Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 14, 2021 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-21-10350 Protecting Brains and Saving Futures Guidelines: a prospective, multicenter, and observational study on the use of telemedicine for neonatal neurocritical care in Brazil PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Variane, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please follow the reviewer's advice for further consideration. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Kazumichi Fujioka Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. 3. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified what type you will obtain (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). 4. We suggest you thoroughly copyedit your manuscript for language usage, spelling, and grammar. If you do not know anyone who can help you do this, you may wish to consider employing a professional scientific editing service. Whilst you may use any professional scientific editing service of your choice, PLOS has partnered with both American Journal Experts (AJE) and Editage to provide discounted services to PLOS authors. Both organizations have experience helping authors meet PLOS guidelines and can provide language editing, translation, manuscript formatting, and figure formatting to ensure your manuscript meets our submission guidelines. To take advantage of our partnership with AJE, visit the AJE website (http://learn.aje.com/plos/) for a 15% discount off AJE services. To take advantage of our partnership with Editage, visit the Editage website (www.editage.com) and enter referral code PLOSEDIT for a 15% discount off Editage services. If the PLOS editorial team finds any language issues in text that either AJE or Editage has edited, the service provider will re-edit the text for free. Upon resubmission, please provide the following: The name of the colleague or the details of the professional service that edited your manuscript A copy of your manuscript showing your changes by either highlighting them or using track changes (uploaded as a *supporting information* file) A clean copy of the edited manuscript (uploaded as the new *manuscript* file) 5. We noted that you submitted this Study Protocol as a clinical trial, but according to your description and the WHO definition of clinical trials we would not consider this a clinical trial but rather an observational study. 6. We note that the grant information you provided in the ‘Funding Information’ and ‘Financial Disclosure’ sections do not match. When you resubmit, please ensure that you provide the correct grant numbers for the awards you received for your study in the ‘Funding Information’ section. 7. Thank you for stating the following in the Competing Interests section: "Gabriel FT Variane and Alexandre Netto are the owners of PBSF. Guilherme M Sant’Anna has no conflicts of interest and no financial relationships relevant to this article to disclose. All other authors work at PBSF." Please confirm that this does not alter your adherence to all PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials, by including the following statement: "This does not alter our adherence to PLOS ONE policies on sharing data and materials.” (as detailed online in our guide for authors http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/competing-interests). If there are restrictions on sharing of data and/or materials, please state these. Please note that we cannot proceed with consideration of your article until this information has been declared. Please include your updated Competing Interests statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 8. We note that you have indicated that data from this study are available upon request. PLOS only allows data to be available upon request if there are legal or ethical restrictions on sharing data publicly. For more information on unacceptable data access restrictions, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-unacceptable-data-access-restrictions. In your revised cover letter, please address the following prompts: a) If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially sensitive information, data are owned by a third-party organization, etc.) and who has imposed them (e.g., an ethics committee). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. b) If there are no restrictions, please upload the minimal anonymized data set necessary to replicate your study findings as either Supporting Information files or to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. For a list of acceptable repositories, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-recommended-repositories. We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide. 9. Your ethics statement should only appear in the Methods section of your manuscript. If your ethics statement is written in any section besides the Methods, please delete it from any other section. 10. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors present the protocol for an upcoming study that will evaluate the adherence to proposed guidelines that utilize telemedicine for neonatal neurocritical care in Brazil and clinical outcomes for infants in the NICU enrolled in the study over a 3-year period. The authors provide background and rationale for the study, details about the Guidelines, key outcomes of interest, as well as plans for statistical analyses. The manuscript will be strengthened if the authors consider the following points. 1. There are some missing words, incorrect word usage, and instances of awkward phrasing. For example, line 48, "neonatal neurocritical via" should be "neonatal neurocritical care via", line 61 "varied" should be "variety", lines 62-64, the text switches between present and past tense, line 120 "background information the use" should be "background information on the use", in Box 2, #4 under Adherence, "Number primary" should be "Number of primary", line 252 "are associate" should be "are associated", line 275 "as indication" should be "as indications", line 376 "includes" should be "include", and line 400 "these 3 years" should be "this 3-year". 2. In the Statistical Methods section, authors can provide more details. For example, there are 20 sites being included in the study. It is possible that the patient population is quite different across the sites, yet the proposed analyses do not account for site differences or for the possibility of correlated observations within a site since doctors/nurses at one site will likely care for the infants within that site similarly. Authors are studying a lot of primary and secondary outcomes, yet they state that p<0.05 will be considered statistically significant - authors should consider a form of multiple comparison adjustment (beyond the post-hoc pairwise comparisons adjusted using the Bonferroni correction after the ANOVA). Authors plan to use ANOVA for comparing outcomes over time, but have authors considered alternative approaches if the assumptions of the ANOVA are not met? What software will be used for the analyses? Are there any plans for handling missing data? In line 229, do authors mean "confidence intervals" instead of "coefficient intervals"?. The reason for the planned use of Kaplan Meier curves is not entirely clear (lines 235-236), as it is not clear what the time scale is. Generally, in Kaplan-Meier curves, one has everyone that is potentially at risk for an outcome at the start of the study and then follows individuals until events occur. Will the time scale be time since birth? Reviewer #2: Congratulations to the authors for this prospective, multicenter, and observational study that will be conducted in 20 Brazilian NICUs using pre-specified PBSF guidelines related to neonatal neurocritical care via telemedicine. Background mentions the importance of EEG, amplitude integrated EEG, near infrared spectroscopy, and neuroimaging, besides the use of telemedicine in the neonatal neurocritical care, and the justification of the study. The primary goal is to describe adherence to the PBSF guidelines and the clinical outcomes in patients until 3 months old, by NICU and over a 3-year period. Methods mention eligibility patient criteria, data collection and management, sample size, and statistical analyses; and detailed appendixes. Authors need to explain the eligibility criteria regarding the 20 NICU enrolled in the study. Discussion justifies the study population – high-risk neonates with indications for neonatal neurocritical care; and it refers that the results may help to implement the guidelines in a large scale and the development of research projects using remote neuromonitoring. Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions. 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? This does not apply yet because it is a study protocol. 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Not applicable yet because it is a study protocol. 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? No; this is a study protocol without results yet. 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? Yes ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
Protecting Brains and Saving Futures Guidelines: a prospective, multicenter, and observational study on the use of telemedicine for neonatal neurocritical care in Brazil PONE-D-21-10350R1 Dear Dr. Variane, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Kazumichi Fujioka Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-21-10350R1 Protecting Brains and Saving Futures Guidelines: a prospective, multicenter, and observational study on the use of telemedicine for neonatal neurocritical care in Brazil Dear Dr. Variane: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kazumichi Fujioka Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .