Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 11, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-15253A ten-year review of indications and outcomes of obstetric admissions to an intensive care unit in a low-resource countryPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Anane-Fenin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 21 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This is an important report on the causes of ICU admission and mortality among obstetric patients in Ghana. The authors did a revision of the charts of the last 10 years in the context of limited personnel and infrastructure. However, there is a quite missed analysis opportunity. Major issues: - The authors apparently have data from each woman (with very few missing data) from ICU admission to death or discharge from the ICU. Why not perform survival analysis here? A Kaplan Meier plot would show with more granularity the mortality. That is more informative for action. - The point above would have alerted the authors not to use the length of stay as a factor for mortality in table 3. Conduct an appropriate survival regression that uses both the death variable and length of stay as outcome (Cox proportional hazards model, or even discrete logistic regression). - The authors have a longitudinal dataset. Why not check whether over time the pattern of mortality and its causes changed. Are the conditions killing in 2019 the same as in the very first years of 2010s? And did the mortality levels change (improve) over time? - Please indicate whether are you using the ICD coding and what version are using. Minor issues: I. Abstract There is a lack of aims in the background. II. Background No comments III. Methods Can you indicate whether are using ICD? And what version of ICD? And it would be good to indicate in the subsection data items the code. Line 160 - “placental abruptio” should be “placental abruption” Line 185 - Correct it to be: “The significance level was set at 5%, and 95% confidence intervals are reported”. Remember in order to reject a null hypothesis from a confidence interval the null must be out of the interval. Currently, this line does not mean that. IV. Results Line 193 - the 443 participants were not recruited. You did include them and among the 443 it is unclear whether some were included twice (on different pregnancies). So be precise in the language. Lines 193 to 196 - Are the 1721 ICU admissions from the women delivering? Line 204 - I cannot read this line on the PDF. I got it from the word document. Table 3 - we need measure of association (odds-ratio, relative risk or hazard ratios) rather than just p-values. Please see the second major issue. Table 4 - I cannot read table 4 in the PDF. Had to get it from the Word document. How the covariates for this analysis were selected? That process must be explained in the statistical section. Figure 1, 2 - Couple of this: Make on as 1a) and the 1b) please make plain bar charts. Avoid these 3D features. And please add a y-axis. Put clearer caption for these figures. This figure must stand out alone. As of now, “Indications for admission” or “category of hypertension” are insufficient. Figure 3 is misleading Subsection “Relationship between age and hypertension” - why age is categorized this way? VI. Discussion Please add a discussion for the limitations of this study. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Abstract: � The conclusion seems inconsistent with objective/purpose and available data from the study. The researchers should align their conclusions to the indications for admission 2. Plain English summary: 1) This manuscript seems not fitting to the PLOS ONE template. Please consider including plain English summary right after the abstract section for lay readers 3. Introduction: 1) Study objectives missing in the background section of the manuscript 4. Methodology � It’s very important the researchers make brief descriptions on how obstetric charts were retrieved, whether records were kept electronically or in manual archives, how the ICU data were linked to the obstetric information in the maternity chart including transfer notes � Was there any exclusion/ inclusion criteria to guide the data extraction? For instance, some cases didn’t have date of transfer or death in the ICU and wondering how this affected the total study sample and data collection process � Please clearly indicate whether the cases were transferred to ICU from the same hospital or referrals from other health facilities in the regions taken place. The researchers should present statistics on this data. This can be linked to the question above as how the accessed patient data on the recent obstetric experience particularly if the cases were referred from other health facilities. The researchers should explain these details in the data collection section 5. Results: 1) Page 14 - A total of 443 participants between the ages of 14 and 48 were recruited into the study. What was the rationale for including only 14-48 age bracket in this study? 2) Page 14 - There were 298 maternal mortalities, 115 obstetric deaths in ICU. What was the difference between maternal mortality and obstetric death? Please explain and use languages consistently. 3) Page 10 - Missing values for either date of admission or date of transfer/ death were approximately 3.4% (15 out of 443). If the date of transfer/death was missing were these excluded from analysis? Please confirm 4) Page 10 - About 47% of all participants (n=207) had undergone recent surgery 213 (caesarean section or laparotomy for uterine repair, postpartum hysterectomy or other 214 indications). The temporal reference in this statement lacks precision and very confusing to determine any association with the outcomes of interest. What is “recent”? Does this refer to the current obstetric experience? 5) What is the relevance of presenting Fig headings on page 10? Does this comply with the journal’s manuscript template? I found it odd to see the three disjoined headings in this section of the result. 6) A fundamental question was whether all sturdy participants were transferred from labour ward immediately after of during childbirth 7) While the sample size seems very low given the ten year period, it’s unfortunate the researchers didn’t show the pattern of ICU admission incidents and associated outcomes over time. I still urge them to discuss this trend as much as possible to help appreciate changes and to trigger health care planning accordingly 6. Discussion: � On page 13 – argument related to the 25.7% ICU admission “the highest ever”, which focused on the absence of adequate facility and geographic coverage doesn’t seem cogent with the indications and outcomes. Furthermore, the suggested expansion of ICU facilities personnel on page 14 should come under conclusion/recommendation and not as part of the discussion � Page 14- “Although the outcome for those less than or equal to 17 years were generally good…” The researchers should discuss their results based on data and in comparison with previous research findings rather than based on hypothetical statements. I suggest they should argue how and why their findings for this age group was different from their hypothesis and how literature confirms that � Page 15 – The researchers presented general reality about hemorrhage and sepsis as indications for ICU admission however they failed to discuss their own findings in this regard and compare to other similar literature. This is very important and can improve the quality of this paper � Are the patient factors confounded by other clinical condition or delays in seeking care? 7. Conclusion � As highlighted in the abstract section, the conclusion should also include significance of indications for obstetric ICU admission and how these could be addressed which is the central objective of the study ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-15253R1A ten-year review of indications and outcomes of obstetric admissions to an intensive care unit in a low-resource countryPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Anane-Fenin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 15 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): This is the second revision of this manuscript. The is authors present a much-needed review of intensive care among obstetric patients from a Teaching Hospital in a West African country. The data collection in itself shows how this exercise, although hard, can be done somewhere else to help to set priorities and hopefully, proper actions can happen. The authors responded fully to the reviewers' comments and did, as requested, further analysis. I appreciate that. Few more issues: 1. It would be good to have the abstract separated as introduction, methods, results and conclusion 2. Typos a. Line 161 - No need for the “:” b. Line 222 - No need for the “:” c. Line 223 - please do not write STATA It is Stata (see the official Stata documentation). d. Line 273 - No need for the “/” e. Line 293 - It should be “Medical” not “Med9cal 3. Please correct from multivariate to multivariable in the whole document 4. In the “Factors influencing outcomes following obstetric ICU admission” subsection, please: a. add descriptives of the length of stay. At least min/max and the mean. b. Describe the overall survival as well. Example: that ¼ of the patients died in XX days (Stata sts list command should offer that). In the same line you can extract the median survival 5. Table 2 - please add the reference categories. For example, for age we need the “below 25” and as HR we would put “1” or “Reference”. 6. Figures 4, 5 and 6 could be placed in a single figure 4 with a, b and c. Furthermore: a. Add an overall survival curve so you would have a), b), c) and d) b. Report the risk set per each 5 day c. Please censor time at 15 or 20th day. 7. Line 326 it mentions a supplementary file. I did not see such a file. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed the review comments adequately and I have no further comments. I recommend that this manuscript should be considered for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Alemayehu Gebremariam Agena [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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A ten-year review of indications and outcomes of obstetric admissions to an intensive care unit in a low-resource country PONE-D-21-15253R2 Dear Dr. Anane-Fenin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Orvalho Augusto, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Just one small comment: For the figures 4a), 4b), 4c) and 4d) can you censor the time at 20? If you cannot, OK to keep the plots as they are now. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-15253R2 A ten-year review of indications and outcomes of obstetric admissions to an intensive care unit in a low-resource country Dear Dr. Anane-Fenin: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Orvalho Augusto Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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