Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-14950Aortic Agatston score correlates with the progression of acute type A aortic dissectionPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tashima Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. Please submit your revised manuscript by November 27, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors aimed to explore the association of aortic Agatston scores with disease progression in patients with ATAAD. This was a retrospective analysis of 85 patients who had preoperatively undergone CTA for evaluation of aortic calcification. The patients were classified into high score (Agatston score ≥ 3344; n = 49) and low-score (<3344; n = 36) groups. Correlations between aortic Agatston scores and CTA variables were assessed. Higher aortic Agatston scores were significantly correlated with the smaller distal extent of aortic dissection (p <0.001), larger true lumen areas of the ascending (p = 0.009) and descending aorta (p = 0.002), and smaller false lumen areas of the descending aorta (p = 0.028). Patients in the high-score group were more likely to have DeBakey type II dissection (p = 0.001) and false lumen thrombosis (p = 0.027) than those in the low-score group, thereby confirming the correlations. Aortic dissection in the high score group was significantly less distally extended (p < 0.001). The authors concluded that higher aortic Agatston score correlates with the larger true lumen area of the ascending and descending aorta and the less distal progression of aortic dissection in patients with ATAAD. This manuscript is engaging and thought-provoking. I present the following suggestions / comments in the hopes of improving the manuscript. At this current stage, I recommend major revision for publication in PlosOne. Major Comments 1. Introduction: Line 69 represents a transition point, and therefore, I recommend a new paragraph that guides the reader more concisely to purpose of this investigation. In line 67, instead of “we hypothesize”, I recommend “It is plausible aortic calcification could alter the biomechanical…” 2. The follow up study time frame of 7 days is too abbreviated to evaluate early aortic progression especially since it is not clear if the extent of dissection changed from pre- and post-op CTA (Norton et al., 2020, J Thorac Cardiovasc Surg, PMID: 32517536). This lack of clarification is a major limitation of the current manuscript version. It seems more appropriate for this study to evaluate the association of aortic calcification and extent of aortic dissection and other properties of the aorta. 3. Methods: Line 88-89 should be revised to examine the association of aortic calcification with the extent of aortic dissection. 4. Results: The extent of dissection from pre- to post-op needs to be evaluated; otherwise, the reader does not know if the outcome changed. 5. Discussion: This manuscript has a small sample size with the possibility of having a straightforward objective and conclusion. The sample size is a limitation, but this is overcome if the authors remain focused on the central findings, which from my view, is the potential clinical utility of Agatston score to evaluate extent of dissection and other aortic properties. I recommend rewriting the discussion, starting with deleting the introductory paragraph of Discussion as it repeats to the Introduction and starting with “This study demonstrates…points 1-3” The subsequent paragraph should follow points 1-3 with supportive evidence. Of points 1-3, which is the most clinically important finding? Start the discussion addressing this point and then build in the other discussion points. The conclusion paragraph reiterates the results, but there is conclusion statement that tells the reader the translational importance of this work. Reworking the discussion will strengthen this manuscript. 6. Abstract: Please rewrite after revising the analysis. Reviewer #2: The authors provide an interesting and potential important manuscript describing "Aortic Agatston score correlates with the progression of acute type A aortic dissection", The main issues concerning this paper are those concerning the potential associations between Aortic Agatston score and type A aortic dissection. There are some weak points that need to be addressed by the authors Major 1. Why Agatston Score 3344 is selected as the thresholds between the high and low scores of ATAAD. 2. Some recent literature on arterial dissection and calcification needs to be cited ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Aortic Agatston score correlates with the progression of acute type A aortic dissection PONE-D-21-14950R1 Dear Dr Dashima We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Xianwu Cheng, M.D., Ph.D., FAHA Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Although the original reviewer has declined to review the revised manuscript, all of original concerns have been addressed by the authors. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-14950R1 Aortic Agatston score correlates with the progression of acute type A aortic dissection Dear Dr. Tashima: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Associate Prof. Xianwu Cheng Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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