Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 20, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-40086CREBBP/EP300 acetyltransferase inhibition disrupts FOXA1-bound enhancers to inhibit the proliferation of ER+ breast cancer cellsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Conery, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 25 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a good manuscript and new insight exploring the potential clinical utility of p300/CBP inhibitors is exciting and will be of relevance to the community. The work is high quality and the paper is well written. - It wasn't clear how many of the differentially regulated H3K27Ac peaks were bound by p300/CBP? - The authors suggest that certain genes are affected by CPI-1612 but not Fulvestrant (including KLF4, ELF3 and HES1). Are they implying that these genes are bound and regulated by p300/CBP but not ER? This is entirely plausible, but surely the authors can check this with public datasets (i.e. are the genomic regions near KLF4, ELF3 and HES1 bound by p300/CBP but not ER, suggesting a different transcription factor is involved at those genes)? - The authors claim that less than 5% of differential H3K27Ac peaks show changes in accessibility. However, isn't this simply a timing issue? At 6hr of treatment, I would be surprised if there was sufficient time for chromatin accessibility changes to be observed unless an active closing was engaged. For most sites, depletion of acetylation would result in a passive chromatin closing, which is unlikely to occur by 6hr. If the authors had left the treatment on for longer before conducting ATAC-seq, I suspect that there would be a lot more changes and a substantial fraction of the differential p300/CBP differential regions would have altered accessibility. I don't expect the authors to conduct this experiment, but this possibility (i.e. a short time point doesn't give sufficient time for chromatin closing to occur) should be discussed. - The data has been deposited but the GEO link is password protected and no password is provided. Since no information is provided in the methods, it's unclear how many replicates of ChIP-seq and ATAC-seq were conducted and since I can't access the data, I am unable to judge whether there is sufficient replicates. Reviewer #2: In their manuscript, Bommi-Reddy and colleagues demonstrate that the acetyltransferase activity of the ER coactivator CREBBP/EP300 represents a promising therapeutic target in ER+ BC. They propose that, inhibiting the HAT domain of CREBBP/EP300, are able to target the ER transcriptional network. By using a selective inhibitor CPI-1612, they demonstrate that CREBBP/EP300 acetyltransferase inhibition suppresses the growth of breast cancer cell models both in vitro and in vivo by acting in a manner orthogonal to directly targeting ER. CREBBP/EP300 inhibition, according to the authors finding, suppresses ER dependent transcriptional program by targeting lineage-specific FOXA1 bound enhancers. Despite the study is quite interesting, well-conceived and the generated data of potential interest since they point out the CREBBP/EP300 acetyltransferase activity as a putative target for clinical development in ER+ breast cancer, there are concerns that need to be addressed before the manuscript can be further considered for publication. - Concerning Supp. Fig. S1A, please include labels related to the different cell line analyzed. Then, there is no indication of the statistical significance in the figures. Please check this point and include in the figure the appropriate statistics. Moreover, I would include an ER negative BC cell line, as control, also in the graph concerning standard growth inhibition assay (Fig. 1A) - The authors state that CPI-1612 treatment led to dose-dependent reduction in H3K27 acetylation in BC xenograft peripheral blood, demonstrating target engagement at efficacious doses. What about H3K18 acetylation modulation by CPI-1612 treatment? -Then, considering the RNA-seq results the deepest impact on transcriptome changing in MCF-7 is obtained upon CPI-1612 high+Fulvestrant (Fig. 2A) while the highest impact in GSEA analysis ( NES) is observable following CPI-1612 low+Fulvestrant. Why? The author should comment on that. Moreover, concerning the venn diagram in Supp. Fig.S2A. Are the data referring to MCF-7? I suggest also including a table with all the differentially expressed genes obtained upon transcriptome profiling in the different cell line analyzed as resource for future investigations.and comment on common and specific effect obtained in the manuscript. Then, the authors state that comparison of the enrichment plots for single agent CPI-1612 or Fulvestrant with combination treatment shows enhanced repression upon combination treatment (Fig S2C). This effect is achieved when considering CPI-1612 low or high +Fulvestrant? - The authors say that combination of ChIP- and ATAC-seq sites identify several key genes, which were down regulated after CPI-1612 treatment, including ESR1. What about ER protein level upon CPI-1612 treatment? Please enhance the quality of panel F of Fig.3. Which were the most statistically significant enriched motif for differential H3K27ac peaks? -Finally, did the author consider validating their key ATAC-seq finding with additional inhibitors? Minor points - I would encourage the authors to enhance the quality of all images along the main text and the supporting information especially for figure labels that result, in some cases, difficult to read. - There are some typos in the text that need corrections. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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CREBBP/EP300 acetyltransferase inhibition disrupts FOXA1-bound enhancers to inhibit the proliferation of ER+ breast cancer cells PONE-D-21-40086R1 Dear Dr. Conery, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alessandro Weisz Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The revised manuscript is now acceptable for publication Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-40086R1 CREBBP/EP300 acetyltransferase inhibition disrupts FOXA1-bound enhancers to inhibit the proliferation of ER+ breast cancer cells Dear Dr. Conery: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Alessandro Weisz Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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