Peer Review History
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PONE-D-21-13635 Effects of age and sex on association between toe muscular strength and vertical jump performance in adolescent populations PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kurihara, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 24 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for asking me to review this paper on the effects of age and sex on the association between toe muscular strength and vertical jump performance in adolescent populations. The paper covers all important aspects of the study, but could be improved by shortening the introduction and clarifying some logical aspects of the introduction and discussion General comment Abbreviations. Consider spelling out some abbreviations that are non-standard which makes reading the paper difficult. For example TMS was confusing with your two groups TGS and TPS. As you don’t do any analysis with a TMS group you could spell this out in the paper. PHV and SCC could also remain spelt out as they are used infrequently. Introduction The introduction is very long and at times the logic is difficult to follow. For example, it makes sense that muscle force across muscles increases with growth, and that differences exist between boys and girls. It is unclear why toe muscular strength would be different given that you argue that there is a difference in TMS through adolescence, the same as other muscle groups, which levels off after late adolescence, and then you only investigate adolescents. Justification for the study is not strong as you would expect jump performance to be significantly related to lower leg power and for toe muscles to contribute only a small amount if anything. Maybe the possible association is only important to those who require good jumping performance and therefore any differences in age and sex are important for improvements? Line 62: Clarify why the forefoot is necessary for performance as it is in contact with the ground? What aspect of the forefoot is necessary? Do you mean the muscles controlling the forefoot? Line 66 What do you mean by toe muscular strength appropriately adjusting forefoot motion? Line 68 What sort of significant role? It could be to increase or decrease sport performance. Line 72 Consider more recent references to support your argument- since the size and time of puberty has changed in the last 25 years and your statement here may no longer be true e.g. McKay M et al Normative reference values for strength and flexibility of 1,000 children and adults Neurology 2017 88:1-8 Line 75 remove the ‘was’ in ‘..thereafter sex differences was existed’ Line 80 change ‘its’ to ‘their’ Line 81ff the plateau in jump height may be population specific e.g. this is not seen in McKay et al Reference values for developing responsive functional outcome measures across the lifespan Neurology 2017 88: 1512-1519 Line 91 Suggest adding ‘ These studies suggest…” Line 113 Maybe you could expand here to clarify the role of toe muscles in controlling the final propulsion and initial shock absorption in jumping? Line 111 Aims. Take care to keep your aims to associations or relationships since you cant make any inference about cause or effect e.g You cant tell if the age and sex differences in jump performance were actually effected by toe muscle strength. Line 121 Suggest rewording to ‘..measured at different MPJ angles…’ Methods Line 131 Was each participant data used only once? You say the data came from the project 2016-2019, was any participant measured on 3 occasions or only once? This will affect the independence of the data points. Line 141 As you have mentioned your reasoning before you could delete the beginning of the sentence ‘As aforementioned..’ and just say ‘Toes gripping strength was….’ Line 154 Did you check whether the calf muscles were used rather than just asking the participants not to use them? Line 162 which measurements were used for repeatability? Was this a within participant calculation? Did you do any inter-rater reliability for the measure? What was the 95% confidence interval? Line 164ff Can you clarify how you adjusted the jump height for the participant height? Line 174 How many were ‘several’ practices? Was there a criteria for how many were allowed? Line 179 Statistical analysis. Did you test your data for normality? Results The first paragraph is a succinct clear reporting of the results. I found the correlation figures less helpful than the actual data so you could consider a table of the correlation results rather than the figures. You do not report the strength of the correlations- which overall are weak. Consider adding this to the methods and results Discussion Line 240 You don’t need to spell out the abbreviations here. If you feel you do then write them out and remove the brackets. Line 244 You can only say that TGS may give a better reflection of toe muscle strength than TPS, not that it represents maximum toe muscle strength. Line 260 You can only say VJ could be affected by toe muscle strength as you only investigated associations. Line 262 What do you mean by ‘drastically’? Can you only say ‘significantly’? Paragraph from line 259 ff was difficult to follow. Why did you discuss the relationship of VJ to age and sex when this was not an aim of your study? I could not follow your argument very well. Consider reworking the paragraph. Line 272 Can you say your results showed a plateau when you only investigated adolescents and not the age before or afterwards? Maybe there is no change in relationship, or maybe there is a plateau into young adults? Conclusion I don’t think you can conclude that TMS affects VJP as you have only shown an association not that the TMS affects the performance. Table 1 Please indicate which are the results for the t-test and which from the ANOVA Aims to compare jump performance and toe muscular strength in 2 ways. Secondary was to directly compare the two types of measurement across age and sex. Reviewer #2: Dear, Editor, It was a great opportunity to review the manuscript. The authors investigated the correlations between TMS and physical performance across sex and age. The research questions are interesting; however some issues must be handled. In my opinion, the manuscript is suitable for publication in Plos One; however, some issues must be handled. The points to be revised are as follows; Page 10, Lines 159-161; Please give more information about normalization. Page 10-11, lines 164-176; Please give reference about used methods. Page 13; please add all abbreviation under the table such as HS, JH. Page 14; it may be more methodologically correct to use real p-values instead of using > or <. In results, Page 14, line 213; What is corresponding association with TPS? Page 14, lines 240-243; I am not sure that referring the table or figure in discussion section is suitable. Page 18, lines 284-286; why did you not add the demographic data in regression analysis in your study? Page 18, lines 280-281; I could not understand how the authors reached this conclusion, considering the above-mentioned information. Page 18, lines 289-291; The obtained correlation values is quite low. If we were to do this study in sedentary adolescents, what will the results we obtained? Do you have any limitations? What do your results mean? Do you have any suggestions for using this information for clinical or sporting purposes? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-13635R1Effects of age and sex on association between toe muscular strength and vertical jump performance in adolescent populationsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kurihara, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 16 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for asking me to re-review this paper. I congratulate the authors on reworking the analysis to ensure independence of data, and reworking sections of the manuscript accordingly. I have just a few comments 1. Jump height I assume was normalised to body height by the statement on page 10 line 158 that the height recorded was that ‘above the metal pole’. Could you clarify if the metal pole was set at the participants stretched arm height, or something else? 2. Please include the interpretation you used for the correlation, and reference it. The criteria used should be reported in the methods statistical section, the corresponding category used in your discussion line 216 (currently ‘relatively weak’), and inserted in your conclusion line 286 to describe the strength of the association. E.g TGS is relatively weakly associated with…. Reviewer #2: Thank you again for your effort on this manuscript! I appreciate the time and consideration taken to make these changes. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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