Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 28, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-10148 “Why can’t we just skype them!” Exploration of clinicians’ decision-making regarding transfer of patient care from the emergency department to a medical assessment unit: a qualitative study PLOS ONE Dear Dr.Sonya Osborne , Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: The paper appears very interesting as it focuses on improving the evaluation process of ED patients for reducing the inappropriateness of hospital admissions. The results may be useful to future scientist conducting research in other contexts. However, in order for it to be published on PLOSONE, some changes need be made:
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Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The paper appears very interesting as it focuses on improving the evaluation process of ED patients for reducing the inappropriateness of hospital admissions. The results may be useful to future scientist conducting research in other contexts. However, in order for it to be published on plosone, some changes need to be made: 1. Re-evaluation of the title so that the content of the article is clearer 2. Deepen the discussion showing how this model can be extended to improve the process of assigning admissions in the Medical Area and specifically in the Internal Medicine Departments. Add bibliography on the procedures for admission to the Medical Area and any similar supporting models. 3. Comprehensive response to the Reviewer's 3 instructions [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear, I read your work with pleasure and interest. Your ideas are original and in my opinion they should be adopted in any hospital. I would like to keep in touch with you and your research group. Best wishes, Reviewer #3: This is an interesting paper about ED staff dynamics behind the admission of patients to MAU. The paper is well structured and conceived. The methodology is not particularly strong however, due to the design being a qualitative research conducted on a sample from a single institution. Primary data is unfortunately not available, and there is of course no trace of statistical analysis due to the research being qualitative and not quantitative. It is therefore hard to generalize the results, although they may be useful to future scientist conducting research in the same field. The authors did a good work in identifying the main factors implicated in their institution dynamics, presented their findings in an understandable form and acknowledged the limitations within the study itself, wich I believe can be recommended for publication as soon as the following minor points are solved: A) Participants: it was chosen to have a purposive sample of staff involved in the studied behaviour. Please expand on this concept, explaining: I) Why this type of sampling was optimal to the research goal, compared to others. II) If (and why) was any measure of bias reduction (I.E. sample-cherrypicking) taken, if any. III) What was the proportion of the sample, in relation of the total staff population. B) The Authors correctly followed the COnsolidated criteria for REporting Qualitative studies (COREQ); however, not all COREQ Items were reported in text. some were N\\A, but two can be easily reported: No.4) Gender No. 15) Presence of non-participants Please provide such information in-text and update Additional File 2 accordingly. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: francesco rosiello Reviewer #3: Yes: Antonio Vinci [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-21-10148R1Exploration of clinicians’ decision-making regarding transfer of patient care from the emergency department to a medical assessment unit: a qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sonya Osborne, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Most of the comments have been addressed,however in order for the paper to be published, the Authors are asked to respond appropriately to the comments of Reviewer 3, in particular on sampling size and sampling strategy, using the suggestions given by Reviewer 3.The decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria. ====================== Please submit your revised manuscript by 20 January, 2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Filomena Pietrantonio Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Most of the comments have been addressed,however in order for the paper to be published, the Authors are asked to respond appropriately to the comments of Reviewer 3, in particular on sampling size and sampling strategy, using the suggestions given by Reviewer 3. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear, thank you for your revision. I appreciated the revised draft and I hope to read the published work soon Reviewer #3: The authors addressed most of my previous comments, and I feel the quality of their work has improved. Some of the points previously raised, however, are yet to be improved: I am under the impression that the Authors interpreted some of my previos comments as an attempt of applying a quantitative methodology on their study, particularly regarding their sampling choices: I assure that this is not the case. A) Sampling size. The topic of optimal sample size in qualitative research is a debated one. As the authors wrote in their response, it is true that qualitative research is not seeking statistical significance, and that sample size has no major impact in the quality of the evidence provided. However, while it is true that even a single observation may lead to some good quality evidence, the claim that size has at least some significance in this type of research can be seen as well grounded, to the point that other authors even proposed suggestion regarding this precise matter. Cfr. (1) and (2). The information on the sheer number of adherents to a qualitative research is an information a future reader may find useful to know, in the perspective of a future evaluation of the strength of the provided evidence regardless of its quality, and also, it furthers the goal of sustaining the most transparent behavioural practices in research. Moreover, it is hard to conceive any legitimate reason not to disclose such an information, that albeit not vital for the research, is obviously known, available and easily for the Authors to provide. Actually, the authors claim in their response that "The unit of measure is the focus group, not the individual staff member". Also in the paper, page 13 lines 241-242, they write: "Two focus groups were conducted back-to-back with a total of six and nine participants, respectively". Since such information are already provided in-text, please amend the "Results" section in the abstract accordingly. Also the same reasoning was behind the request of providing the information of the proportion of the size relatively to the number of eligible participants. Again, the goal has never been the one of reaching a "statistical significance", but of providing the reader with the most comprehensive information of the research itself - even more so, since focus group composition and representativeness impact in the work generalizability - a term that, for our purposes, includes both credibility and transferability of the results. Cfr. (3), and (4). B) Sampling strategy. The authors did not provide any justification in choosing a purpositive sampling strategy, simply claiming that Purposive sampling is widely used and random sampling provide no actual benefits. Such propositions are well documented and adding this information in the text would raise its overall quality. Still, there are other sampling strategies the authors fail to address in their reasoning of why purpositive sampling was optimal to the research goal, most compared to other nonprobability sampling strategies. Cfr. (5). All other comments have been adequately addressed by the Authors. 1: Malterud K, Siersma VD, Guassora AD. Sample Size in Qualitative Interview Studies: Guided by Information Power. Qual Health Res. 2016 Nov;26(13):1753-1760. doi: https://doi.org/10.1177/1049732315617444 2: Vasileiou, K., Barnett, J., Thorpe, S. et al. Characterising and justifying sample size sufficiency in interview-based studies: systematic analysis of qualitative health research over a 15-year period. BMC Med Res Methodol 18, 148 (2018). https://doi.org/10.1186/s12874-018-0594-7. 3: Andrew Parker & Jonathan Tritter (2006) Focus group method and methodology: current practice and recent debate, International Journal of Research & Method in Education, 29:1, 23-37, DOI: https://doi.org/10.1080/01406720500537304 4: Moon, Katie, et al. “A Guideline to Improve Qualitative Social Science Publishing in Ecology and Conservation Journals.” Ecology and Society, vol. 21, no. 3, Resilience Alliance Inc., 2016, http://www.jstor.org/stable/26269983 5: DeCarlo M, Scientific Inquiry in Social Work, August 7, 2018, Open Social Work Education, available at https://scientificinquiryinsocialwork.pressbooks.com/ ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Exploration of clinicians’ decision-making regarding transfer of patient care from the emergency department to a medical assessment unit: a qualitative study PONE-D-21-10148R2 Dear Dr.Sonya Osborne, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Filomena Pietrantonio Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): All comments have been addressed and the paper is now suitable for publication. The second reviewer had already communicated that the paper was suitable for publication Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: The Authors assessed all comments in a satisfactory way and I believe the paper can be accepted for pubblication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Antonio Vinci |
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PONE-D-21-10148R2 Exploration of clinicians’ decision-making regarding transfer of patient care from the emergency department to a medical assessment unit: a qualitative study Dear Dr. Osborne: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Filomena Pietrantonio Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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