Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 9, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-22412 A rare CTSC mutation in Papillon-Lefèvre Syndrome results in abolished serine protease activity and reduced NET formation but otherwise normal neutrophil function PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sanchez Klose, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specific revisions must address issues raised by reviewers, especially: - CTSC protein levels in neutrophils by western blot or flow cytometry including potential differences between families A and B. - changes in figures (dot plots instead of box/whiskers) and in manuscript text as suggested by reviewers -better delineate the effect of new mutation on NET by comparing NET release induced by other physiological agonists and in comparison with other patients with other PLS mutations. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 18 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript the authors examined two siblings with PLS due to a rare mutation in CTSC, 503A>G and compared them to another family of PLS previously described. Although this mutation is unusual, it has been previously described (ref 9). Also, one of the siblings, PLS2’s ability to form NET was previously reported (ref 41). Otherwise, the authors suggested that the neutrophil morphology, priming, chemotaxis, ROS production, and regulation of apoptosis were unchanged but NET formation upon PMA stimulation was severely depressed. These phenotypes were previously reported in PLS patients. PLS2, however, displayed more pronounced chemotaxis towards fMLF than PLS1 and lower level of spontaneous apoptosis. Given that most neutrophil phenotypes are similar to previously described PLS mutations, it would have been interesting to understand why PLS2 behaves differently. Otherwise, there is no or minimal gain in understanding of PLS offered by this manuscript. Other points: - Why not present NSP activities for all four PLS patients individually instead of box and whisker plots for each family? - Also, why use box and whisker plots for figure 3 but not for figure 2? - In figure 4, why was comparison to PLS3 and 4 not presented for all experiments? - In figure 6, why was NET formation shown only for PLS2? Do PLS1, 3, and 4 neutrophils have the same delayed response to PMA as PLS2? What about NET formation to PSMa2? Reviewer #2: Klose and coworkers described and analyzed four PLS patients from two families (A,B) with two different homozygous mutations in the cathepsin C gene. The mutation found in family A is an extremely rare allele deposited in some databases, and only one individual with homozygosity for the same Y168C residue substitution has been discovered in a previous paper. The second variation, Q252L, was reported to occur in one affected member of another family 20 years ago, but two other missense changes were also found in the CTSC gene of this individual. Hence the important work of Klose et al. underscores the clinical significance of these homozygous changes in the CTSC sequence and presents a variety of functional and biochemical data for neutrophils derived from new patients. To improve the manuscript, the following points should be addressed. Line 21: replace “indicated to be involved” by “suggesting its involvement in a …” The statement refers to CTSC and its impact on neutrophil functions. The three NSPs may be present in active form at low levels in some neutrophil populations and could be converted by other enzymes during maturation or after release. Line 22: delete “however” and “consequentially” Line 44: Homozygosity of CTSC mutations is frequently observed in consanguineous families and in small ethnic populations with a high degree of inbreeding. Other genetic variations may modify and contribute to the clinical manifestations and the functional impairments of neutrophils. To explain all manifestations as the result of a monogenic disease is an oversimplification. Line 59: insert “to” killing and to degrade Line 63: It is inappropriate to equal cathepsin G (Ctsg) and elastase (Ela2) deficient mice with PLS patients. Double deficient mice do not acquire infections spontaneously. The differences observed between wild type and double deficient mice are only seen under extreme experimental conditions titrating these mice with increasing doses of bacteria until they die. The authors should compare PLS patients with Ctsc-deficient (Ctsc-null) mice which are healthier than affected humans and do not suffer from periodontitis. Azurocidin is completely absent in all rodents by contrast to humans and may play a human-specific function which missing in PLS. The state of the research should be reported correctly. Line 448: Ela2-deficient or CTSG-deficient mice are not more susceptible to inflammations and infections than wild type mice under normal housing conditions. Differences are only seen under extreme experimental challenges. This interpretation of animal models gives a wrong impression to your readers, I am afraid. Line 506: please modify this sentence to make its content clear “how important NET formation induced by persistent high ROS levels and executed by HNE is in vivo Line 514: the authors are obviously very familiar with the JCI paper of Sorensen OE et al. from 2014, in which eosinophil peroxidase was found to be strongly reduced in PLS neutrophils (supplemental table). Have they indeed convinced themselves independently that peroxidase activities and peroxidase levels were unaltered in the neutrophils of the patients they have studies? Reviewer #3: In their manuscript, Sanchez Klose and collegues study a CTSC mutation that is associated with Papillon-Lefèvre Syndrome. The reported a new mutation in CTSC and characterise it’s impact on neutrophil functions. The manuscript is interesting and well-``written, and I believe interesting for Plos One readership. I have a few comments that I hope will be helpful to the authors. Major points: It is unclear what are the consequence of the mutation. Is this mutation affecting the stability/half-life or expression of CTSC? A simple Western Blot probing for CTSC would be very appropriate here to confirm that the protein expression is not affected by the mutation. Figure 4C): It seems that CD95 is not increasing much apoptosis (over basal level of death in untreated cells). Would an earlier time point be more appropriate to measure cell death? Minor points: Line 152: What is the calcium concentration? Figure 6A: A quantification of the microscopy slides would be relevant here. Would it be possible to report the proportion of cells generating NETs upon PMA treatment? It would be intereting to discuss more the effect of Y168C on the protease activity. Why is it affecting the activity? Could you suggest an effect based on CTSC structure? 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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A rare CTSC mutation in Papillon-Lefèvre Syndrome results in abolished serine protease activity and reduced NET formation but otherwise normal neutrophil function PONE-D-21-22412R1 Dear Dr. Sanchez Klose, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Charaf Benarafa, D.V.M., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: My comments have been addressed to a reasonable extend. I have no other concerns regarding this manuscript. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-21-22412R1 A rare CTSC mutation in Papillon-Lefèvre Syndrome results in abolished serine protease activity and reduced NET formation but otherwise normal neutrophil function Dear Dr. Sanchez Klose: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Dr. Charaf Benarafa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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