Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 9, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-22424 Effects of problem-based learning modules within blended learning courses in medical statistics - randomized controlled pilot study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bukumirić, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. While both reviewers recognized the value and contribution of your study, both noted significant issues with the manuscript, in particular around reporting of study's methodology. Take a detailed look at the provided comments, I hope you find the feedback useful and reviewers' comments constructive. I'm looking forward to reading the revised manuscript. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review your manuscript. I have provided some potential suggestions for edits. Of note, it may be helpful to work with someone regarding the syntax and diction--there were several grammatical errors and challenges with the flow that could make the manuscript more impactful. INTRO - Provide a nice summary of applicable research and outline specifically the application to medical statistics. Would suggest to explore if there are publications on medical statistics / epidemiology teaching practices broadly in the literature. It may be helpful to put this within the context of other work there, not necessarily just PBL related. - Several grammatical errors (e.g., "there were no studies on problem-based blended learning method for teaching the medical statistics) METHODS - Love that this was an RCT, we don't get to see that often! The main question is about the fidelity of the work--how did you prevent students from sharing information or resources? - I don't understand the statement "the students passed the exam in medical statistics during the study". Is that more of a result? - Can you provide more information about the context of the course this activity was embedded within? Also to double-check, there are normally 53 students in the program correct? Or was this the number who consented to participate. - May be helpful to reference Figure 1 earlier in the methods when discussing the steps that the students went through. - A summary table of the assessment activities may also be useful. Could you also provide a sample, maybe in an appendix to know what these activities looked like, time dedicated to them, etc. - I have difficulty following how there was significant difference between the two groups or how they were sufficiently separated for the purpose of the study. Can you please provide more details about how their experiences differed based on the random assignment. - It is not clear what assessment activities are included and how the relates to the linear regression. More details are needed. How were the problem solving and medical statistics score measured? What are the total possible scores? Have they been used in other settings that showcase how well they measure those two abilities? Etc. Since these are essential for interpreting the results more details are needed about the reliability and validity of these results. RESULTS - Can you please clarify "the grade expected" since these are number values; for international audience this may be useful if they are used to letters, etc. - "The exam was passed" in the table is also confusing. I'm not sure what this means, the number of people who passed? What qualifies as passing the exam and when is the exam administered? - Do you have the correlation between the problem solving and medical statistics scores, it would be curious to see the extent of their relationship to one another. - For Likert scales, it's generally inappropriate to summarize at average/median levels. Instead, it is preferred to illustrate the number of individuals who responded with each choice. DISCUSSION - More comparison of statistical versus "clinical" significance may be necessary. The mean scores differed by 1-2 points, is that truly significant beyond statistically? - Unfortunately, more details are needed about the methodology to evaluate the discussion appropriately. Reviewer #3: Dear authors, Congratulations on the work developed and submitted to this journal, on the effects of problem-based learning (PBL) modules within blended learning (BL) courses in medical statistics, by running a randomized controlled trial. Your aim was to assess the efficacy of PBL modules implemented within the blended-learning courses in medical statistics through the knowledge outcomes and student satisfaction. Considering the above mentioned as a head start for the review, below you will find some comments on each section that should be addressed. - Abstract Section: Whilst being overall well written, this particular section should be restructured in order to be more appealing for the reader. There is an excess of abbreviations which lead to a sense of confusion. Additionally, it should mention briefly the future steps of this project. - Introduction Section: This particular section is underexplored. Some questions that should guide your thoughts while adding some important information are the reason why PBL methods can be important on the subject of medical statistics and the particular subset of skills that a medical student is supposed to develop from this curricula. Additionally, once you set out to explore knowledge outcomes and student satisfaction, there are previously conducted studies that explore these variables with future medical skills, so what is really the importance of student satisfaction on continuing learning profiles, e.g.? The last paragraph should be fully restructured, as it is one of the most important ones for the reader, since it is the last one before the next Materials and Methods section. I would advise to begin with the aim of the study and only then advance to the design made. Also, some english grammar errors were found, which are described below. Line 37 - Where written "In the past decade, there are increasing (...)" change for "In the past decade, there is an increasing (...)" Line 49 - Where written "During learning process the students (...)" change for "During the learning process, students (...)" Line 50 - Where written "They" change for "The students" or "Students" Paragraph 57 - Where written "To the best of our knowledge, there were no studies on problem-based blended learning method for teaching the medical statistics." change for "To the best of our knowledge, there are no previous studies on the problem-based blended learning method for medical statistics teaching." - Materials and Methods Section: First and foremost, once being a randomized controlled trial, it would be optimal to have it registered at the clinicaltrials.gov platform. Further on, the authors mention that an informed consent was obtained, however there is no reference on how. It is my opinion that these paragraphs 73/74/75 should add the environment in which the consent was obtained, to avoid any coercion interpretations. Additionally, you mention an anonymous online questionnaire for the assessment of the student satisfaction of the hPBL group. Was this preceded by a mandatory informed consent? How was the data managed and stored? Who had access to it? Were an IP addresses collected? Overall, this section needs more work, mainly at the description of the method itself. I would a recomend a major revision of the english used, as well as the review of the duplicated information. Some sentences are in reality avoidable, because they are the continuation of the last. Line 76 - Where written "The study began on the 1st of October, 2019 (...)" change for "The study began on October 1st, 2019 (...) Line 77 - Where written "was completed at the end of school year (30.09.2020)" change for "was completed at the end of school year (September 30th, 2020)." Lines 84/85 - Where written "Ministry of education, science and technological development of the Republic of Serbia" change for "Ministry of Education, Science and Technological Development of the Republic of Serbia" Paragraph 86 - Should be rewritten, since there is repeated information. Lines 106/107 - Rewrite the following sentence "All the necessary information is given to students during the lectures and exercises in the materials in the blended- learning course.". Suggestion: "All the necessary information was given to students during the lectures, while the exercises and materials where given at the blended-learning course." Lines 126/127/128 - Where written "Anonymous online questionnaire with the five-point Likert scale (1 point- low satisfaction, 5 points- high satisfaction) was used to assess the satisfaction of the students in the hPBL group with the PBL modules." change for "An anonymous online questionnaire with the five-point Likert scale (1 point- low satisfaction, 5 points- high satisfaction) was used to assess the satisfaction of the students in the hPBL group with the PBL modules.". - Results Section: This section is well presented and clear. I would suggest that in line 139, where written "There were no differences between (...)", the authors change for "There were no statistically significant differences between (...)". - Discussion Section: The discussion section is well explored and written. - Conclusions Section: The conclusions are both supported by the results obtained in the present study, as well as previous studies. This article has some flaws as pointed above, for each section. 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