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PONE-D-21-18131 Is the Future near or far depending on Verb Tense Markers used? An experimental Investigation into the perceptual Effects of the Grammaticalization of the Future PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jaeggi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript has benefitted from 4 reviewers, all experts in this field of research. As you will see, they have provided critical and constructive comments that I think will greatly improve your manuscript, should you choose to resubmit and follow their advice. I have also read your manuscript and find it technically sound, which is a prerequisite for publication in PLOS ONE. There is much to like about the approach you take in your research and generally the results will be useful to other researchers working in this area. However, there are several serious issues pertaining to theory, key terms and concepts, and strength/coherence of argument, identified by the reviewers that would need to be addressed before the manuscript can be considered suitable for publication. Specifically, in a revision, you would engage seriously with the theoretical treatment of the relevant literature (reviewers 2 and 4), disambiguate the use of critical terminology, which currently reflects vague understanding of key terms (e.g. use of the terms ‘perception/perceptual, ‘grammaticized/grammaticization’ etc etc, see comments by reviewers 1, 2, and 3), and offer clear articulation of key concepts and theories to demonstrate adequate understanding and present a more coherent argument (reviewer 2). There are also a couple of serious omissions of previous literature (reviewer 4). I will return the revised manuscript to the reviewers for another round of reviews, so please be sure to address each comment in detail as per the instructions below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 10 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Review Jaggi et al The authors report that in Experiment 1 participants essentially discriminated between sentences about the present and sentences about the future, irrespective of how the future was written. However, they found a relationship between higher numbers (in the adverbials) and positioning towards the more distant future on the timeline, suggestive of the SNARC effect. This (former) result was repeated across three futher experiments, which modified the type of sentence, whether there were present sentences at all, and which also used German. I found the hypothesis interesting and sound. I very much liked the methodical step-by-step approach to each consecutive experiment, and each step was entirely merited. Probably like the authors, I was slightly surprised to find no effect of the way the future was grammaticalised on participants' perceptions of temporal distance. I would suggest expanding a bit more on the reasons why no effect was found. One thing that struck me about the grammaticalisation argument generally is that the lines between 'grammatical', 'modal', 'adverbial', and perhaps even 'lexical' futures are quite blurred, more so perhaps than those traditional areas of language-and-thought research such as colour, grammatical gender, etc (particularly gender). English is a case in point. 'Will' is a modal verb, and the 'going to' future is esentially a present (continuous) tense with an added infinitive. There is, in fact, not real future tense in English. Witness: The train leaves at 2pm tomorrow. I'm going to see her later. I'll see you then. I'll have been living there for 30 years come February. Etc. All of these are modal verbs or present tenses, each of which have alternative meanings that are unrelated to the future, just 'tweaked' with an adverbial that can refer to the future. My understanding of French is that yes, it uses suffixes on verbs like most romance languages, but more English-like options exist, and of course German and English are related anyway. So perhaps the issue is that there is not enough of a 'clean' categorical distinction between (these) languages for the hypothesis in question. I'd recommend adding more to the para beginning on line 415. Another thought is that there are some languages which only use adverbials to refer to the future, I believe (Hebrew comes to mind, though I may be wrong there). Some languages also have 'strong' past tenses, such as Italian. I don't think you need more data for this particular paper, just a thought for the future (pun unintended). Some other points: The table of results (Exp 1) seems a bit thin and a tad confusing - please report that the intercept refers to PF. I deduced this after looking at the graph. Lmers in R usually put the alphabetically earliest factor level as intercept but this information didn't help me as you've reorganised the levels. Also, what was the result for the random effects (i.e., how much of the data did they account for)? It would also be useful if you could report any deviations from your pre-registration, which is not accessible at the time of this review. I am unclear as to the procedure used for the specific Bayesian test used in Exp 1, but this might be because of typos in the values: aren't the correct numbers 66.42 and 66.47 (not 64.42 and 64.47)? It's also a bit unusual to interpret a Bayesian test as showing anything to be 'truly' sensitive; better to say it's just extremely likely that the data were sensitive enough, etc etc. The raw results certainly back this null up. I'd also report what the BFs mean in layman's terms (i.e. the data were x times more likely under the null hypothesis). Other line 18: This is a contentious statement to make with references, let alone without. At the time of reviewing the pre-registration details for Exp 1 were not available. Abstract line 11 : irrespective > irrelevant line 244 masking > shadowing line 386-387: clunky Reviewer #2: REVIEW OF: Is the Future near or far depending on Verb Tense Markers used? An experimental Investigation into the perceptual Effects of the Grammaticalization of the Future The authors present a series of four experiments which test the hypothesis that Future Time Reference (FTR) grammaticization impacts how temporally distal people construe future outcomes to be. On the whole, it appears the authors have done some interesting research which undermines a widely-cited account of the semantics of future tenses and their pursuant effects on construals of future events. The authors have developed a new task and tested an interesting hypothesis, and this is commendable. I believe that the empirical work this MS presents has merit and will be published eventually. However, the presentation of the work is critically flawed and this prevents me from recommending it be published in its present form. This is principally because the manuscript does not give adequate theoretical treatment to the relevant literature, and repeatedly misconstrues and misunderstands key concepts which need to be properly understood and explained for the MS to be convincing. For instance, there is persistent conceptual drift between within- and between-language effects; the introduction is framed in terms of cross-linguistic effects, yet the studies involve within-language methods and the theoretical bridge between these domains is underdeveloped. Another oddity is that grammaticization is implied to manifest differently in different speakers at different times. For instance, by the account in the MS, when a speaker says It rains this is “weakly grammaticized” and when the same speaker says It will rain this is “strongly grammaticized”. This fundamentally misunderstands grammaticization, which are those language-level processes which see lexical linguistic elements evolve into grammatical ones. Diachronic processes of grammaticization can therefore lead to cross-linguistic differences in the extent to which languages oblige the use of grammatical markers in certain speech contexts. However, the MS collapses differences in speaker-level usage with notions of grammaticization in such a way as to demonstrate that core concepts have been misunderstood. Key references are cited (Bybee, Dahl) but the MS does not in its present form demonstrate that these have been understood. Another example is that “thinking for speaking” effects are invoked as a theoretical motivation, yet the methods do not investigate these. Additionally, the locus of the cognitive effects under investigation does not appear well understood. The MS repeatedly refers to perceptual effects, yet the methods do not investigate perception, and rather focus on explicit judgments of linguistic cues. The MS gives an incoherent account of how the semantics of temporal adverbials work (tomorrow, next week, etc.). Firstly, it is suggested that use of a temporal adverbial indicates reduced grammaticization, even though temporal adverbials and future tense operate somewhat orthogonally. The contrast between English (strongly grammaticized FTR) and German (weakly grammaticized FTR) is relevant. Even though English obliges the future tense for prediction-based FTR and German does not, it is acceptable in either language to use a temporal adverbial in combination with the future tense. Secondly, temporal adverbials in German and French transparently encode notions of temporal distance so it is unsurprising that participants rate distal adverbials (e.g. nine months) as farther than proximal ones (e.g. one month). Yet the MS treats this as though it is a novel/interesting result. Too much is made of this, which only distracts from the interesting null effect of tense framing on ratings of temporal distance, and the MS is muddled as a result. Large and critical areas of literature are unreferenced. In particular, there is a large literature which has focussed on Chen’s (2013) hypothesis that the obligation to use a future tense for prediction-based FTR should cause speakers to construe future events as more temporally distal, and that this will therefore lead to cross-linguistic effects of FTR grammaticiation on intertemporal decision making. Numerous studies, including ones whose results bear direct relevance to the present MS, have followed up on Chen’s (2013) hypothesis. Yet none of this literature is cited, even though the MS purports to test an idea which can be directly traced to Chen (2013). Reading the MS in its own right, it is difficult to make out why future tense marking should lead to distal temporal construals, which makes it all the more strange that Chen (2013) is left uncited. Chen (2013) provides a closely reasoned and mathematically presented account of this hypothesis... Additionally, while the results are interesting, not enough is made of them. For instance, linguists continue to debate the semantics of FTR, and the future tense in particular, and many of these debates revolve around the entanglement modal with temporal notions in future tense semantics. Given the results in the MS indicate there is no effect of tense framing on ratings of temporal distance, this literature should be engaged, which it currently is not. In fact, the MS’s treatment of modality is generally underdeveloped, and this should be addressed. The individual studies are not well motivated. The rationale for each study often does not bear up to close scrutiny, or relies on reference to materials which were not included in the material to be reviewed, i.e. the linguistic task which was developed. This makes judging the substantive contribution and motivation of each study difficult. This brings up a final point, which is that the methods are not clearly reported. While I know roughly what was done, the precise nature of the empirical work remains a mystery. The methods in their present form would not, for instance, provide enough information for the experiments to be replicated. This obviously needs to be corrected. I fear this review has been overwhelmingly negative, and I want the authors to know that I do believe they have done some worthwhile work. In this review I attach a copy of their MS which I have annotated with suggestions for how it might be improved, and I hope they will implement these in the future, regardless of the editorial decision from PLOS ONE. Personally, I am very interested in this work; I am near to completing a PhD which has focussed largely on a very similar research question. Much of my work is presently under review or in prep, but I would be happy to be contacted by the authors should they wish to discuss or share results. I can be contacted at cole.robertson@ru.nl Reviewer #3: MS PONE-D-21-18131 Title: Is the Future near or far depending on Verb Tense Markers used? An experimental Investigation into the perceptual Effects of the Grammaticalization of the Future Authors: Jaeggi, Gygax, Gillioz, Sato Summary This manuscript presents four experiments exploring the role of different types of linguistic futures on perceptual qualities. Experiment 1 tested French speakers on the placement of event descriptions on a provided timeline. The results revealed no differences in the different types of futures explored, contrary to the hypothesis. Experiment 2 was a replication of Experiment 1, except concrete temporal adverbials were not used, and a more categorical response modality was used. The results were like those of Experiment 1. Experiment 3 was another replication, how this one involved the use of German speakers. The results were like those of Experiments 1 and 2. Experiment 4 was a replication of Experiment 3, but without the present tense items. The results replicated the first three experiments in not showing an effect of different types of futures. The results revealed that the perceptual aspect of future thinking is largely unaffected by the type of future language structure used. Evaluation This manuscript addresses an interesting topic. The study was well-conduced, and the resulting data are adequately interpreted. Although the study is largely a set of null effects, they do have important theoretical implications, and should be made available. I only have one concern that is detailed below. Minor point 1. I was not entirely satisfied with the description of “perceptual representations”. I think that a more adequate term for capturing what is being referred to here is “embodied representations.” Reviewer #4: This is an interesting study that presents some important results. The authors should be commended for preregistering the study, seeking to publish even with null results, and for the application of the Bayesian power estimate. This is good science. I have some points that may require revision of the manuscript. The two main ones relate to the relationship between time and space, and the relation between this study and some parallel work on future discounting. Neither should prevent publication, but the authors may want to think about revisions to make their claims more clear. 1. Is it necessary to include the spatial translation of time in the hypothesis? Experiment 1 asks participants to express the distance on a slider ranging from left (low) to right (high), so a link between the grammaticalisation and perception of distance could appear even if the participants thought of time as flowing from right to left. The left/right mapping might also predict that the effect would be weaker if the slider was in the other direction. But this isn't tested. So I wonder if the spatial mapping is a necessary step in the hypothesis? 2. I found it surprising that the paper did not link to the hypothesis by economist Keith Chen on FTR and perceptions of time: Chen, M. K. (2013). The effect of language on economic behavior: Evidence from savings rates, health behaviors, and retirement assets. American Economic Review, 103(2), 690-731. Note that the cross-cultural correlation has been criticised: Roberts, S. G., Winters, J., & Chen, K. (2015). Future tense and economic decisions: controlling for cultural evolution. PloS one, 10(7), e0132145. But the original idea provides several specific models for how grammaticalisation in language might affect perception of time. In particular, the idea relies on habitual requirements to make distinctions between the future and the present. That is, the more a specific person makes this distinction in their language, the greater the effect on their thought. (that is, there may be within-language differences). A summary of this research is presented in this preprint (by Cole Robertson and others): https://papers.ssrn.com/sol3/papers.cfm?abstract_id=3628501 This also includes a summary of recent experimental work on the link between FTR and time perception. Several of these experiments may be relevant to the current study, and the authors may wish to cite them (especially since they claim that little work has been done). The preprint above also makes a point about the interpretation of future tense. While many see tense as encoding temporal distance (*when* an event occurs), it also communicates modal possibility (*whether* an event will occur). This is particularly the case for modals (e.g. in English "will" and "might" differ in probability more than they differ in temporal distance). Cole Robertson, as part of his PhD thesis and a few papers under review, did some studies on FTR and time perception in English, Dutch and German. One experiment was similar to the present study: Presenting participants with a phrase and asking them to indicate with a slider how far away in time they felt this was referring to. A similar experiment was also done with a slider indicating certainty. In Robertson's study, within a language, the future tense frame did not predict the rating of temporal distance. This is in line with the current results. However, the rating of certainty did differ significantly by grammatical form: modals were rated as less likely to occur than the future or present tenses. Participants in Robertson's study also rated objective times (one month, two months) as a check that participants were rating things sensibly. This also agrees with the analysis of numbers in adverbials in the current study. In addition, Dutch speakers rated events as more distant than English speakers. A similar thing could be tested in the current study. That is, is it possible to compare the scale scores in the current study for German and French directly? (i.e. the between-language prediction). It seems like the French participants are placing the slider at higher positions on average than the German participants. Isn't this what your hypothesis would predict? I appreciate the items are not exactly the same, but is it still worth noting? I'll also note that the authors are in a good position to do an experiment with bilinguals in several languages, making the comparison more effective (perhaps for future research). Robertson continued with some experiments to show that an individual person's usage of future vs. modal strategies for talking about probability (collected in a survey similar to Dahl's survey) could be used to predict their attitude to future events (e.g. in a future discounting task). I appreciate that these studies are not yet publicly available (though I'm sure the author would share their thesis manuscript if asked), and the point is not to undermine the current study. In fact, both lines of research seem to agree in their results. My intention is just to flag this converging evidence, and to ask the current authors whether there is a way of harnessing their current data to investigate the question about modal possibility, in addition to temporal distance. Minor points: "These structures vary across languages and have shown to affect how we mentally represent and perceive different aspects of our environment." - This sentence appears to have no evidence attached. It's not clear whether the citations in the previous sentence cover this. To be safe, there are some seminal works that could be easily cited here. "The grammaticalization of the future, which represents the grammatical manifestations of how to refer to the future, has been scarcely studied with experimental psycholinguistic methods" "As perceptual representations, we mostly refer to perceptual representations of distance" - Does this mean distance in time? Or are you talking more generally about any kind of domain? Lines 37-38. It's my understanding that "future time reference" refers to the act of talking about the future, rather than the linguistic devices used to do that? "FTR varies in the degree of grammaticalization across languages (and at times within language): a low degree of grammaticalization is characterized by adverbials and modal verbs; and a higher degree of grammaticalization is characterized by grammatical structures embedded in the verb, like a suffix of the future tense (e.g., in French: ‘j’ irai à Paris’ [I will go to Paris])." There is a lot of academic work on grammaticalisation from linguistics, and this could be cited here. The French example is not illustrative unless one understands French. Please give the interlinear gloss in addition to the translation. "as some languages have been shown to have very low grammaticalized future verb tense and to only use modal verbs to indicate the future tense (e.g., German:" I'm not sure this is technically correct. German can also use modal modifiers (möglich) or mental state predicates (erwarten). Maybe you're grouping these under modal verbs? "we expect the effect between low and high degree of FTR in German to be somehow stronger than in French". Why "somehow" - you have an explicit hypothesis? Table 2 - the significance is easier to interpret if it's explained that PF condition was used as the intercept condition. Mixed effects models: You are modelling a scale with a floor and ceiling. Does the model take this into account? It looks like there might be floor effects for the PP condition? You could do this with e.g. logit function. Line 365: "it did not significantly account variance for Value" - some missing words in this sentence? Also, some statistical support for this claim should be added (e.g. difference in variance explained in a model comparison test) The size of the text in the figures is quite small and may not reproduce well at a smaller scale. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-18131R1Is the future near or far depending on verb tense markers used? An experimental investigation into the effects of the grammaticalization of the futurePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jaeggi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you for working conscientiously to address all of the reviewers' comments. From a technical/scientific viewpoint, I am happy to inform you that the paper can be accepted for publication. I have, however, processed the paper as 'minor revision' because of the issue raised by reviewer 1 about language errors. Before submitting the final version, can you please make sure you address this point, by for example having your manuscript thoroughly proof-read by the author team and possibly an external native English speaker as well, so that any language issues can be identified and corrected. Otherwise, many congratulations! Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. 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The attempt to use the zero-inflated beta model addresses my question about floor effects. Non-convergence is not necessarily a good criteria for omitting this (and in a MCMC paradigm should be avoidable), but it's unlikely that the issue would affect the results. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Gabriel Radvansky Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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