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Title: "Resilience profiles across context: a latent profile analysis in a German,
Greek, and Swiss sample"
Revised title: "Resilience profiles across context: a latent profile analysis in a
German, Greek, and Swiss sample of adolescents"
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Reviewer #1: Dear editor,
Thank you for the opportunity to review this fine and interesting paper. The article
reports the process of using LPA to test Resilience profiles across context in a German,
Greek, and Swiss sample. The manuscript is well written throughout, stating with a
good, exhaustive, and balanced introduction and ending with an adequate discussion
of the study’s findings and limitations. Below I specify some minor issues that could
help to improve the manuscript’s strength.
Authors:
Dear reviewer, many thanks for your insightful and much-appreciated feedback that
you have provided. We have revised the manuscript in response to your helpful comments
and concerns.
Abstract
1.I suggest authors change “Measurement invariance did not hold” to “Measurement invariance
did not hold across three countries…”.
Authors:
Thank you for this suggestion. We have made changes accordingly in the abstract section.
Revised Manuscript, p. 2, l. 22/23:
“Measurement invariance did not hold across the three countries.”
Reviewer 1:
2. I suggest add more information about the students (N, M, SD) and profiles (N, proportion%,
et al) in abstract section.
Authors:
Thank you also for this suggestion. We have added this information in the abstract
section.
Revised Manuscript, p. 2, l. 15-22:
“The present study investigated resilience profiles (based on levels of symptoms of
anxiety and depression and five dimensions of protective factors) of 1,160 students
from Germany (n = 346, 46.0% females, Mage = 12.77, SDage = 0.78), Greece (n = 439,
54.5% females, Mage = 12.68, SDage = 0.69), and Switzerland (n = 375, 44.5% females,
Mage = 12.29, SDage = 0.88) using latent profile analyses. We also checked for measurement
invariance and investigated the influence of gender and migration on class membership.
A three-profile-solution was found for Switzerland (nonresilient 22.1%, moderately
resilient 42.9%, untroubled 34.9%), and a four-profile-solution was the best fitting
model for Germany (nonresilient 15.7%, moderately resilient 44.2%, untroubled 27.3%,
resilient 12.7%) and Greece (nonresilient 21.0%, moderately resilient 30.8%, untroubled
24.9%, resilient 23.3%).”
Reviewer 1:
Introduction
Introduction is well written and informative. However, I have some minor remarks:
3.p.2. line 26-28 – I suggest authors add more references in this paragraph, and more
evidence need to be presented to clarify that why conduct this research.
Authors:
We agree that we can extend this paragraph even though we wanted to keep it rather
general in the beginning. Therefore, we have added references and more evidence:
Revised Manuscript, p. 2, l. 29-35:
“Instead of only understanding resilience as a linear set of causal relationships,
recent research on resilience has focused on the multisystemic aspect of the concept
(1). Resilience of human and ecological systems are mutually dependent on each other
(2) and therefore, resilience needs to be studied by taking the different contexts
of these systems and their connectivity into account. Furthermore, resilience is a
normative concept that is highly influenced by cultural aspects such as moral values,
and structural and social dimensions (3). Ungar and Theron raised the question, “Which
promotive and protective factors or processes are best for which people in which contexts
at what level of risk exposure and for which outcomes? (4)”
Reviewer 1:
4. p.3. line 40-49 – Authors introduced a cross-cultural study in detail, “These findings
can be explained by several…” I suggest authors added 1-2 sentence(s) to introduce
how several factors (the families’ socioeconomic situation or structural aspects,
parental mental health issues…) affect the proportion difference in results across
countries.
Authors:
Thank you very much for this feedback. We fully agree that because of the paper’s
focus this important aspect needs to be explained a bit more in detail. Therefore,
we have added the following sentences:
Revised Manuscript, p. 3, l. 53-59:
“These findings can be explained by several factors, such as the families’ respective
socioeconomic situation (which might be influenced by the economic situation of a
country or region) that has proven to be associated via perceived social status with
adolescents’ mental health (10). Additionally, structural aspects, such as parental
mental health issues, domestic violence, or poor peer support can influence adolescents’
mental health (9,11). All these aspects are unique but closely linked factors contributing
to adolescents’ mental health and resilience. However, the extent of influence of
each factor differs due to cultural features in a society.”
Reviewer 1:
5. I strongly suggested authors added new meta-analysis or review studies to include
some information about why it is important to contain these variables in this study.
Authors:
We have added the following paragraph to support the approach we have chosen in the
present study:
Revised Manuscript, p. 5, l. 93-107:
“A methodological review of resilience scales has already shown in 2011 (49) that
measuring resilience is challenging due to its ambiguous definition. Most of the time,
resilience is being measured as the presence or absence of assets and resources that
facilitate resilience as a process, but no “gold standard” was found among the 15
measures. Even though, resilience scales mostly cover only assets and resources, models
and concepts of resilience go beyond analyzing these aspects and include risks factors,
often focusing on the absence of negative indicators of mental health (e.g., anxiety
or depression). A meta-analysis of 31,071 participants in 33 studies investigated
the relationship between psychological resilience and relevant variables (50). All
selected articles stem from the years 2001 to 2010 and results indicated as expected
that protective factors, such as self-efficacy, life satisfaction, or optimism have
the biggest effect on resilience. In addition, medium effects were measured for risk
factors, such as depression, anxiety, or PTSD. Finally, demographic variables contributed
small effects, but were still important to resilience. Another meta-analysis supported
these findings by analyzing the relation between resilience, mental health, and demographics
in 60 studies representing 68,720 participants (51). High correlations were found
between resilience and mental health. Additionally, gender was moderating this relationship.
More attention needs to be paid to females experiencing higher levels of mental health
problems and lower levels of protective factors. Therefore, when investigating resilience,
it is crucial to not only consider the protective and risk factors but also to include
mental health aspects and demographics in the research questions.”
Reviewer 1:
Person-Centered Approaches in Resilience Research
6. Author introduce well why they used LPA to investigate resilience in this section.
However, I have some minor issues. First, I suggested each studies introduced must
include resilience profiles’ number, size, proportion et al. Which country they conducted,
they used which assessment tools. I thought these were important because this might
lead to the difference in LPA results. Besides, author argue that gender and migration
might be important, I suggest add related information in these studies.
Authors:
Thank you for your suggestions. We agree that these aspects might lead to different
LPA/LCA results. Therefore, we included all information available regarding profile
numbers, proportions, country information, assessment tools, and gender/migration
information of introduced studies:
Revised Manuscript, p. 6, l. 147-210:
“There is an increasing number of empirical studies examining profiles (aspects) of
resilience using latent class and profile analyses (LCA & LPA). A recent study from
the United Kingdom and Western Australia, for instance, focused mainly on adversity
(i.e., different configurations of lifetime adversities) and resilience resources
(i.e., bounce-back, hope, self-efficacy, and optimism) (69). The team used the adapted
version of the cumulative lifetime adversity measure (70,71), the Bounce-back ability
(72), the Adult Hope (73), the General Self-Efficacy (74) / a self-efficacy scale
by Bell and Kozlowski (75), and the Life Orientation Test-Revised Scale (76). They
conducted two separate studies with a general (N = 1,506, 48.2% females) and a university
sample (N = 348, 61.5% females). Results revealed three profiles for each sample
showing statistically different levels of resilience in the three detected classes.
For the general sample, the biggest group was the Moderate class (62.7%) followed
by the High (20.5%) and Low (16.8%) Polyadversity classes. In the university sample,
the Low (41.1%) and High Polyadversity (41.1%) classes showed identical group sizes,
while the Vicarious Adversity (17.8%) was the smallest group. Differences between
all three latent classes in both subsamples in terms of individual-level resilience
resources were mixed. Individuals in the Moderate Polyadversity class reported the
highest level of resilience in the general population study. These findings were statistically
significant when comparing the Moderate class with the High Polyadversity class, but
only partially significant (for bounce-back resilience and optimism) in comparing
the Moderate with the Low Polyadversity classes. According to Lines et al. (69) and
previous studies (77,78), a moderate amount of exposure to adversity is ideal for
opportunities to develop protective factors, and therefore to support resilience.
Furthermore, being less exposed to adversity led to more resilience resources (protective
factors) when comparing the Low and High Polyadversity classes. Being exposed to a
high amount of adversity is highly detrimental regarding the availability of protective
factors. Additionally, being exposed to fewer adversities might give fewer opportunities
to develop necessary resilience resources compared to a moderate amount of adversities.
Additionally, gender differences were detected in both samples. Females were more
likely than males to be part of the High Polyadversity class than the Vicarious Adversity
or Low Polyadversity classes in the university sample, while males were more likely
to be part of the Low Polyadversity class compared to the Moderate Polyadversity class
in the general sample. No information was given on migration background.
Another study focusing on mental health classifications examined profiles of American
high school students (N = 332, 48.5% females) over 3 years using a dual-factor construct
of mental health (79). Measurements used included the Social-Emotional Health Survey-Secondary
(80) and the Strengths and Difficulties Questionnaire (81). Independent LPAs for each
grade (9–12) based on four positive mental health domains and internalizing and externalizing
problems revealed four distinct subgroups— Complete Mental Health, Moderately Mentally
Healthy, Symptomatic but Content, and Troubled. Like the general population sample
in the study mentioned above (69), most students were in the Complete (30.5% Grade
9, 40.8% Grade 10, 20.5% Grade 11) or Moderately Mentally Healthy (43.4%, 32.0%, 44.3%)
classes. The Troubled class (5.7%, 6.0%, 3.8%) represented the smallest number of
individuals across all grades, while the Symptomatic but Content class (20.3%, 21.2%,
31.3%) was between these classes. Higher levels of distress and lower levels of strength
were reportedly associated with fewer symptoms of anxiety and depression. No further
investigations on gender and migration background were made.
This four-profile-solution was confirmed by Reinhardt et al. (82) based on three well-being
indicators (emotional, psychological, and social aspects), resulting in the Languishing,
Moderate Mental Health, Emotionally Vulnerable, and Flourishing classes. 1,572 (51%
females) Hungarian adolescents filled out a questionnaire including the Adolescent
Mental Health Continuum – Short Form (83) and the Strength and Difficulties Questionnaire
(81). 39% were part of the Moderate Mental Health group, 11% belonged to the Emotionally
Vulnerable class. The Languishing class, including 14% of the sample, reported low
levels of prosocial behavior, high rates of peer problems, and loneliness. In contrast,
lower levels of loneliness, more prosocial behavior, and fewer emotional problems
and peer problems predicted the Flourishing class (36%) in comparison to the Languishing
class. Furthermore, the Flourishing category included more males and younger adolescents
compared to the Languishing group. No further gender differences were reported, nor
was any information on migration background.
Two further recent studies focused on risk and protective factors. Mohanty et al.
(84) were able to demonstrate that protective factors on all levels might play a crucial
role in preventing the occurrence of risks in their three classes: Moderate (39.5%),
Protective (34.3%), and High-risk (26.2%). In the study, 953 (67.2% females) participants
answered a questionnaire including two items measuring pre-adoption risk (85), eleven
self-created items about post-adoption risk (84), the Multidimensional Scale of Perceived
Social Support (86), and a single item asking “how many close friends do you have?”.
Findings suggest that social support in particular ameliorated negative effects of
risks. More males were part of the Moderate class, while more females were part of
the Protective and High-risk classes. Migration background has not been investigated.
Finally, a four-class-solution is supported by Altena et al. (87), confirming that
accumulated protective factors are important in preserving a certain quality of life.
Findings resulted in the four classes, High-Risk and Least Protected (24%), Higher
Functioning and Protected (14%), At-Risk (45%), and Low-Risk (17%) classes. 251 adolescents
(32% females) participated in the study that were asked as a single item whether they
have been abused. Furthermore, they answered questions from the Lehman Quality of
Life Interview (88), the Brief Symptom Inventory-53 (89), the European Addiction Severity
Index (90), the Resilience Scale (91) and the Cognitive Emotion Regulation Questionnaire
(92). No gender differences existed between the subgroups and migration background
was not investigated in the study.
However, both studies included a very specific sample. Mohanty et al. (84) focused
on Korean adult international adoptees, whereas Altena et al. (87) investigated homeless
young adults in the Netherlands. Thus, findings need to be treated with caution when
comparing to more general samples.”
Reviewer 1:
Statistical Analyses
7.p.11. line 269 – MI is necessary when comparing various groups, but why MI across
gender and migration were not tested in the present study? I suggest present it in
the 3.3 section.
Authors:
Thank you for this very interesting point. We fully agree and acknowledge your concern
that MI across gender and migration background are also important and should be further
investigated. Therefore, we had it already mentioned in the limitations section. However,
the aim of this paper was giving a first insight into the country-differences and
using gender and migration background solely as predictive variables. We believe that
investigating MI across gender and migration background within each country sample
and across the entire sample would result in completely new research questions, which
is beyond the scope of the present paper. Such questions may be:
(1.1) How many resilience profiles based on symptoms (depression and anxiety) and
protective factors (personal competence, social competence, structured style, social
resources, and family cohesion) can be found for females and males across the entire
sample?
(1.2) How many resilience profiles based on symptoms (depression and anxiety) and
protective factors (personal competence, social competence, structured style, social
resources, and family cohesion) can be found for females and males within each country-sample?
(1.3) How many resilience profiles based on symptoms (depression and anxiety) and
protective factors (personal competence, social competence, structured style, social
resources, and family cohesion) can be found for migrants and natives across the entire
sample?
(1.4) How many resilience profiles based on symptoms (depression and anxiety) and
protective factors (personal competence, social competence, structured style, social
resources, and family cohesion) can be found for migrants and natives within each
country-sample?
(2.1) Do identical resilience profiles exist across gender across the entire sample?
(2.2) Do identical resilience profiles exist across gender within each country-sample?
(2.3) Do identical resilience profiles exist across migration background across the
entire sample?
(2.4) Do identical resilience profiles exist across migration background within each
country-sample?
(3) Are e.g. socioeconomic status and age predictors of these latent resilience profiles?
etc.
Additionally, the samples are quite small for further distinction between females/males
and migrants/natives within the country-samples. The distribution for each profile
would shrink to approximately half the sample size. Nevertheless, we are also very
interested in these findings but we would prefer to run these analyses separately
and rigorously – if even possible. Still, we have expanded on what we already had
mentioned in the limitations section:
Revised Manuscript, p. 27, l. 609-614:
“Finally, examining the predictive value of gender and of migration background could
be questionable considering that resilience is a group-specific construct. Measurement
invariance across groups (such as gender and migration background) should be conducted
to check for the comparability of these groups. It is possible that females and males
would show significantly different profiles when compared separately within each country
sample and across the entire sample. The same applies for migration background. Therefore,
the results concerning group membership should be interpreted with caution.”
Reviewer 1:
Discussion
8. p.20. line 423-438 Its very interesting that only Switzerland sample could yield
a 3-profile solution but four in Germany and Greece sample although in nearly the
same sample size. I suggest author also present several sentences to clarify 3-profile
solution of Germany and Greece sample, I assumed that Resilient profile might be absorbed
in certain profile (perhaps untroubled profile). I thought the 3-profile solution
plots might be similar across three countries. I suggest this should be discussed
more in this section.
Authors:
Thank you very much for this highly appreciated input. We agree that the resilient
profile has been absorbed in certain profiles, probably mainly in the untroubled profile.
However, it is also very likely that the resilient profile has been absorbed in the
nonresilient profile in Germany and in the moderately resilient profile in Greece.
Therefore, we have added several sentences in this paragraph, clarifying the 3/4-profile
solution of Germany and Greece.
Revised Manuscript, p. 22, l. 469-479:
“Even though we chose the best-fitting four-profile solution for the German and Greek
data, model fit values were acceptable for a three-profile solution too. It is not
obvious why the German and Greek models are more nuanced and differ from the Swiss
model with only three profiles. However, it is possible that the resilient profile
in the German and Greek models are absorbed in different profiles. When investigating
the distributions of the profiles in each country and comparing them, we can see that
the untroubled group is clearly smaller in both four-profile models compared to the
Swiss model. The resilient group shares high levels of protective factors comparable
to the untroubled ones. Furthermore, there are less nonresilient students in the German
sample that have similar levels of symptoms compared to the resilient group, whereas
less pupils are part of the moderately resilient group in the Greek sample. In the
moderately resilient profile of the Greek model, protective factor levels are closer
to the resilient and untroubled group compared to the symptom levels. Therefore, it
is possible that more adolescents were absorbed from the moderately resilient group
to the resilient group in the Greek model.”
Authors:
Again, we would like to thank you for your helpful and much appreciated feedback!
We hope that by considering all of your supportive feedback, we have increased the
quality of the paper significantly.
Reviewer #2: Thanks for inviting me to review this paper, entitled “Resilience profiles
across context: a latent profile analysis in a German, Greek, and Swiss sample”. Generally,
this study is well organized with a clear research question, comprehensive literature
review and technically sound analyses. It shows that the patterns of resilience profiles
are different in different cultures: a three-profile-solution for Switzerland, and
a four-profile solution found for Germany and Greece. The findings shed lights on
the question “Which promotive and protective factors or processes are best for which
people in which contexts at what level of risk exposure and for which outcomes?”.
However, I also have some minor concerns as follows:
Reviewer 2:
1. I noted that the participants in the current study are all adolescents aged between
11- and 16-year-old, not including anyone with other age. Given that, it is better
for you to focus on that specific group and limit the subject of the current study
to adolescents since the results may not necessarily be generalized to other groups
with other age (e.g., adults).
Authors:
Thank you very much for this input. We completely agree, and have changed the title
accordingly to show that our focus is solely on adolescents.
Revised Manuscript, p. 1, l. 0:
“Resilience profiles across context: a latent profile analysis in a German, Greek,
and Swiss sample of adolescents”
Reviewer 2:
2. I feel a little bit confused how you measured resilience and what you based on
to conduct a LPA (the basis for categorization). I thought resilience was measured
with READ, including personnel competence, social competence, structured style, social
resources, and family cohesion. But I noticed that you reported the comparisons results
across resilience profiles on anxiety, depression, as well as the five protective
factors measured with READ (in Table 3). If you measured resilience with READ and
categorized the sample based on that, why did you then compare the determined profiles
resulting from the five factors on these five factors?
Authors:
We apologize for causing any confusion.
It is correct that we have not only included the READ into our analyses but also the
HSCL-25 (anxiety and depression). The READ only measures protective factors in the
five subdimensions (personal competence, social competence, structural style, social
resources, and family cohesion). Our resilience model goes beyond investigating solemnly
protective factors (that are nevertheless very important) by expanding the model with
levels of symptoms. As shown in the analyses, resilience is highly dependent on protective,
risk factors and symptoms. Therefore, we have added the symptoms as additional information
about the adolescents’ resilience and determined the profiles on these seven indicators.
Otherwise, we would have analyzed protective factor profiles with a different resilience
measurement model.
Revised Manuscript, p. 5, l. 108-116:
“For several decades, resilience scientists have been on a prolonged mission to understand
mental health issues to prevent and treat them by examining risk and protective factors.
Instead of focusing on pathways leading toward psychopathology in pathogenesis, resilience
research arose from attempts to account for both positive and negative patterns (52)
based on a salutogenic approach to health (53). Despite definitional ambiguity, newer
definitions reflect the perspective of resilience as a complex, dynamic, and adaptive
system that goes beyond the idea of an individual bouncing back and recovering from
a traumatic experience. For the purpose of this paper, we define resilience according
to Masten as “the capacity of a dynamic system to adapt successfully to disturbances
that threaten systemic function, viability, or development” (30). This definition
does not only accentuates the multisystemic nature of resilience but subsequently
acknowledges the importance of cultural narratives and contextual realities in mental
health and resilience research (1,4,54,55).”
Reviewer 2:
3. I agree that the limitations you highlighted are much needed to improve this study.
Apart from that, I am interested in why you considered the three cultural contexts:
German, Greece, and Switzerland. Because of convenient sampling or other reasons?
Authors:
Thank you very much for giving us the chance to clarify this point. The three countries
were included because of the initial aim of the entire research project. As mentioned
in the materials and methods section, the data was collected as part of a NCCR – on
the move project. All projects funded by the NCCR – on the move lay strong focus on
migration and mobility. Since Greece has been a very important country for migrants
as a first arrival and transit country, and Germany and Switzerland are common countries
where migrants seek permanent residence, these three countries were chosen as part
of the project Overcoming Inequalities with Education – School and Resilience. However,
the present study does not lay such strong focus on the migration aspects and therefore,
data was used for the present research questions.
Reviewer 2:
4. Please pay more attention to the formatting rules. For example, the punctuation
sign may be lost after the phrases of “in their three classes” at the end of page
6 (Line 156).
Authors:
Our sincerest apologies for mistakes in the formatting style. We have made changes
across the whole manuscript according to the formatting rules of PLOS ONE. All headings,
figure labels and document names have been changed.
Reviewer 2:
Hope these comments are helpful for you.
Authors:
Indeed, thank you very much for your much appreciated and helpful feedback! We hope
that we were able to increase the quality of the present paper by considering all
of your supportive feedback.
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