Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 27, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-30912Policy and behavioral response to shock events: An agent-based model of the effectiveness and equity of policy design featuresPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Shastry, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.The manuscript requires further revisions with reference to study novelty and originality, introductory section extension, discussion of the model design and outcomes, as well as policy implications. At the same time, the paper requires serious corrections with reference to English language. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 16 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper presents an agent-based model for evaluation of policy responses’ effectiveness in avoiding Covid-19 spread. The paper describes the operation modules underling the model. The paper does not describe the details of calibration methods. Neither does it present an evaluation of validation nor goodness-of-fit for the model. The model code and user guides are publicly available on a hub which is addressed in the paper. The model is implemented in python and R, both of which are open source. The data used in the model are public, however I did not find in the paper where to find it. There is a fold in the cited hub named “inputs” where I believe the data can be found. However, I was unable to read the archives inside, which may be due to operational system issues. The paper is clear and easy to read. However, I did not feel comfortable saying the techniques and estimation are appropriate nor the conclusions are supported by the data since I did not find enough information in the paper to make possible such evaluations. Specific comments: 1. I find the points below relevant, and it would be interesting to discuss them in the paper regarding the applicability of the model. 1.1 The model is implemented to evaluate SIP (lockdown) policy design features in Travis County, Texas, and the authors claim that it can be applied for “any location in the USA”. What does it mean location here? Only counties? Or it could be states? What the authors could say about the model being used in other countries? Or metropolitan regions? The last one is very important to evaluate policy responses for Covid-19 due to the interaction among population from different cities, including for working purposes. 1.2 Localities may differ significantly regarding several aspects such as economic sectors composition, economic and social development, population age, and culture. It will be interesting to see a results comparison between counties with different features, such as economic development. 2. What are the innovation/originality of the model compared to the model presented in Kerr Et Al (2021) and Hoertel (2020)? 3. To improve the potential of your paper, I believe it will be interesting to add some discussion about your model and the Covasim model (Kerr Et Al, 2021), since it has been used to advise policy makers in multiple countries. 4. About the results for Travis, in Figure 6 the numbers are percentages or decimals? For instance, does 0.0012 mean 0.12% or 0.0012%? A comparison between the numbers provided by the model and real data would be interesting. For instance, with 90% compliance, short duration, and early timing, the model predicts X people hospitalized. In a similar situation there were Y people hospitalized. 5. A minor point, PA is defined as pre symptomatic in the caption of Figure 1. It’s actually asymptomatic. There are some typos in Figure 1 regarding subscript instead of superscript in the variable names. Reviewer #2: The paper “Policy and behavioral response to shock events: An agent-based model of the effectiveness and equity of policy design features” develops an agent-based model that allows for the evaluation of shelter-in-place (SIP) policies designed against the COVID-19 pandemic. The authors show, for instance, that the impact of timing of the SIP policy is moderated by other aspects of policy design and societal aspects. In my opinion, the paper makes a very important contribution on a relevant subject employing solid methods. For this reason, it deserves publication. However, the authors should perform some minor changes in the paper, as I list below: • The Introduction of the paper is too short. The authors should extend it, elaborating on the purpose of the paper and the methods employed, as well as anticipating some results. The “COVID-19 Policy Evaluation” (CoPE), mentioned for the first time on page 11, should be briefly described in the introduction and mentioned in the abstract. • On page 8, the expression “an SIP” should be replaced by “a SIP”. • A more formal description of the model (CoPE), including equations and parameters, should be provided by the authors. It could be done in a separate section or an appendix. • I suggest to the authors provide a summary table displaying all the different configurations of the SIP policy to be tested. For instance, duration: baseline (45 days), short (30 days), and long (60 days). This would improve the comprehensibility of the paper. • On page 13, I suppose “Figure 2” should be replaced by “Figure 1”. • On page 13, in the caption of Figure 1, both PA and PY stand for “pre symptomatic”. • On page 14, the expression “within in the same profession” should be replaced by “within the same profession”. • Throughout the paper, the authors use both “shelter-in-place” and “shelter in place”. Please choose just one form. • On page 14, I suppose “Figure 2” should be replaced by “Figure 3”. • On page 15, in the caption of Figure 3, “Compliant” should be replaced by “compliant”. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Policy and behavioral response to shock events: An agent-based model of the effectiveness and equity of policy design features PONE-D-21-30912R1 Dear Dr. Shastry, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Stefan Cristian Gherghina, PhD. Habil. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors provided supplementary material about the model implementation, eliminating my main concern. They also addressed all the points I raised. In my opinion, the paper deserves to be published. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-30912R1 Policy and behavioral response to shock events: An agent-based model of the effectiveness and equity of policy design features Dear Dr. Shastry: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Stefan Cristian Gherghina Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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