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| Original SubmissionOctober 6, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32125Temporal and spatial dynamics in soil acoustics and their relation to soil animal diversity.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maeder, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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It is a little stretch to claim that their research is the first one to relate the biodiversity of the soil to soundscape. Both reviewers did a good job suggesting critical references. Please consider including a faunal data set as reviewer 2 suggested which I believe improves the quality of the paper. Overall it is very good paper. Please resubmit with revisions. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? 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The overall aim of the study was to test the hypothesis if soil meso- and macrofauna diversity and composition can be predicted by the complexity of soil soundscapes in both space and time. The study was part of the research project “Sounding soil” of which I have been keen to see scientific results published. Soil acoustic methods have the potential to be a very helpful tool in urgently needed soil biodiversity monitoring, but the available research is quite scarce so far and mainly focused on pest insects. Thus, this manuscript is very timely and it offers very interesting insights into several methodological and ecological aspects of soil acoustic studies. I have some major comments regarding the manuscript, but I hope to see it published soon as it is a very good addition to the currently available soil acoustic literature. Major comments I see a bias in the reference list. For me it looks like the authors came from a perspective of acoustics in aboveground ecology and then transferred this perspective to the soil. I am missing references to some relevant soil acoustic studies which someone would cite coming from a belowground perspective (see minor comments for examples). The discussion has some repetition in the first part (lines 448 – 480). Lines 459 – 463 would actually be a better start sentence for the entire discussion and then the first three paragraphs could be merged and restructured. You write a lot about the relationship between ACI and microclimatic conditions. It sounds kind of general, like you did it for the entire study period, but you only modeled it for 35 days. Do you think, you would have gotten another result if you modeled it for example for April 2019? Minor comments Line 80: Reference 16 doesn’t really refer to the acoustic detection of soil pests. Referencing one of the papers from Mankin et al. or “Zhang et al. (2003): Acoustic estimation of infestations and population densities of white grubs (Coleoptera: Scarabaeidae) in turfgrass.” would be more fitting here. Line 82 – 84: I would see the paper of “Mankin et al. (2007): Acoustic Indicators for Mapping Infestation Probabilities of Soil Invertebrates” as already one of the papers going into the direction of acoustically surveying soil animal biodiversity on spatial and temporal scales, although they didn’t target the entire soil fauna. Lines 117 – 118: Would you still stand by this after looking at, for example, Mankin et al. (2007) and “Inyang et al. (2019): Subterranean Acoustic Activity Patterns of Vitacea polistiformis (Lepidoptera: Sesiidae) in Relation to Abiotic and Biotic Factors”? Lines 142 – 149: This paragraph would fit better in the introduction. Line 162: Which soil depth did they cover? Line 166: Just to make sure I understand it correctly: You recorded the soundscape every 10 minutes for 10 seconds? Why are there 20 seconds in Fig. 2? Check if all products have a complete reference, e.g. line 176: PlantCare Miniloggers (PlantCare AG, Russikon, Switzerland). (What sensor length did you get for the Miniloggers? ST?) Line 209: What does ‘selectively’ mean here? Did you just randomly pick out audio recordings or was there still any kind of selection criteria involved? Line 243: Why does this reduce the influence of the distance between microphones? Line 249: Is there a reference for Pieretti’s method? What did your own function contribute to calculating the ACI which was not already included in the function acoustic complexity? Line 294: Which version of ‘rstan’? It is not in the reference list. Line 303: Why this specific interval of 35 days for the analysis? Line 362 ff.: What uncertainty measures are shown in the brackets? Looking at Fig. 3, the 95 % is missing as information in the text. Lines 492f.: “Different taxa most likely produce different sounds…” Do you think different taxa could not only be producers of sound, but also passively affect sound properties in the same way as soil particles do (sound dispersion and attenuation)? See also line 509. Lines 494 – 496: Really? Don’t quite get the argument here. Line 499: Did you also have experience with strong wind effects on audio recordings? Line 520: Possible reference for sound identification: Görres & Chesmore (2019): Active sound production of scarab beetle larvae opens up new possibilities for species-specific pest monitoring in soils Line 522: You don’t really discuss the limitations of your study. Lines 623-625: Remove highlighting. Between reference 54 and 55, there is one more reference. Reviewer #2: Ths is an original study in soil biodiversity, showing for the first time that soil acoustic diversity is strongly correlated with diversity and species composition of soil fauna. Even though it would have been better to sample more accurately macroinvertebrates (e.g. on a wider surface), I think that we have serious reasons to think that macroinvertebrates were scarcely represented in these dry Scots pine forest stands, but providing soil fauna data would have allowed the reader to better evaluate the quality of faunal sampling. Thus faunal data are required before final acceptance. Another (minor) concern is with the assessment (lines 82-83) that "To our knowledge, there have been no attempts to analyze soil soundscapes across temporal and spatial scales and to relate them to soil animal biodiversity". This not entirely true. Many assays have been done to investigate soil biodiversity by acoustic methods, even if these methods were less sophisticated. Among others, please refer to: https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-018-28582-9 https://www.mdpi.com/2571-8789/3/3/45 ********** 6. 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