Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 28, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-31238Trends of in-hospital cardiac arrests in a single tertiary hospital with a mature rapid response systemPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kyeongman Jeon, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: Thank you very much for having submitted this paper. Although the paper could be of interest however there are several issues to be addressed. I hope the comments of the reviewers could serve you as a guide to improve the quality of the paper which in the present form is not suitable for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 09 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Thank you very much for having submitted this paper. Although the paper could be of interest however there are several issues to be addressed. I hope the comments of the reviewers could serve you as a guide to improve the quality of the paper which in the present form is not suitable for publication. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Editor Dear Authors This is a retrospective observational study focusing on the consequences of implementing a RRS on the incidence and distribution of IHCA in a major hospital. Of note, only patients who suffered of IHCA in the general wards were included, according to the quality metrics published by the third international consensus conference on RRS (2019), which is correctly cited in the manuscript (9). The authors analyzed the yearly distribution between I-IHCA, P-IHCA and NP-IHCA from the start (2010) to the end (2019) of the period in exam and found a statistically significant decrease in P-IHCA from 0.19/1000 patients in 2010 to 0.12/1000 patients in 2019, with a number of total IHCA stable through the years and consistent with the rest of the literature (around 1/1000 patients). Attributing this decrease to implementation and maturation of RRS, the authors conclude that the incidence of P-IHCA (as opposed to overall IHCA) may be a better indicator of the effects of the implementation and maturation of a RRS in a major hospital. One of the strengths of the article is the number of the patients suffering from IHCA, unusually high for a study of this type, thanks to a decade-long thorough follow-up. Another point in favour of the research would be the prospectively collection of consecutive patients. It must also be noted that the article is well written, concise, with clear infographics and no major spelling errors (to my knowledge). However, there are a few issues, stated below: Major issues: 1) The definition of preventable IHCA used by the authors in the article is different from the one adopted in the 2019 consensus statement on RRS (9), first and foremost regarding the time window before the event of IHCA: “at least 30 min prior to and within 24” as stated by the consensus VS “from 8 hours to 30 minutes before arrest” as used by the authors in the article at line 96. Another (reported here for simplicity) minor issue on this definition is the diction of “preventable” IHCA used by the authors opposed to the one of “predictable” used in the consensus. 2) The results of the study presented in terms of reduction of P-IHCA between 2010 and 2019 as stated in line 160-161 “P-IHCA decreased from 0.19/1,000 patients in 2010 to 0.12/1,000 patients in 2019 (P = 0.006)” may be seen as misleading: examining FIGURE 2 one would note that the incidence of P-IHCA in 2018 was around 0.2/1000 patients (higher than 2010), hinting to the paradoxical conclusion that if the study would have stopped in 2018 it might have shown an increase in P-IHCA. It is also evident from the same table that in 2011 the incidence of P-IHCA was around 0.3/1000 patients (highest in the decade). Given the conclusion stated by the authors in line 208-209 “the incidence of P-IHCA could be a more appropriate quality metric to measure the clinical outcomes of RRS implementation and maturation than overall IHCA” (this is also the opinion of the reviewer on the matter), a single analysis of the incidence of P-IHCA in 2010 VS the incidence of P-IHCA in 2019 may not be seen by the reader as sufficient to back this conclusion. A suggestion to address this issue (and other minor issues stated below) would be to pool the data from 2010 to July 2016 vs August 2016 to 2019, the latter representing the period with a more experienced MET, with dedicated staff (since March 2013) and an automated activation system (since August 2016). If significant, this analysis would point toward the conclusion that the incidence of P-IHCA is reduced by the implementation and maturation of RRS and thus may be itself a more accurate quality metric than the incidence of overall IHCA. Minor issues: 3) In line 45 “since March 2013 the MET was composed of dedicated intensivist physicians”: it is not stated what was the composition of the MET between 2010 and 2013. 4) A minor limitation of the study would be the switch in the activating process of the MET: the one stated in TABLE 1 until July 2016 vs the one based on MEWS since August 2016. One could argue that the adoption of the automated activation system based upon MEWS may be itself a sign of the “maturation” of the RRS: it could be wise in this case to present the results as before vs after the switch in the activation process (see more in comment 2). 5) It is not clear what was the survival at hospital discharge in the IHCA patients: was it 17.8% as stated in TABLE 2 or 31.5% as stated in line 149? In the same line the phrase “Among 252 patients (31.5%) survived at discharge and only 111 (13.9%) patients…” probably “and” is a typo Great work, best regards Reviewer #2: This paper may be of interest as it highlights the importance of MET in the treatment oif cardiac arrest in a big hospital. However, it is a description of MET activity over a time period and it fails to reach conclusions regarding som of the potentially more interesting aspects including the DNACPR Decisions.“ Additionally some data are reported without supporting the causality of those with the main topic of the paper. I.g. Authors report the in-hospital mortality rate was significantly decreased (from 9.20/1,000 patients in 2010 to 7.23/1,000 patients in 2019). What this due to MEt "maturity"? If this is the underling message, there are not data supporting it. The definition of NP IHCA is quite wide additionally it is unclear whether the occurrence within 30 minutes form MET activation was also related to a delay in MET arrival at bedside considering that the goal is the get the MET within 10 minutes. Which is the clinical message of the following sentence: Among 252 patients (31.5%) survived at discharge and only 111 (13.9%) patients were 150 managed by our MET within 24 hours before the event Discussion section should be widen ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Trends of in-hospital cardiac arrests in a single tertiary hospital with a mature rapid response system PONE-D-21-31238R1 Dear Dr. Jeon, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear Editor, dear Authors my suggestions in the last review were sufficiently addressed by the authors. One last minor issue lies in the comment. The authors replied in R1 "In our hospital setting, patients admitted to the general ward checked vital signs at least every 8 hours", but in the Method section - operation of RRS it was stated "The frequency of measuring vital signs was made according to the order of the attending physician, but vital signs were usually measured at least four times a day and more often when the patient’s clinical condition changed". Please be more clear on how frequently the minimum of vital signs are collected. Reviewer #2: The author have imporved the information of the paper. I have no further comments to be addressed. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Alessandro Fasolino Reviewer #2: No |
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