Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 5, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-02466 Prospective evaluation of percutaneous hepatic perfusion with melphalan as a treatment for unresectable liver metastases from colorectal cancer PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Meijer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: This is a prospective study on a complex locoregional chemotherapy procedure named percutaneous hepatic perfusion. Percutaneous hepatic perfusion was performed with melphalan (high-dosage - approximately 200 mg) and hemofiltration. The sample size is small (8 patients) and the primary endpoint is response. Considering the small sample size, it is not possible to investigate about the effect of selected variables on response (logistic regression analysis). Secondary endpoints include adverse events that resulted very limited (probably in relation to the use of hemofiltration and the skill of the Authors). The scientific contribution is important but, in my opinion, the Authors should support with more emphasis the reasons to perform this locoregional chemotherapy procedure. The indications for M-PHP are still not defined in the international scientific literature. International guidelines consider locoregional chemotherapy as third line for unresectable CRCLM. The Authors protocol (as reported in the supporting information file), considers M-PHP for the CRCLM patients for whom “No other standard systemic treatment options (are) available”, but, at same time, include patients “Candidate for neoadjuvant chemotherapy as determined during the multidisciplinary meeting to down size the tumor.” and “Patients (they had) received no, one or more courses of systemic therapy”. Minor changes Abstract page 3, line 6: please, added “with hemofiltration”. Materials and Methods, Procedure details, page 7, line 12: please, clarify if the 16-F double-balloon catheter was positioned percutaneously or by surgical preparation of the femoral (or saphenous) vein. Table 4: please, precise if patients with grade 3/4 leukopenia/neutropenia received granulocyte colony-stimulating factors. Table 4: please, re-format line 4 (gr). In Discussion, the Authors should clarify with more details the reasons for believing and choosing a complex procedure such as M-PHP. In particular the Authors should clarify the reasons to propose percutaneous hepatic perfusion in CRCLM patients not previously submitted to systemic therapy or after failure of the first line. In Discussion, the Authors should elaborate on the reasons of the very limited adverse events. In Discussion, as concerning the limitations paragraph, page 12, line 8, please added: “…definitive conclusions. In relation to this problem, the importance of multi-center recruitment, as performed in other locoregional chemotherapy trials […please cite this reference… Mambrini A, Sanguinetti F, Pacetti P, Caudana R, Iacono C, Guglielmi A, Guadagni S, Del Freo A, Fiorentini G, Cantore M. Intra-arterial infusion of 5-fluorouracil, leucovirin, epirubicin, and carboplatin (FLEC regimen) in unresectable pancreatic cancer: results of a ten-year experience. In vivo. 2006; 20: 751-6.], must be emphasized. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by 20 April, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-21-02466R1 Prospective evaluation of percutaneous hepatic perfusion with melphalan as a treatment for unresectable liver metastases from colorectal cancer PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Meijer, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 13 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Stefano Guadagni Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The revision 1 is good but the paper needs further Minor changes. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? 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PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled ‘Prospective evaluation of percutaneous hepatic perfusion with melphalan as a treatment for unresectable liver metastases from colorectal cancer’ with the aim to prospectively evaluate the efficacy and safety of M-PHP in patients with unresectable CRLM. The manuscript can be further improved. Sample size calculation Page 9. the write up on the sample size requires further improvement. Information on margin of error, power of study to be stated. The statement of ‘16.5% around the observed proportion’ not clear. Page 10, what range refers to, min – max or IQR to be clearly stated. All percentage figures to be at least 1 decimal point. For Figure 1, more information could be added such as intervention, assessment, outcome variables, duration/period etc. For Table 2, 3, 4, dash (-) to be denoted in the table footnote. For Table 3, days to be stated as the initial measurements which then converted to months. This needs to be stated in the methodology. mo to be denoted in table footnote. In the Reference list, reference number 28 and 29 to conform with the journal format i.e journal name. Reviewer #2: The paper is very interesting but this is a very complex type of locoregional chemotherapy for hepatic metastases. In 8 patients the procedure has been performed percutaneously. The sample size is too small to demonstrate that the introduction of a 16F catheter is always possible without complications in all types of femoral arteries (also arteries with a diameter lower than 7 mm). Minor changes suggested: The authors should elaborate the previous concepts in Material and Methods and in Discussion. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Prospective evaluation of percutaneous hepatic perfusion with melphalan as a treatment for unresectable liver metastases from colorectal cancer PONE-D-21-02466R2 Dear Dr. Meijer, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Stefano Guadagni Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Good revision addressing all my concerns. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-02466R2 Prospective evaluation of percutaneous hepatic perfusion with melphalan as a treatment for unresectable liver metastases from colorectal cancer Dear Dr. Meijer: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Stefano Guadagni Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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