Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 22, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-09447 Lives Saved and Lost in the First Six Month of the US COVID-19 Pandemic: A Retrospective Cost-Benefit Analysis PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Olga Yakusheva, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 7 may 2021 due. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Report for “Lives Saved and Lost in the First Six Month of the US COVID-19 Pandemic: A Retrospective Cost-Benefit Analysis” This article evaluates the benefits and costs of U.S. COVID-19 mitigation policy interventions. In terms of benefits, the authors calculate the number of lives saved by subtracting the observed actual number of deaths from the unmitigated potential number of deaths. In terms of costs, the authors estimate the potential number of deaths due to the economic downturn caused by the intervention policies, which is calculated by multiplying the GDP loss in this period with the cost-to-death ratio taken from economic literature. I have major concerns with respect to the methods used to estimate both the benefits and costs of the intervention policies. Benefits: The authors estimate the benefits of intervention policies by subtracting the actual number of deaths from the unmitigated potential number of deaths. By doing so, the authors assume that the decrease in COVID mortality in this time period is all caused by government mitigation policies, which is a questionable assumption in my opinion. First, the virus itself could become less deadly over time. Second, doctors could become more experienced in treating the disease. Third, high death rate in the initial time period could be caused by a shortage of medical equipment supply. Last but not least, people voluntarily adjust their behaviors to reduce the transmission of COVID even without any government policies. I doubt whether the methodology taken by the authors can tease out the impact of voluntary adjustments and get a clean estimate of the policy effects. Thus, the decrease in mortality is caused by multiple factors, including government intervention policies. Attributing all decrease in mortality to intervention policies will overestimate the benefits of these policies. Costs: The authors estimate the cost of intervention policies by calculating the potential number of deaths due to the economic downturn caused by the interventions. The key parameter in this calculation is the cost-to-death ratio. However, the authors do not make a clear distinction between short run income shocks and the differences in income levels. Theoretically, the impacts of income shocks can be very different from income levels. If people expect that the income level will return to normal, they may not adjust their behavior. Many estimates cited by the authors estimates the cost-to-death ratio using the differences in income levels. It is questionable whether these estimates can be applied to the COVID-19 pandemic case, which is more appropriately described as an income shock. Reviewer #2: This study is important because it reveals the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic in the USA in the first six months. The impact of the COVID-19 pandemic has been demonstrated by cost-benefit analysis. The most troubling aspects of the paper are presented under the following heads. 1. On page 5, lines 97-98 indicate that non-Covid-19 deaths are considered as costs. The reason for this has been shown as economic downturn. However, the cost of covid-19 should cover both the losses in the gross domestic product and the health expenses associated with Covid-19. On the other hand, the authors mentioned a different methodology when measuring the cost of Covid-19 under the analysis subheading in the method section (lines 130-149). The explanations in the analysis section are suitable as methods. Therefore, the sentence on lines 97-98 needs to be revised. 2. There are some writing errors in this study (eg Page 6, line 127, suc as COVID-19l). The writing errors should be carefully read and corrected by the authors. 3. I think the conclusion part of this study is not enough. The authors state that the net effect of Covid-19 on quality-adjusted life expectancy is ambiguous. It is suggested that the author explain a little more about this. The authors are expected to evaluate the possible effects of Covid-19 on quality-adjusted life expectancy. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Lives Saved and Lost in the First Six Month of the US COVID-19 Pandemic: A Retrospective Cost-Benefit Analysis PONE-D-21-09447R1 Dear Dr. Olga Yakusheva, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Carlos Alberto Zúniga-González, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear authors, I have made the decision to accept the manuscript, I consider that the point of the methods used to estimate benefits and costs related to intervention policies is debatable and I think the approach you give it to measure the mortality rate in the first 6 months of a pandemic; It has been a well-discussed manuscript, so I congratulate you for your contribution and effort in this type of research. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I still have my previous concern that the estimation of the decrease in mortality due to intervention policy is not “causal”. The decrease in COVID mortality in the lockdown period is not all caused by intervention policies. The paper lacks a proper methodology to identify the causal effect, for example comparing a state with strict lockdown v.s. another state with less strict lockdown, which is a quite standard methodology in the discipline of economics. Without a causal effect, the value of the cost and benefit analysis will be significantly limited. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-09447R1 Lives Saved and Lost in the First Six Month of the US COVID-19 Pandemic: A Retrospective Cost-Benefit Analysis Dear Dr. Yakusheva: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Prof. Carlos Alberto Zúniga-González Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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