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PONE-D-21-24588Computer-generated facial areas of interest in eye tracking research: A simulation studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Domes, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two expert reviewers have evaluated your work. Both reviewers are very positive and provide thoughtful and detailed comments that I am convinced will further strengthen your paper. I believe it will be possible to address all reviewer comments, and I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this simulation study, the authors investigate the relation between AOI size, accuracy of the gaze position signal and (in)correct classification of gaze to facial feature AOIs. The topic is relevant, and the simulations are sensible. I am therefore enthusiastic about the paper. I have only one real major comment (the first point below). However, I have a number of additional comments and suggestions that do not disqualify the relevance of the paper, but which I think can tremendously strengthen the paper and its impact. 1. As the authors currently phrase it, they investigate AOI size and accuracy of the gaze position signal. However, the third major 'factor' is the inter-AOI distance (or the size of the facial stimulus). That is, the recommendations on page 13 only hold for facial stimuli of the size used in the present study. The problem is scalable: if the inter-AOI distance doubles, and the inaccuracy doubles, the recommendation for AOI size also doubles. I strongly urge the authors to consider phrasing their problem as the combination of AOI size, inaccuracy, AND inter-AOI distance (e.g. operationalised using the AOI span measure in Hessels et al., 2016, BRM, but of course there are other ways of quantifying this). This has at least the following two advantages: - The recommendations can be made more generic; i.e. as a suggestion for AOI size given both a known accuracy and inter-AOI distance. - The authors can discuss reasonable inter-AOI distance to be expected in interactive setups, and the fact that this is often close to the inaccuracies that may be expected (in my experience with dual eye-tracking setups, inter-AOI distances of 2 deg and inaccuracies of 1-1.5 deg are not uncommon). 2. The analyses reported in Figure 3 and 4 (and the corresponding Results sections) contain 3 accuracy levels (0.5, 1.0, 1.5 deg) and (for figure 3) three AOI sizes (1.0, 1.5, and 2.0 deg). Why are these accuracy levels and AOI sizes used? Given that it is a simulation study, why not simulate the entire range from 0 deg (or 0.3 which seems to be roughly the lower limit for modern video-based eye trackers) to 4 deg (or something like twice/thrice the AOI span)? Such an analysis would allow readers to pick the AOI size for a given prop. (in)correct classification. (I understand that for the confusion matrices, it is not practical to do a continuous analysis) 3. In many instances, the authors write "data ..." for something that could be made explicit. A number of examples: - "Data accuracy". Do the authors mean accuracy of the gaze position signal? - "Data validity". I am unsure what this means. Data cannot be 'invalid' to me. Do the authors mean that the conclusion that one looks at a certain facial feature based on those data would be invalid? - "Data simulation". Exactly what is meant with data here? - "Data distribution". Do the authors mean the distribution of fixation positions? Or the distribution of the inaccuracy? I suggest making all instances of "data ..." explicit whenever possible. 4. I am struggling to follow along with exactly what was simulated (e.g. lines 108-122). Perhaps a flowchart could help here, or at least some redundancy in the writing. Can it be made explicit here how many fixations where simulated for each AOI/stimulus/accuracy values/participants/etc. 5. Although I am trained as a psychologist and have been bombarded with the terms Type I and Type II, I always forget them. I understand the authors' choice for using these terms, but the reader (at least this one) could be helped by redundancy at some instances (e.g. double-coding it with other terms such as 'hit' or 'false alarm', or writing the explanation in parentheses). 6. The authors use the LRVT radius as an operationalisation for AOI size. This could also be reiterated at several locations in the text when the authors write AOI size. In my experience, it is not obvious that the AOI size is operationalised by a radius for novice readers. Details in order of appearance: Title. The title seems to misrepresent the topic: it's about choosing AOI size, not the fact that the AOIs are computer-generated. Why not something like: - How to choose area-of-interest size for facial areas in interactive eye tracking? - Facial areas of interest in eye-tracking research: How to choose AOI size - (I'm sure there are many other great alternatives) l.95-99. This seems incomplete: it depends also on the physical size of the screen on which it is displayed. This could be inferred from the size in degrees, but redundancy may be beneficial to the reader here. l.105-106. Rephrase sentence. It seems grammatically off. Figure 1. Is each participant represented by one red dot? If so, can this be made explicit? l.134-136. What was the motivation for the 4 deg radius in previous research? And how was that used to choose the 2 deg radius here? l.168. What is 'condition' here? Maybe I missed it, but here I already forgot. Can this be made explicit? Section 3.2. This analysis depends drastically on the distance between the simulated fixation point and the AOI borders. However, this information is not given. Can this be given? Section 3.3. The analysis here is uninformative without a description of the AOI size. Can this be made explicit? l.258-261. It could be made clear that for studies investigating such participants groups or such viewing-strategies, it thus makes sense to consider an AOI for that particular location (or, alternatively, to take an AOI-free approach to check for such potential strategies). Reviewer #2: see document - apparently I have to write 200 characters here. Lorem Ipsum sum, the rest I forgot. I liked the paper btw. - still eighty characters to go! Now it is only thirty characters... ok here we go ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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How to choose the size of facial areas of interest in interactive eye tracking PONE-D-21-24588R1 Dear Dr. Domes, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Guido Maiello Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Thank you for adressing all my concers. This is a super nice and open manuscript. Well done, keep up the good, helpful and important work! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Benedikt Ehinger |
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