Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 29, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-17792 Comparison of diagnostic accuracy of 2D and 3D measurements to determine opportunistic screening of osteoporosis using the proximal femur on abdomen-pelvic CT PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hong Il Ha, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by August 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper compares the osteoporosis predictive ability of 2D and 3D assessments performed on CT scans. The prediction accuracy was assessed through comparisons between HUHA and T-score / BMD values extracted from DXA. Some concerns arises throughout the manuscript, which in this Reviewer opinion should be deeply addressed by the authors. Specific comments: - In the Introduction section, Authors state that the study was motivated by the “need to overcame the limitations and underusage of DXA”. Regarding underusage, a specific contextual framework should be added, as DXA is the gold standard and most popular method for osteoporosis screening in many countries around the world. Regarding limitations, these should be specified, especially considering that the evaluation of the accuracy of the proposed method is in fact exclusively based on the DXA-classification between healthy and osteoporotic patients. The predictive performance of the T-score has indeed demonstrated to be moderate and it is reported in literature that approximately half of the people suffering from a fracture presents non-osteoporotic T-score levels (/10.1007/s11914-011-0093-9). In this Reviewer opinion, this could definitely affect the present study and probably, different classification parameters, such as the femoral strength (/10.1016/j.compbiomed.2020.104093), could be more reliable. - The rationale behind a two-dimensional analysis carried out on three-dimensional images is not clear and should be deepened: having CT available for the osteoporosis diagnosis is in fact rare, since DXA is the technique of choice in most cases. Why reduce the amount of information available by analysing a single plane of the entire volume? Reviewer #2: Osteoporosis is derived from Greek, which literally means a bone with holes. It is defined by the World Health Organization (WHO) as “a systemic skeletal disease characterized by low bone mass and microarchitectural deterioration of bone tissue with a consequent increase in bone fragility and susceptibility to fracture”. Osteoporosis is not related with the fat, but with the bone or its absence (holes). it is confusing that you use HU at fat to predict osteoporosis. It makes more sense to use porosity of the bone or something similar. Do your data include any patient with osteoporosis-related femur fracture? Do the 3D-Femur-VOI and 2Dcoronal-ROI measurements are obtained manually? How much time did you need to do the measurements? Is it needed any special training to perform the analysis? You evaluate the 3D-Femur-VOI for the total femur but the 2Dcoronal-ROI only for the femoral neck. Have you study other 2D regions? It is not clear the figure's caption. They are repeated. It will be easier if you divide the captions. One of the limitations of standard analysis of DXA images is that they do not differentiate between trabecular and cortical bone. This could be solved with CT images. Do you analyze differences between cortical and trabecular bone? ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-17792R1Comparison of diagnostic accuracy of 2D and 3D measurements to determine opportunistic screening of osteoporosis using the proximal femur on abdomen-pelvic CTPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hong Il Ha, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 15 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The Authors responded satisfactorily and precisely to each comment and the requested additional information have been added in the manuscript. The result is a significantly improved manuscript. Reviewer #2: The authors have done a great work and answer the most of the questions properly, however, some concerns remained: 1. In my opinion CT scans have several advantages against DXA scans to osteoporosis diagnosis and monitoring, but they are not properly described on the paper. The World Health Organization (WHO) has established DXA as the best densitometric technique for assessing BMD in postmenopausal women and based the definitions of osteopenia and osteoporosis on its results. In fact, you use DXA T-score to evaluate your measurements. So, I wouldn’t say that one of the limitations of DXA is its underusage for osteoporosis diagnosis. CT scans radiation is higher, and they are more expensive than DXA scans; therefore, I don’t see the fact that CT scans could substitute DXA for osteoporosis screening. Other screening tools as ultrasound or DXA-based 3D modelling techniques could be a better alternative. Include these methods in the state of the art. This doesn’t mean opportunistic screening of osteoporosis using CT couldn’t be beneficial. Main advantages of CT are the 3D measurements and the possibility to evaluate bone compartments separately, and those must be addressed on the paper. 2. As fracture is one of the main outcomes of osteoporosis, you should specify that your data do not include any osteoporosis fracture, how are you explore that and why patients with fracture are not included in the study. 3. On Materials and Methods: “Osteoporosis was defined as a T-score ≤ −2.5 and nonosteoporosis was defined as a T-score> −2.5 [18].” a. I don’t think this reference suits better for this definition. You should use WHO or IOF references. b. What about low bone density or osteopenia patients? Have you tested? Those are the more interested to detect for a clinical point of view. Besides they are more difficult to diagnose and monitor using only DXA scans. 4. Age is highly related with osteoporosis. In fact, you have statistical significances between osteoporotic and nonosteoporotic patients (Table I). Have you tested your statistics in a age-matched cohort? Or removing age effect? If not, you should indicate in the discussion. 5. In the discussion you write: “The primary goal of our study was to determine whether the diagnostic performance for evaluation of osteoporosis differs depending on the 2D or 3D measurement.” Do you refer to both measurements on CT or 2D-DXA vs. 3D-CT? You should clarify. 6. Differences between your results and other studies on the literature are not clear. Degenerative changes and aortic veins at the lumbar spine may lead an overestimation of the BMD measured at the DXA but not affect to QCT measurements. Racial differences shouldn’t affect to the accuracy of a technique. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Comparison of diagnostic accuracy of 2D and 3D measurements to determine opportunistic screening of osteoporosis using the proximal femur on abdomen-pelvic CT PONE-D-21-17792R2 Dear Dr. Hong Il Ha, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ewa Tomaszewska, DVM Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The Authors responded satisfactorily to each comment and the requested additional information have been added in the manuscript. The result is a significantly improved manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No |
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