Peer Review History
Original SubmissionNovember 4, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-35232Diagnostic accuracy of three commercially available one step RT-PCR assays for the detection of SARS-CoV-2 in resource limited settingsPLOS ONE Dear Mr Abay Sisay, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 10 December 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a decent study that evaluates the diagnostic performance of 3 available RT-PCR assays in resource-limited setting in Ethiopia. Experiments and statistical analyses are performed to a high technical standard and are described well. However, major concern with this research is the sample size – is it sufficient enough to draw conclusions on their performance evaluation? Below are some other comments that must be addressed before it can be published. Major comments: 1. There are other assays available in Ethiopia. Why are only three of them selected in this study? There should a separate sub-section under Experiments which should clearly explain the rational behind the selection of those assays. 2. In the data quality assurance section, it is mentioned that the assays were performed by following standard operating procedures and is against specific manufacturing recommendations. What does it mean? Does it mean that, all the assays were performed by standard operating procedure and not the manufacturers protocol? If so, what is the rationale behind doing this? If specific manufacturers protocol is not followed, how can we say that the result is from that particular assay? Is the result now trustworthy? 3. The details about the assays must be mentioned at least in SI in detail. The details of assay components, for example, lot#, expiry date, date of analysis etc. must be given. It is also mentioned that the quality of assay reagents was checked? How was it done; it needs to be mentioned. 4. From figure 1, the threshold cycle for BGI assay is very less compared to others. Significance test must be done between these three. From this data, can we say that BGI assay is sensitive over others? But the BLCM analysis looks contradicting – BGI being the least sensitive. It is important to discuss figure 1 in the main text. 5. More importantly, the conclusions/recommendation about the usage of assays is missing in this research. The authors, after this research, what do they recommend for the reliable SARS-CoV-2 detection? Rather than mentioning the problems only and suggesting the alternative, it is important to recommend something out of this research, otherwise it is ineffective. Minor comments: 1. Line 42: efforts made 2. Line 45 and 47: not well documented in resource-limited setting, then why is it performed in clinical setting? These two settings do not really line-up well here. 3. Line 178 and 179: inconsistencies in numbering population 4. Line 268: cut-off 5. Table 3 is difficult to follow. Reviewer #2: Summary of the research and overall impression: This study is really admirable for the effective diagnosis and control prospective in this current pandemic situation in the resource constraint setting as we are also engaging in similar COVID-19 diagnosis activities despite bearing countless challenges and biohazard risks. This manuscript aimed to investigate different diagnostic assays available in Ethiopia’s clinical setting using Bayesian latent class model, as PCR is not considered as gold standard. Although, research gap is explained thoroughly, the scientific hypothesis has not been addressed. Manual RNA extraction was conducted, master-mix preparation, amplification and results were analysed as indicated by the manufacturer. The technical aspects of the paper are adequately conveyed and the BLCM method is appropriate to answer the question. Specific areas for improvement: Major issue: 1. Please clarify what the author wants to claim in the fourth paragraph. [Section: Available diagnostic platform for the diagnosis of COVID-19, Reference no.: 9] 2. Perhaps, explain what FIND does to provide more insight, as it is used to evaluate diagnostic tests commercially available. [Section: Available diagnostic platform for the diagnosis of COVID-19, Reference no.: 23, Fifth paragraph] 3. No clear indication on critical, timely and containment strategy explanation. [Section: Available diagnostic platform for the diagnosis of COVID-19, Reference no.: 26, Sixth paragraph] 4. TIB targets E and RdRp genes, Da An targets N and ORF1ab genes, and BGI targets ORF 1ab gene. It has clear indication that these three different assays target different genes, please mention how these can be correlated to compare and predict its specificity. As various publications have already claimed that different target genes have different expression levels and detectable range. [Section: Available diagnostic platform for the diagnosis of COVID-19, Last paragraph] 5. The sentence, “The quality of each reagent was checked before the actual laboratory analysis.”, needs a better explanation. What does the word ‘quality’ indicate? How was the quality checked? [Section: Data Quality Assurance, First paragraph] 6. As BLCM assigns individuals to classes based on their probability of being in classes given the pattern of scores they have on indicator variables. Proper class assignment is not guaranteed. Also, because class assignment is based on probabilities, the exact number or percentage of sample members within each class cannot be determined. Please, briefly explain how this study assigns samples to different classes. [Section: Bayesian latent class model (BLCM)] 7. The discussion is well-written, although it could benefit from including other relevant studies/prior works to support your results. Likewise, few parts of discussion are already stated in the introduction, so it would be better if care be taken for making it concise and readable. Also, if possible please break down the reference and include it in-text. (provide reference at the end of sentence rather than at the end of each paragraph) [Section: Discussion] 8. Conclusion is relatively weak. Please, consider revising it and sufficiently summarizing the methods and results. 9. While the study appears to be sound, the language is unclear, making it difficult to follow. I advise the authors to work with a writing coach or copyeditor to improve the flow and readability of the text. Minor issues: 1. The authors have acquired ethical approval from their respective boards but haven’t mentioned if they have also acquired the informed (verbal or written) consent from the patients themselves. 2. The manuscript should rigorously undergo for plagiarism check. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Diagnostic accuracy of three commercially available one step RT-PCR assays for the detection of SARS-CoV-2 in resource limited settings PONE-D-21-35232R1 Dear Dr. Sisay, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All the comments have been addressed. This article can be considered for publication after minor revisions. Reviewer #2: Went through all the rebuttals provided by authors in the revised manuscript, I found that the authors have given justifiable reasons and explanations for each major and minor issues. Moreover, they have made necessary revisions to the manuscript and are considerable. Though, the conclusion is still comparatively weaker compared to the respective result/discussion sections and hence recommend to make it scientifically strong. Also, provide the take home message and contributions in the frontiers of molecular diagnostics. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-35232R1 Diagnostic accuracy of three commercially available one step RT-PCR assays for the detection of SARS-CoV-2 in resource limited settings Dear Dr. Sisay: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Basant Giri Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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