Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-32011 Interventions for Shiga toxin-producing Escherichia coli gastroenteritis and risk of hemolytic uremic syndrome: a population-based matched case control study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Miyairi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript focuses on a topic of potential interest. However, the manuscript has several shortcomings that preclude sound conclusions. To mention some of them, i) concern about the novelty of the study; ii) need to address in the discussion the nature of bactericidal versus bacteriostatic antibiotics; iii) need to provide in the tables the use of anti-diarrheal agents and antibiotics within distinct groups of patients; iv) unclear whether in cases treatments were counted only when they were administered before the development of HUS and whether this was comparable with the control group; v) need to elaborate on the time window of fosfomycin treatment in children with STEC-HUS, and to clarify which is the effect of fosfomycin at later time points of treatment; vi) unclear in figure 1 what is the reason for exclusion of 6668 not matched controls; vii) concern about the fact that in Table 2 cases and control cohorts are not always comparable; viii) unclear whether the observed associations are also present when comparing Stx2 infected cohorts or LPS O157 positive cohorts; ix) concern about the fact that authors’ data do not support the statement reported in lines 328-329; x) need to elaborate on the molecular mechanism of the beneficial effect of fosfomycin in STEC-HUS patients; xi) unclear whether there is any information available about the excluded patients to know if they are systematically different from those patients who were included in the analysis; xii) unclear whether the use of antibiotics look bad because they are given to sicker people, or they are bad even in equivalently sick people; xiii) need to clarify their interpretation of the difference between the unadjusted and adjusted ORs; xiv) concern about the fact that beta lactams are actually worse in adults. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 18 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PLOS One manuscript STEC-HUS and fosfomycin: The manuscript by Myojin et al. entitled “Intervention for Shiga toxin producing Escherichia coli gastroenteritis and risk of haemolytic uremic syndrome: a population-based matched case control study (reference PONE-D-21-32011)” reports on the role of antibiotics in the treatment of Shiga toxin-producing E. Coli (STEC) infections. Authors evaluate the association between treatment (antibiotics, antidiarrheal agents and probiotics) for STEC infection and HUS development. A population based matched case-control study was performed with the data from NESID from 2017 and 2018. In this period 7760 patients with STEC infection were registered. The main analysis was executed with 90 patients with HUS and 371 patients without HUS. The patient cohort is impressive and the study has been performed adequately. Important information for the clinical care of STEC HUS patients is reported. Antibiotics (especially fosfomycin) may prevent the development of HUS in children and the use of antidiarrheal agents should be avoided. Next issues need to be addressed: 1.)Line 179: In cases treatments were counted only when they were administered before the development of HUS? Was this comparable with the control group? This may include bias in the data set? 2.)Authors should elaborate on the time window of fosfomycin treatment in children with STEC-HUS? What is the effect of fosfomycin at later time points of treatment? 3.)Figure 1: What is the reason for exclusion of “6668 not matched controls”. Please specify. 4.)Table 1: You describe 182 HUS patients. In the age-distribution part only 180 patients are reported for all ages? Two patients are lacking? 5.)Table 2: Cases and control cohorts are not always comparable (for example for Stx1/Stx2 in stool, serotypes 0157 and so on). Are observed associations also present when comparing Stx2 infected cohorts or LPS 0157 positive cohorts? 6.)Line 328-329: “fosfomycin appears to be beneficial in STEC HUS patients and may avert HUS development, especially if administered early in course of illness”. Do your data also support this statement? Can you improve your illustration to support this statement? 7.)The authors should elaborate on the molecular mechanism of the beneficial effect of fosfomycin in STEC-HUS patients (see also reference 26). Advise: Moderate revision. Reviewer #2: The authors studied the association of several factors with the occurrence of HUS in the setting of STEC infection. Their analysis focused on the use of antidiarrheal drugs and antibiotics. They show that the use of antidiarrheal and the b-lactams increase the risk of HUS in this setting whereas fosfomycin decreases this risk. The main issue I have with this study is its rather limited novelty, as several previous studies had assessed this question, as stated by the authors. a) The nature of bactericidal versus bacteriostatic antibiotics should be addressed in the discussion, as the lysis of bacteria (in contrast to only inhibition of bacterial growth) may contribute to the spread of verotoxin and hence to the onset of HUS. b) The use of antidiarrheal agents and antibiotics within distinct groups of patients is not shown in the tables. Reviewer #3: A very interesting and well written paper. The early treatment of HUS is a clinically important topic. As this is a reportable condition in Japan, the likelihood of there being a large number of unreported cases that would be missing from this type of analysis is low. The conclusions are supported by the data, but are hampered by the small sample size. In particular, as the authors point out, about half of the HUS cases were not included in the study, mostly due to lack of response from the physician. My question is whether there is any information available about these excluded patients to know if they are systematically different from those patients who were included in the analysis? It is interesting that the OR for the use of the individual classes of antibiotics tend to lose their significance in the adjusted analyses. My understanding of why the authors did these analyses was to try to blunt the effect of the presenting characteristics that influence the physician decision to give antibiotics (in other words, does the use of antibiotics look bad because they are given to sicker people, or are they bad even in equivalently sick people). The authors need to be clearer about their interpretation of the difference between the unadjusted and adjusted ORs. For example, the difference in the adjusted and unadjusted ORs for beta lactam use in adults looks important to me. I’m not convinced that they are actually worse in adults. The authors should be clear about which analysis they put the most weight upon. I don’t see that same difference in adjusted and non-adjusted ORs for antidiarrheal agents, which generally look bad by either analytic technique. 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Interventions for Shiga toxin-producing Escherichia coli gastroenteritis and risk of hemolytic uremic syndrome: a population-based matched case control study PONE-D-21-32011R1 Dear Dr. Miyairi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. The revised version of the manuscript is definitely improved. The authors have properly addressed the reviewers’ comments. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the revised manuscript by Myojin et al. entitled “Intervations for Shiga toxin-producing Escherichia coli gastroenteritis and risk of haemolytic uremic syndrome: a population-based matched case control study (reference PONE-D-21-3201R1)” The authors responded well to the raised issues for the first manuscript. They performed substantial adaptations in the result plus discussion section of the revised manuscript. I think the revised version improved substantially. For me in the current form this manuscript is acceptable for publication in a future issue of PLOS ONE. Reviewer #2: The authors have adressed most of the comments and the manuscript has been improved. I have no further comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-32011R1 Interventions for Shiga toxin-producing Escherichia coli gastroenteritis and risk of hemolytic uremic syndrome: a population-based matched case control study Dear Dr. Miyairi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Giuseppe Remuzzi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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