Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 20, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-26356Antenatal screening of depressive and manic symptoms in south Brazilian childbearing women: A transversal study in advance of the pandemic scenarioPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schier de Fraga, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. More specifically, it would be interesting to better justify why your sample size is small and discuss this point if it could not be increased in a reasonable time. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 04 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript entitled ‘Antenatal screening of depressive and manic symptoms in south Brazilian childbearing women: A transversal study in advance of the pandemic scenario’ with the aim to observe the frequency of Mood Disorder and the effectiveness of screening scales for routine use by health professionals during prenatal care in high-risk pregnancies. The manuscript can be improved based on the comments below. Abstract Methodology/Principal Findings The sentence ‘This is a transversal study including 61 childbearing women in the second trimester that were submitted to the Edinburgh Postnatal Depression Scale (EPDS) and Mood Disorder Questionnaire (MDQ)’ requires revision. Introduction Line 69, the word validated in Brazil to be added. Materials and methods Sample size Line 102, more information to be provided e.g 1 or 2 tailed test. The sample size figures derived to be stated. Line 103, for the margin of error, (confidence interval) to be removed. Line 105, reference number to be included. Data analysis Line 147, Table 1, IQR could be used along with median. Line 149-153, there are many statistical tests mentioned but not all were used in the analyses. For the statistical tests that were not used, it has to be removed. If the statistical test was used, it is to be clearly denoted in the results section and mention in the statistical analyses section. Line 155, statistical software and the level of significance to be stated. Results Baseline characteristics of the subjects to be included and presented in table form. Line 171, Graph 1 to be replaced with Figure 1. Line 182, the cut off for Bipolar Disorder SCID-5 to be stated. Table 2 Depressive Episode SCID-5, the percentage figures were presented based on row but for total, the percentage figures was based on column. This needs to be standardized. Graph 1, the dependent and independent variable to be clearly denoted in the footnote. Discussion Line 255, the word 'chart 1' to be replaced with table and respective table number or to be omitted. Line 259 Chart 1, typo Sensibility. Decimal points for percentages to be standardized. Not all references conform to PLoS One format. Reviewer #2: Perinatal period is a time of great vulnerability for women, especially when they present a history of psychiatric disorder. Mood disorder relapses are frequent in perinatal period. Howewer the screening for mood disorders has to be improved in gestational period to prevent several consequences for mothers and children and to differentiate bipolar disorder from other conditions. This study has two objectives. The first is to estimate the frequency of mood disorder in perinatal period. The second is to evaluate EPDS and MDQ effectiveness in the screening of mood disorders in gestational period. This study is very interesting and very clear. Howewer, I have some comments. L60 "MDQ is a screening tool for episodes of mania" => The MDQ is a screening tool for history of mania or hypomania L87 "This cross-sectional study included 61 childbearing women" The sample size is small and should be discussed L89 High risk pregnancies group should be defined. Moreover, the reason why high risk pregnancies have been chosen to evaluate MDQ and EPDS effectiveness should be explained. L279 "Compared to the general female population, childbearing women have lower suicide rates." Nevertheless, suicide is one of the leading cause of maternal death in several countries. • Knight M, Bunch K, Tuffnell D, Shakespeare J, Kotnis R, Kenyon S, Kurinczuk JJ, on behalf of MBRRACE-UK. Saving Lives, Improving Mothers’ Care - Lessons learned to inform maternity care from the UK and Ireland Confidential, Enquiries into Maternal Deaths and Morbidity 2015-17, 2019 • SepVangen S, Bødker B, Ellingsen L, Saltvedt S, Gissler M, Geirsson RT, Nyfløt LT. Maternal deaths in the Nordic countries, Acta Obstet Gynecol Scand, 2017 • Amélie Boutin PhD , Arlin Cherian MPH , Jessica Liauw MD, MHSc ,Susie Dzakpasu PhD ,Heather Scott MD ,Michiel Van den Hof MD ,Jocelynn Cook PhD ,Jennifer Blake MD , K.S. Joseph MD, PhD , for the Canadian Perinatal Surveillance System(Public Health Agency of Canada), Database autopsy: An efficient and effective confidential en-quiry into maternal deaths in Canada, Journal of Obstetrics and Gynaecology Canada, 2020 • Deneux-Tharaux C, Morau E, Dreyfus M; pour le Cnemm. Mortalité maternelle en France 2013–2015 : un profil qui évolue [Maternal mortality in France 2013-2015: An evolving profile]. Gynecol Obstet Fertil Senol. 2021 Jan ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Elsa MOREAU [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-21-26356R1Antenatal screening of depressive and manic symptoms in south Brazilian childbearing women: A transversal study in advance of the pandemic scenarioPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Schier de Fraga, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please improve the manuscript according to Rev. 1 last comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 21 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Raoul Belzeaux, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Minor comments Table 3, symbol n(%) to be added. For total, 100% to be added apart from total number. Line 264, typo 'countries. [29-32] Therefore'' Reviewer #2: I have no futher comment about this study. All my comments about the previous round review were corrected. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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Antenatal screening of depressive and manic symptoms in south Brazilian childbearing women: A transversal study in advance of the pandemic scenario PONE-D-21-26356R2 Dear Dr. Schier de Fraga, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Raoul Belzeaux, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-26356R2 Antenatal screening of depressive and manic symptoms in south Brazilian childbearing women: A transversal study in advance of the pandemic scenario Dear Dr. Schier de Fraga: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Raoul Belzeaux Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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