Peer Review History
Original SubmissionAugust 26, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-27571Racial Disparities in Cardiac Transplantation: Chronological Perspective and OutcomesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Trivedi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please ensure that the definitions on race and ethnicity are in line with the instruction to authors. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this paper, authors aimed to evaluate annual heart transplant volumes and 3-year post-transplant outcomes of patients in UNOS database stratifying them by race. The topic is interesting and deserves space, however a very recent article has been already published from UNOS database: Chouairi F. et al. Evaluation of Racial and Ethnic Disparities in Cardiac Transplantation. J Am Heart Assoc. 2021 Sep 7;10(17):e021067. For this reason, I would suggest: 1) to add some comments on this recent paper, where the data about the increased number in transplant listing of Black patients are similar, but the data on mortality seems different, as far as Chouairi showed a higher risk of post‐transplantation death for Black patients, not confirmed here. 2) it would be interesting to compare this data with those ones on other solid organs, such as lung transplant patients too (Riley LE, Lascano J. Gender and racial disparities in lung transplantation in the United States. J Heart Lung Transplant. 2021 Sep;40(9):963-969. doi: 10.1016/j.healun.2021.06.004. Epub 2021 Jun 12). 3) how do the authors explain that Black patients were transplanted less but their time in the waiting list is shorter than white patients? 4) I think that it is not very appropriate the use of some sentences in the Discussion, such as "Black lives did not matter" and “Black lives have mattered more now”, I would suggest to re-phrase these sentences without this provocative tone; 5) In the Introduction, where the authors briefly summarized the novelties on heart transplantation during the different eras (cyclosporine, MCS, ex vivo perfusion...), it would be interesting to cite also the fact that the recipients selection is expanding over the years, whereas some diagnosis that were considered contraindicated for heart transplants some years ago have reached the candidability in the recent time (see for example Di Nora C. Heart transplantation in cardiac storage diseases: data on Fabry disease and cardiac amyloidosis. Curr Opin Organ Transplant. 2020 Jun;25(3):211-217). 6) did the authors test in the multivariate logistic regression also these variables: mismatch D/R? pulmonary artery pressure? IABP or other MCS support befor heart transplantation? 7) Black recipients are less than White ones across the eras, but also Black donors are less compared to Black ones. I think that this concept deserves some comments on the Discussion (Is it due to the allocation system?) Minor points: - correct the spelling in Table 5 - In the Introduction, authors cited ex-vivo perfusion, however, they did not use any references on ex-vivo perfusion, I suggest to add almost one about it, see for example: Sponga S et al Heart transplant outcomes in patients with mechanical circulatory support: cold storage versus normothermic perfusion organ preservation. Interact Cardiovasc Thorac Surg. 2021 Apr 8;32(3):476-482. Reviewer #2: The Authors of the manuscript, entitled "Racial Disparities in Cardiac Transplantation: Chronological Perspective and Outcomes", present data from United Network for Organ Sharing (UNOS) database stratified by race with focus on changes in the course of the last 30 years. They analyzed data of 105266 adults listed for heart transplantation and 67824 who have been transplanted. The important message is the improvement in the accessibility and survival after heart translantation of Black patients. The advantage of the manuscript is the clear message based on the high number of cases coming from long term registry. The registry covered demographic and clinical data. The manuscript can be valuable for PLOS ONE but the quality of this work requires improvement. Comments: 1. Introduction: - The abbreviation UNOS was not explained in the text, only was mentioned in the abstract. 2. Methods: - Please report the number of centers and characterise the registry. - Please describe the method of data acquisition, data verification, method of data quality check, missing values imputation, if done? - The number of missing data in relation to the presented variables should be presented in the main tables or as the supplement. - What was the rationale for using logistic regression? For mortality analysis it is more reasonable to use the cox regression model. 3. Results: - Please consistently present p-values where differences between groups are presented. - Tables: Some of the variables are in abbreviation but the abbreviations are not explained, for example BMI, PA, CHD, etc only ECMO is explained. The Authors did not payed enough attention to the quality of data presentation. The units are missing. - In the section post-transplant survival outcomes Authors describe the changes in the mortality. We can observe numerical differences and suggestive changes in the course of different periods. Testing for difference was performed only in one place. - In the Table 3 - Three-year post-transplant survival stratified by race and type of insurance there is not shown any p-value. I would suggest adding p-value for testing between races in a specific subgroups. - The BMI, ECMO abbreviation is not explained inthe text. - Table 4: It is not clear if presented odds ratios with 95% limits are for univariate or multivariate analysis? I would suggest showing both univariate and multivariate odds ratios with 95% limits in the table 4 (like mentioned above optimally the cox regression model). Variables that were statistically significant in univariate tests should be used for multivariate testing. - In the immunosuppression and rejection section is the lack of p-value in the sentence describing post-transplant cardiac arrest. 5. Discussion: - In the first sentences of the discussion I would suggest summarizing the key findings of the paper. - Sentence:”Based on our analysis we found that “Black lives did not matter” in the late 80s and much of the 90s when the proportion of Black patients listed for and transplanted were below the national proportion of the Black patients (13.4%)”. Please include the percentage of listed patients and national proportion of Black people. - Please comment also and include adequate references about the incidence of heart failure in relation to race and confront with study results. - Why Black patients were younger, more likely to be female and with higher BMI compared to White patients and other racial groups? The differences should be discussed. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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