: 1. One of the conclusions of the manuscript is that the pacemaker translocations obey a doubly truncated power law distribution. To claim this, the results should be reproduced for multiple differentiations as there can be variabilities in each differentiation (i.e. differentiation efficiency). It is unclear whether the three distinct cardiomyocyte cell cultures are from single differentiation subcultured onto three distinct MEA plates or from three independent differentiations. Parameters obtained from each differentiation can possibly be presented as mean ± SD to give better statistical reliability. 2. The manuscript lacks molecular characterization of hPSC-derived cardiomyocytes. Although beating is one of the hallmarks of cardiomyocytes, cardiomyocyte differentiation typically gives non-myocytes populations in culture which would affect the results. It is important to show the quality of the cells (i.e. cardiomyocyte purity) used in the MEA analysis or at least mention that there can be non-myocyte cells in culture. 3. The manuscript lacks detailed description of cardiomyocyte differentiation (& purification step, if any) protocol. Especially, the time point of cells used for MEA analysis should be mentioned as that can be correlated with the maturation status of the cardiomyocytes. 4. Typical cardiomyocyte differentiation yields ventricular-like cardiomyocytes rather than nodal-like (pacemaker) cardiomyocytes. One might ask if the cells on the pacemaker region have characteristics of nodal-like cardiomyocytes. I wonder if there is a simple way to characterize action potential of the cells using MEA to identify subtype-specific action potential profile of the cells. If not, it would be better to at least mention the subtypes of cardiomyocytes and potential pacemaker function of hPSC-derived cardiomyocytes (generally, hPSC-derived cardiomyocytes consist of mixture of different subtypes even if most of them are ventricular-like cells). Reviewer #2: The ability to model pacemaker translocation in 2D culture through simple mathematical modeling is vital to correctly understand dynamic behaviors of stem cell-derived cardiomyocytes. Here, Dunham et al. measured pacemaker translocations by microelectrode arrays and compared modeling of these dynamic event by log-normal, exponential, Weibull, and a doubly truncated power law against non-robust methods that only use simple power laws. While we are enthusiastic about this work, we believe the article can benefit from several content addition and rewording/formatting edits. At times, we found that mathematical equations and estimated parameters were missing for several models. In addition, improved quantitative assessment for model fitting against data should be performed. Furthermore, certain formatting issues are distracting and need to be corrected. We recommend this article for publication after major revision, and request the authors to consider the points below: Major points: 1. Equations for log-normal, exponential, Weibull, and the doubly truncated power law with data-dependent parameters should be explicitly shown in the paper. 2. To quantitatively assess model fitting, methods such as residual plots should be included in addition to simple visual examinations. 3. Additional literature can be cited to better explain and support the background section of the paper: 1) Seminal works that contribute to stem cell-derived cardiovascular cultures should be discussed and cited in the first paragraph of the introduction when it discusses “have shone significant light on numerous factors contributing to the development of the heart.” Although we understand that cardiomyocytes are the major focus for this study, differentiation methods for other cardiovascular components such as endothelial, vascular smooth muscle cells, etc. should also be mentioned: 10.1038/nprot.2017.033, 10.1016/j.stemcr.2014.09.005, 10.1161/ATVBAHA.117.309196, 10.1016/j.stemcr.2021.04.019, 10.1073/pnas.1200250109, and 10.1038/nmeth.2999. 2) Previous studies for several power-law applications in cardiomyocytes are missing Please consider adding these relevant reports: 10.1016/j.bios.2020.112399, 10.22489/CinC.2017.207-155, and doi.org/10.1161/CIRCEP.116.004508. 4. Table 1 should include parameters for each model. Currently, α and xmin are the only two parameters shown there for simple power law. 5. Figures should be copied with high resolution. At times, many of them look quite blurry. 6. With all due respect, the manuscript contains several formatting issues. Examples include, but not limited to, the paragraph between Figure 5 captions and Table 1. Additionally, the underscore between the word “library’s distribution” and “compare” should be deleted in this paragraph. Minor points: 1. Equations for power laws should be explained using plain texts or shown as a separate equation item (like Equation X). 2. Transitions should be made between pacemaker cells and power laws (the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs from the introduction section). 3. Latin words such as “in vivo” and “in vitro” should be italicized. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Pacemaker translocations and power laws in 2D stem cell-derived cardiomyocyte cultures PONE-D-21-40812R1 Dear Dr. Dunham, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Xiaoping Bao, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I appreciate that the authors addressed all the comments and made relavent changes in the manuscript. Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfactorily addressed all my questions and comments. I hereby recommend acceptance of this paper. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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