Peer Review History
Original SubmissionApril 21, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-13191 The association between geriatric treatment and 30-day readmission risk among elderly medical inpatients PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang-Hansen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: Please consider the methodological aspects raised by reviewers, including the issue of “municipal emergency beds”, that actually sound as a different form of hospital admission, and comment on cases selection process (Figure 1), leading to the inclusion of a minority of patient: are these data generalizable? A further aspects that I feel is lacking are is a statistical comparison of patients’ features between Geriatrics and Internal Medicine group, as the former looks, as expected, older and more cognitively impaired. Can this difference bias results? Moreover a discussion on statistical power should be included among study limitations, as the numerical difference observed in readmissions between the two groups might be non significant due to small sample size. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by 12-SEP-2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: introduction line 58: It is unclear what unsatisfactory patient pathways means. this could use some clarification line 60: what is meant by the oldest patients? What age group specifically? line 64: There is somewhat of a disconnect between the ideas in paragraph 1 and 2. I think there is an opportunity to better link the need for looking at readmission risk factors in older individuals and CGA as a factor. line 68: but there have been some studies that have looked at CGA and readmission. What are you contributing that they did not do? lines 72-73: The purpose does not seem to link back to any of the old-old age group discussed in the first paragraph. need better/clearer connection between what is known, gaps, and purpose. methods: line 78: I am confused with how the participants were recruited. While they were admitted or from some other community database that had information on individuals who were recently admitted to the hospital. can you please clarify this in the manuscript. This also seems to be participants from a larger study. please describe more about the larger study design and who you are selecting from that larger study. line 93: I think that participants need to be receiving home care services is lost earlier in this manuscript. That should be included when describing your population and perhaps considered in the introduction and discussion sections. what type of home care are these individuals receiving should also be clarified. data collection and lab measures: It is a little unclear here why you are collecting the data you are collecting at specific time points. perhaps a conceptual model or other table or figure would clarify why you are collecting specific data and certain times. results: I feel like the CGA piece is completing lost in this section. How do these findings fit with CGA versus just looking at readmission risk factors. I am very confused about the focus of this manuscript line 146: I am confused. they needed to be receiving home care to be included, but some were also receiving care in a nursing home? Do these contradict each other? discussion: This needs to be re-focused around what is the main purpose and variables of interest for your study. There are multiple focuses currently and it is confusing to read. is it focused on readmission, readmission risk, old-old individuals, CGA? There are a lot of ideas and many of these have been already covered in previous research. You will also want to work on what is new here? what is the gap you are addressing that we haven’t already examined? Reviewer #2: Wang-Hansen et al. report the risk of readmission from a single Norwegian hospital following discharge, for older adults aged over 75 years old and receiving home care services. The consented study population is divided according to management in either a general medical or specialist geriatric medicine setting, the latter of which is used as a surrogate for receipt of comprehensive geriatric assessment. In adjusted Cox proportional hazards modelling accounting for the competing risk of death after discharge, geriatric medicine care was not associated with any difference in the risk of readmission. The authors found that younger, female patients with higher cognitive function were at the highest risk of 30-day readmission. The manuscript addresses a topic of importance which is not well covered in the wider literature. However, there are some areas of the analysis that are concerning and I have raised these points below. 1. A major concern is about population generalisability to “geriatric medicine care” and by association “comprehensive geriatric assessment”. Some elements of this are limitations of a consented observational cohort, but these should still be acknowledged in the discussion. The requirement for informed consent prevents many patients with delirium and dementia from participation; this group would usually make up a large part of geriatric medicine care. It would be helpful within Figure 1 to breakdown the numbers for the loss from ineligibility by patients managed in general medicine and geriatric medicine settings – it is important for the reader to know if the group representing geriatric medicine in this analysis only account for a minority of patients in the wards. 2. Similarly for transparency, it would be helpful to know how many deaths occurred after discharge within 30 days and in which groups (general medicine or geriatric medicine) these occurred. Currently the table only provides survival to 1 year. The use of a competing risk Cox model is welcome, but given the small sample size, applicability may be questionable if many more deaths occurred within the modelling window for the small geriatric medicine group of just 52 patients. 3. I also have concerns about the patient group here as the discharge destination numbers seem very surprising. The inclusion criteria require all patients to have been admitted from home. In the geriatric medicine managed group, 50% are then discharged to a nursing home following a median length of stay of just 5 days. This seems very unlikely if such a transfer was a permanent switch of residence, particularly since 33% of general medical patients followed the same route. I am concerned that these are “discharges” to rehabilitation facilities for post-acute care with a later assessment of return home. This would clearly lower the risk of hospital readmission, as such facilities often have access to nursing and/or medical care that would not otherwise be available if the patient had been discharged to their usual residence. Can the authors explain if this is the case, and if so acknowledge this as a bias that might explain the direction of their results? 4. As well as this, the discussion raises a concern about the outcome ascertainment: “Our results may indicate that older patients with signs of cognitive decline now tend to be treated in municipal emergency beds…”. I am unfamiliar with the health service setting here, but transfer from a home to a “municipal emergency bed” sounds like it is not included in the outcome measure, but is a (re)admission to a healthcare setting? If so, this is a significant limitation to interpretation of the results. Can I suggest the authors provide some context for readers not familiar with the Norwegian system and explain this a bit clearer in the discussion? 5. In Figure 1, the majority of eligible patients excluded from the study were due to “administrative reasons” rather than lack of consent. This is not explained in the methods but is particularly important because the term “consecutive patients” is used to imply no selection bias in approach of eligible patients. Can the authors clarify what administrative reasons means? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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The association between geriatric treatment and 30-day readmission risk among medical inpatients aged ≥75 years with multimorbidity. PONE-D-21-13191R1 Dear Dr. Wang-Hansen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Enrico Mossello Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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