Peer Review History
Original SubmissionAugust 26, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-27727Impact of infectious disease consultation and antimicrobial stewardship program at a Japanese cancer center: an interrupted time-series analysisPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Itoh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: It was very interesting to read a clear description of the trends in Japanese cancer centers over the past 3 years after ID consultation and ASP intervention. Full Title, "impact" is too strong for the data presented." I think "effects" is more appropriate. Make sure bacterial genus and species names are italicized. Please check the grammar of the manuscript for minor errors. I think it is necessary to present the number of samples and isolates in each figure. Please consider adding this information. line 69: Please add "CPE" abbreviation. line 145: Enterobacterales should be changed to Enterobacteriaceae, because Enterobacterales and Enterobacteriaceae are synonymous. line 325-328: I think it would be a good idea to mention mortality from infectious diseases. line 367-370: CRE has a low isolation frequency to begin with, so it is possible that an increase in the number of specimens could increase the incidence. ESBL-producing Enterobacteriaceae is a common resistant organism, so the assessment that the detection rate increased due to underestimation before the intervention may not be true, but different factors may have been involved. Please add a discussion. line 441: Reference has blank #5. Please delete it. line 472: #14 is missing from the reference number. Table 1: "F Fitting dose": "You should replace "and" with "or" in "function and other factors". Reviewer #2: Authors demonstrate the possible casual impacts of the antimicrobial stewardship program and infectious disease consolation on the monthly days of therapy with antibiotics. Overall, the manuscript is well written and it provides helpful insight into understanding of epidemiological trends and the evaluation of the possible effects of the countermeasures. However, there are some aspects of the manuscript that could be made clearer, and I hope this suggestion make this manuscript to have the highest impact. 1. Days of therapy (DOT) In the present study, authors defined the usage of antibiotics with the DOT per month and per 100 patient-days. However, I am wondering whether the amounts or types (e.g., oral or IV) of antibiotics were almost identical over time and over patients. Because if the variations in the used amount of antibiotics are not negligible, the calculation using the DOT may provide some biases, although it still can act as an indirect indicator. If so, I would like to suggest introducing the concept of the defined daily dose (DDD) to fully consider the amount of antibiotics in each patient. 2. Interpretation of changes in shape and slope in the ITS analyses In the interrupted time-series (ITS) analyses, changes in the shape indicate the immediate effect of intervention, while the sustained effect can be represented by changes in the slope. Thus, although authors asserted that the estimated level is expected to decrease in the long-term observation (L340), the duration of observation will not affect the significance of changes in the shape. If authors tried to emphasize the expected sustained decreases in the DOT based on the significant decreases in the slope, I would like to suggest that authors can rephrase the sentence for the naïve readers. Furthermore, according to the figures (especially in Figure 1 and Figure 3), the trends of DOT were started to be mainly changed from the late 2019, regardless of the start of intervention was April 2020. Thus, I would like to suggest that authors can clarify the possible reasons of this changes in the manuscript. In addition, if authors think the start point of visual impact of countermeasures can be delayed (e.g., delayed by a certain period of time-gap from the official start time of intervention), I would like to suggest considering a sensitivity analysis by varying the start of intervention time (adjusted start time considering the time-gap), since it may change the estimated changes in the level. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Effects of infectious disease consultation and antimicrobial stewardship program at a Japanese cancer center: an interrupted time-series analysis PONE-D-21-27727R1 Dear Dr. Itoh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Hiroshi Nishiura Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All my comments were nicely addressed in the revised manuscript, and I was pleased to note that the additional analysis using DDD showed almost same results with those obtained using DOT. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
Formally Accepted |
PONE-D-21-27727R1 Effects of infectious disease consultation and antimicrobial stewardship program at a Japanese cancer center: an interrupted time-series analysis Dear Dr. Itoh: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Hiroshi Nishiura Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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