Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 14, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-29764Effects of non-aversive versus tail-lift handling on breeding productivity in a C57BL/6J mouse colonyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hull, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This paper has been reviewed by an independent reviewer as well as by the undersigned editor. In addition to my general expertise in animal welfare that I always apply in my role as editor, I have relied on my specific subject expertise on pup mortality in laboratory animal breeding. The paper is generally well written and present relevant results, but requires revision to address the issues detailed in the feedback at the bottom of this message. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 08 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: 1. Please include line references in the revised version, and refer to these in your response letter. 2. This paper applies different terms for the handling techniques than most papers in the field. Handling mice using a tunnel is usually referred to as tunnel handling, so please use that term here. Standard handling in most studies of handling method is referred to as tail handling / tail picking. However, as far as I know I have never seen tail handling being reported to be done using forceps, so your method seems to be a little different here. Perhaps it can be referred to as forceps tail picking. 3. Page 3 last sentence (the one that continues on page 4): please add a reference for this statement. 4. Page 6, last paragraph: Can you separate litters disappearing from litters having to be euthanized and provide separate figures? Please provide more information on the situations of euthanasia - what was the reason to decide to euthanize a litter? Also, were the three litters from dams found dead or euthanized because of dystocia included in the analysis? 5. Page 7 first paragraph: Please add a definition for recurrent litter loss. 6. Discussion, first paragraph: Does the definition "operationally significant (albeit statistically non-significant) increases" apply generally to the results? You address this further on in the discussion (bottom of page 8), but it becomes a little confusing as you seem to apply more than one definition of operationally significant. See "statistically-significant difference of one extra pup per litter, rather than one extra pup per pair, which was the operational criterion" versus "one extra pup weaned per pair and the magnitude of reduction in litter loss were predetermined to be operationally significant differences". Please see if you can express this in a more straightforward way. 7. Page 8 line 3: There really is very limited support in literature for infanticide being the cause of litter loss. Our most recent paper adds to the evidence that infanticide rarely is the cause when pups die: Animals 2021, 11(8), 2327; https://doi.org/10.3390/ani11082327 8. Page 8 middle of the page: The lack of an association between pup mortality and primiparity was also found by us in a retrospective study of breeding data Reproduction in Domestic Animals. doi: 10.1111/j.1439-0531.2012.02147.x. https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/epdf/10.1111/j.1439-0531.2012.02147.x 9. The standard handling method in your study is tail handling using forceps. I haven't heard of forceps handling in a very long time, and I wonder how generalisable your results are to situations where standard handling is tail handling with the human hand. Please discuss this. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Overall comments I would like to thank the authors for a well written manuscript. Their findings are interesting and novel and have the potential to have significant implications for mouse welfare and economics of mouse breeding colonies. Although their findings remain statistically insignificant, the authors include this caveat accordingly, but present convincing arguments with regards to the economic benefits regardless of the small effect size. Minor comments/suggestions The manuscript would benefit from a clearer representation of the data in the forms of its table and figures. Although I appreciate the information portrayed in Table 2, I don’t think this adds to the results section. Furthermore, the findings of one extra pup born and weaned with NAH as outlined in Figure 1 is not immediately clear. Although I appreciate its useful to demonstrate the spread of the data in terms of litter size and occurrence frequency, perhaps the addition of a cumulative number of pups for both would present the findings in a clearer manner. The same applies to the other percentage data presented in the main text, perhaps a summary table of the main findings would aid the reader. I would appreciate if the authors could include some discussion as to their ‘choice’ or ‘requirement’ for why tail handling is facilitated by forceps as this is not the standard tail handling comparison utilised in most (if not all) the current literature focused on NAH. They could then speculate whether tail handling using forceps is likely to have a greater impact on their measured effects compared to the use of fore finger and thumb. The authors should also be careful in their phrasing with regards to their data showing direct benefits to animal welfare as they do not have any direct measures of welfare presented in their manuscript (pp 7 discussion line 4). I appreciate that environment (and handling) are important factors of stress which has been shown to influence dam welfare, the fact that there is no data confirming greater stress levels means careful wording is needed. Methods section – there should be the inclusion of information with regards to the handling of adult mice taken forward for breeding. Were these tail handled up until the point of breeding? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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PONE-D-21-29764R1Effects of non-aversive versus tail-lift handling on breeding productivity in a C57BL/6J mouse colonyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hull, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been thoroughly revised and all comments in the previous round of reviews have been addressed, and there is only one minor issue that need clarifying:On lines 163-164 and on lines 175-176, you write about an increase in the proportion of all litters successfully weaned and a decrease in likelihood that an entire litter was lost prior to weaning. Can you please clarify how these results are independent? I may be misunderstanding this, but it seems to me that either a litter is successfully weaned or it is lost prior to weaning, and therefore these two results are dependent on each other, which would make it redundant to report both. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 25 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to thank the authors for their revisions to the manuscript. The manuscript is now much clearer with regards to their findings and revision to the figures aids clarity of their findings. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Jasmine M Clarkson [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Effects of non-aversive versus tail-lift handling on breeding productivity in a C57BL/6J mouse colony PONE-D-21-29764R2 Dear Dr. Hull, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, I Anna S Olsson, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-29764R2 Effects of non-aversive versus tail-lift handling on breeding productivity in a C57BL/6J mouse colony Dear Dr. Hull: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. I Anna S Olsson Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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