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PONE-D-21-26801Medical students facing the pandemic – assessment of resilience, well-being and burnout in the COVID-19 eraPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Nowicki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 20 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript titled “Medical students facing the pandemic – assessment of resilience, well-being and burnout in the COVID-19 era” assessed resilience, well-being and burnout using validated tools as well as self-created questionnaire administered through Facebook and other online students’ platforms over a one-month period. The majority of medical students had lower levels of resilience and higher burnout with corresponding well-being. Lower resilience and higher burnout was associated with diagnosed mental health conditions, increased use of stimulants, negative self-esteem, and reduced motivation to learn, while higher resilience and less burnout was associated with willingness to work voluntarily in the COVID-19 units. This is an interesting manuscript that may help fill the gap in information regarding resilience, burnout and well-being in Polish medical students. As the authors suggest, their data only reflects the situation with COVID-19 at the time of collection, and future studies should monitor the situation as the country recovers or changes in the future. It also may provide points for institutions outside of Poland to consider. Listed below are suggestions and comments to help clarify some points and to potentially improve the utility of this manuscript: General: • Strongly suggest editing for English grammar and spelling. Title: • Line 1: Suggest adding “Polish” to the beginning of the title so it reads: “Polish medical students facing the pandemic – assessment of resilience, well-being and burnout in the COVID-19 era” to be an accurate reflection of the manuscript Abstract: • Line 24: Introduction: Suggest replacing “MSs” with “Polish medical students” • Line 27: Methods: the self-made survey is not mentioned • Line 34: Results: add “friends and” in front of “relatives” • General: Mental health was a large component of this manuscript, but it is not mentioned in the abstract. Neither is use of stimulants or views on mistrust towards healthcare professionals. Introduction: • There should be reference after every statement – for example, at the end of line 52, it mentions many past studies, but there is no reference(s) at the end of that statement. • Lines 67-69 is a statement that says “might have taken a toll” – the authors may be able to find a reference that can change the statement to “have taken a toll”. Or if unable to find one, then can state that and bring up the study. • Would be helpful to understand what the restrictions in Poland were for COVID-19. • There is a statement defining resilience (lines 95-97) in the methods that may be better placed in the last paragraph of the introduction. • The last sentence of the introduction doesn’t mention the other factors in the self-created questionnaire about mental health, use of stimulants, presence of COVID-19 infections in respondents and their friends/family, COVID-19 related volunteer or paid work, medical education and views on mistrust towards healthcare professionals. Methods: • Line 82: How were the various Facebook groups and studygrams chosen? Was it general medical student group or certain clubs that may introduce a bias in the respondents? Was it possible to determine the response rate, validate that it was medical students who responded, and eliminate duplicates in response (same student answering more than once)? • Line 83: Were there reminders/multiple posts within the one-month period? How many? • Line 94: Are the RS-14 levels as seen in Figure 1 defined by the use of the survey? Could you add an label for the x-axis and the score range for each category in the methods section or in the figure? • Line 101: What are the scores that would indicate poor well-being vs good well-being? • Line 105: Should specify that the Maslach Burnout Inventory – General Survey for Students was designed for college and university students. Also, the reference is from the 1980s and this particular survey was designed later. • Line 111: Should add see Table 2 for reference values of low, moderate and high • Line 112: There should be a statement if two-dimensional burnout for this survey is defined by the survey or by the authors. • Line 117: How was the self-created part of the survey designed? Did it go through a pilot with students and faculty and refined? Was it a pull down menu of choices or open answer? It would be extremely helpful for the self-created questionnaire to be an appendix of this manuscript. And the data should be provided in accordance to PLOS policy. • Line 124: It would be helpful if volunteer or paid work was better defined or explained, and why they were combined as they would have different motivating factors. Is volunteer or paid work part of the curriculum? • Line 141: Please add number of Polish medical schools and whether they all have similar Year 1- Year 6 formats of curriculum. It would also be helpful to have a brief description of the curriculum for those readers who are not familiar with the curriculum. • Line 144: Is there an estimate of the total number of Polish medical students (and perhaps gender/age/year of study breakdown) to determine an estimated response rate and whether the respondents and their demographics are a representative sample? Results: • Lines 162-163: What is the overlap of those two groups? Is there an article about the pre-pandemic levels of mental health issues in this age group? • Line 168: Is there information regarding how many students were newly diagnosed with psychiatric conditions? • Line 175-176: Is there information regarding how many students started using stimulants? • Line 182: In the abstract, it states that “The SARS-CoV-2 infection both among respondents and their relatives did not influence the results”, but this is not stated anywhere else in the manuscript. It could go here. Also, the abstract and methods only mention respondents and family, but Line 180 mentions friends – they should all be consistent. It may also be helpful to understand the context – what was the infection rate and death rate due to COVID-19 in Poland? • Line 184: Would it be possible to separate out the participants who worked, those who currently work and those who plan to work and those participants who volunteered, those who currently volunteer and those to plan to volunteer? These categories may be different. • Line 186: What are examples for potential consequences? • Lines 189-194: Were these choices in the survey or an open answer? It looks like a list that students chose from – what if students had a potential concern that was not listed? The choices and number of respondents could be more clear in table form. • Line 209: What is the Final Medical Exam? Is this for graduation? Ability to practice? Both? • Line 220: It is interesting that 80.2% of respondents through that social aversion and mistrust towards doctors increased during the pandemic – this should be discussed in the next section with possible reasons and an explanation of public perceptions in Poland. Can also give examples of challenges faced by the national healthcare system mentioned in line 222. • Line 266: Replace “particular” with “the three” Discussion: • Line 324: Why do the authors think that the lowest resilience in among 1st and 6th year students? Are there articles to support similar findings or are these unique? • Line 344: Although there is scarce data on resilience, burnout and well-being in the population of Polish medical students, are there reports from nearby countries or those with similar curriculum that were similarly affected by COVID? How are the results similar or unique? • As mentioned above for Line 220: It is interesting that 80.2% of respondents through that social aversion and mistrust towards doctors increased during the pandemic – this should be discussed in the next section with possible reasons and an explanation of public perceptions in Poland. • Could add a statement that the study population is outside the validated range of RS-14. • There is a lot of data presented, but the conclusion is to develop resilience building strategies. What about mental health support? Tables and Figures: • Suggest a figure showing average resilience score in Years 1 through 6. • Suggest a figure showing average scores for the three dimensions of burnout and frequency of two- and three-dimensional burnout in Years 1 through 6. • Suggest add graph of RS-14 score and two-dimensional burnout and RS-14 score and well-being score in Figure 2. • Suggest a distribution figure showing well-being scores, similar to resilience, and average well-being scores in Years 1 through 6. • Could Table 3 be a scatter plot, or a more visual way to show the distribution? Is there a correlation coefficient between burnout and resilience? How similar are these? Reviewer #2: 1. Standard English should be used for the entire manuscript. Specific sentences that were unclear include Lines 44, 52, 58, 63, 68-69, 111. 2. Lines 52-55 refer to “many past studies”, however there are no citations associated with this statement. 3. Lines 59-60 of the introduction states findings “reported in our study”, however this would be more appropriate in the discussion. Additionally, the sentence regarding “decreased motivation and concerns of inappropriate levels of knowledge, etc.” should be supported by a reference. 4. Resilience is defined in two areas- lines 70 and again in line 95-96, which is redundant. 5. In the Methods section, Lines 117-135 when explaining the self-created part of the survey, it may be better to summarize the five question domains in the text, then provide the actual questions on the survey in supplement material. 6. Line 142- Is it supposed to be “medical facilities” instead of “medical faculties”? 7. Lines 144-146 and Table 1 present survey results and should be moved to the Results section. 8. Lines 157 and 286- chi-square should be written out explicitly 9. What is the response rate to the survey? The data presented in Line 144 describes that 1864 respondents entered the survey, however, how many total medical students are there in Poland who could have completed the survey? 10. Results section- Lines 162-225 describe all of the results of the self-created survey. These results may be better presented in a table and the key findings highlighted in the text of the results section. 11. Figure 1 should have a label on the X-axis 12. It is unclear how the “resilience score” correlates with the 6 categories of resilience in Figure 1 (very low, low, on the low end, moderate, moderately high, high). Placing a legend in the figure may help clarify this. 13. Results section- Lines 236-262 describe the correlation between the resilience score and medical student characteristics gathered in the self-created survey. These results may be better presented in a table and the highlights discussed in the results section. 14. Results section- Lines 280-287 describe the correlation between burnout and medical student characteristics gathered in the self-created survey. These results may be better presented in a table and the highlights discussed in the results section. 15. Figure 2- the meaning of the 2 or 3 stars/dots in the figure is unclear. Please explain 16. Line 296-297- The description of the MSWBI score range and meaning should be in the methods section. 17. Lines 319-321- This was a one-time survey completed during the pandemic, therefore, you don’t have a baseline measure of resilience, burn out and well-being before the pandemic. Therefore, the statement that “2/3 of the respondents presented lower levels of resilience indicated a problem with ability to maintain or regain mental health while experience adversity such as a global pandemic” is not possible because you don’t know what their baseline level of resilience was before the pandemic. 18. Lines 324-326- What are potential reasons the 1st and 6th year students had the lowest resilience? 19. The Discussion is limited to a discussion about resilience and suggestions to improve education about resilience in medical education. Please expand the discussion to also comment on burnout and well-being. 20. Please expand on other limitations of the study aside from the survey being online and the author bias of the self-created survey questions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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