Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-16797Acute physiological and perceptual responses to a netball specific training session in professional female netball playersPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kilduff, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The reviewers have highlighted several consequential points which need to be addressed prior to the manuscript being suitable for publication Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 06 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General Comments Thank-you for the opportunity to review your work. I enjoyed reading the manuscript and congratulate the authors on conducting this type of work in a real world high performance environment. This is not easy to do and is a great strength of the work because it maximises the applicability of the findings. The work is very clear, concise and well written. I've made some specific comments/suggestions below for the authors to consider, some of which are probably more important than others. I fully accept that there are multiple ways to do things, and the authors have clearly attempted to justify the approaches taken. My comments are obviously the view of a first time reader so I hope they might be of some use from that perspective. Specific Comments L30: What exact time does +0h refer to? I assume it refers to immediately post training but providing being specific would help the reader. L33: did you consider some threshold for the smallest important effect? A clear "difference" is one thing, but it's practical relevance is something else. You probably deal with this in detail in the methods section, and I know abstract word counts are a limitation, but a little more detail here might be useful. Introduction: this section is very nicely written and easy to read. It does a good job of highlighting the gaps in the research and the purpose of the study. Design L115: given multiple papers have suggested that jump output metrics like height (and potentially power) are not impacted by team sport performance, why did you select these variables? Other metrics reflecting change in movement strategy are likely to provide more insight and these are easily calculated or automatically available in the force plate software. L118: it may be worth justifying +24h as the final measurement point. Was there a particular reason for this? It may well limit the understanding of the extent of the post-training response. L225: is mean HR a valid representation during intermittent activity such as Netball? Did you consider applying some kind of TRIMP? L246: whilst I completely understand the thinking for your proposed method of determining a clear difference (which absolutely has merit), it doesn't appear to take into account what might be considered the smallest important effect for each variable. In order to interpret the meaningfulness of any clear difference, which seems to be key when considering the practical implications, this could be considered. Approaches such as a minimal effects test allow this but I understand could be limited for this type of work as it relies on interpretation of a p value. Other options might also be worth considering such as calculation of the Second Generation p Value (Blume et. al. 2018, Blume et. al. 2019 et. al.). Given you have also calculated the standardised effect, you might consider using established thresholds for small, medium, large etc. An important issue to consider regarding the statistical analysis is the issue of dose-response. Specifically, how does the training dose interact with the size of the pre-post training change? This kind of approach would substantially increase the implications for the work. Figures: figures are often down to personal preference in my view they don't fully convey the outcomes. Without some indication of what represents the smallest important effect, the change score +/- 95% on it's own without some reference point aren't as informative as they could be. The inclusion of the 95% CI is a nice representation of the uncertainty but perhaps consider the issue of the smallest important effect within the overall analysis approach. Granted, the figures convey the change and uncertainty relative to zero. Discussion L315: your finding that some markers had not returned to baseline at 24h post suggests measuring the response beyond this time would have been valuable. Was there a reason this wasn't done? I assume because normal training prevented it? L317: why does the fact that some variables didn't return to baseline suggest training should be modulated to account for residual effects of the previous training bout? Should always be conducted in an "optimal state"? You suggest some reasons later on (L381) why training in a fatigued state may be problematic but there may well be situations where you deliberately train in fatigued state (e.g. for technical, physical and psychological reasons). Our field seems to have gone too far down the path of avoiding training so these other aspects may be worth of mention. In addition, without consideration of the dose-response aspect mentioned earlier, any changes could be unimportant. This section is also well written. It flows really well and like the rest of the work is easy to read. Based on your approach the points are appropriate, however I feel that the insight provided is somewhat limited by the depth of analysis. As a result, I think the impact of the work on practice could actually be higher. Reviewer #2: Dear editor and authors Thank you for allowing me to give my opinion on this interesting paper. Overall, the paper is well written and presents some interesting finding about the acute biochemical, physical and perceptual responses to a single training session. Main strengths - The manuscript is well written and clearly structured. - The used methods are well described and the results are well presented. - Working on elite/professional athletes is extremely interesting due to the paucity of literature regarding this specific population. Main limitations - The rational of the study is not enough convincing. What gap of the literature/knowledge is the study trying to fill? - The study is purely descriptive. - There was no control group, although acknowledged as a limitation, the study lacks for an essential pillar of scientific research. The main question is “the biochemical responses to a single netball training session are as follow”, but compared to what? To what magnitude/extent? - The use of control group (professional male netball athletes, resistance or endurance training session, another team sport specific training session; e.g., football, rugby, basketball, etc.) is essential to measure the magnitude of the effect. - There was neither randomization nor power calculation. How the authors know the required number of participants to detect a significant effect? - There was little to no informations about the inclusion criteria. - The study involved only netball athletes, which would limit the generalization of the current findings on other sport discipline. Minor comments Line 81: to effectively plan the content For instance, the increase of testosterone and cortisol at +0h could be related to dehydration. The composition, details, and the potential effect of the standardized meal on the subsequent biochemical results is not discussed. The circannual (during which month) and circadian (time of the day) information of the study are not reported despite being discussed in the discussion section. Presenting the actual data mean and standard deviation with the classical p value would be more informative, especially when the authors compared the current to former results in the discussion section. L 328: I do not think that muscle repair would occur immediately after the exercise to be accountable for higher neuromuscular performance. Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review the study “Acute physiological and perceptual responses to a netball specific training session in professional female netball players.” The article is very well written, with a clear aim. The study design was well thought out and being able to complete this study in this level of athletes is commendable. The discussion section could have some more in depth comparisons to previous studies, specifically pulling out the results / data of previous studies and comparing these to the present study. Furthermore, the discussion section would benefit from drawing some further concluding statements / ideas on the findings. Overall it is very well written and adds much needed information of the training demands and subsequent recovery in elite female netball athletes that is currently lacking so well done. Specific Comments: Introduction Page 4, Line 81 – wording correction needed, change to ‘…effectively plan the content…’ currently reads as ‘…effectively the plan content…’ Methods Design Section Page 6, Line 119 – Consider moving the sentence ‘The above measures were repeated two (+2h) and 24 h (+24h) post-training’ to the end of the paragraph (line 125) to show the timeline of data collection more accurately. Page 9, Line 203 – Was this ‘standardised warm-up’ the same as the warm up described prior to the training session? If not, please provide details of what was included in this warm up. Page 9, Line 214 – Change word ‘were’ to ‘was’ ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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