Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 15, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-26422Different contra-sound effects between noise and music stimuli seen in N1m and psychophysical responsesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kawase, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This article summarizes the results of two independent experiments aimed at evaluating the "central masking phenomenon". The first experiment measured the effect of filtered noise and music on the tone-evoked magnetic fields (N1m). In the second experiment, the perceptual correlate was measured by evaluating the effect of this same contralateral acoustic stimulation (CAS) on the response time for detection of the probe sound The investigated topic is interesting, since we do not know many aspects of central masking. The experiments are impressive to be properly executed, the manuscript is easy to read and the figures stand out for their quality. However, I believe that some aspects of the study design need to be explained in more detail in order to prepare the manuscript for publication: 1) I think the justification for the experiments should be strengthened. It is not entirely clear what specific aspect of central masking is to be studied. We know that the masking effect of music is far higher than noise (there is still controversy as to whether noise generates central masking (see Smith et al, (2000) https://doi.org/10.1121/1.428274). Therefore, the study of the CAS level seems relevant. I recommend a little more in these aspects, in order to explain the novelty of the study 2) 2) In continuation with the above, I recommend detailing how both experiments complement each other, in order to justify the relevance of both 3) I think it is important to point out why “the response time” was selected to assess central masking. Along these lines, I think it is important to detail the protocol of the second experiment, since the CAS could act as a clue to detect the ipsilateral probe stimulus (the subjects will know that after the contralateral stimulus, the ipsilateral probe tone will appear) Additionally, I would like to point out some minor aspects that could improve the manuscript: Methodology: Psychoacoustic experiment: • I recommend detailing all the stimulation parameters, it is especially relevant to know the inter-stimulus interval (was it constant or random?) • Was the CAS synchronous with the ipsilateral stimulus? Or was it similar to the protocol used with the magnetoencephalography technique? • Was the reaction time measured in the ipsilateral, contralateral hand or was it left to the preference of the volunteers? • The age range is wide, was it statistically controlled in the analysis? Results: • In perceptual results, I recommend indicating the direction of change. According to fig. 7, on average, music appears to increase reaction time, but noise would decrease it. This dissimilar result would be interesting to be considered in the discussion • P 21 378-382 I recommend reviewing this paragraph. I think the magnitude of the efferent effect in humans is still under study. There is some evidence that supports the idea that the contralateral efferent effect would be greater for low frequencies than high frequencies (see fig 3 on Lilaonitkul and Guinan (2009) https://doi.org/10.1007/s10162-009-0163-1 ) Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a study that compares the masking effect of contralateral noise versus music. The authors measure this effect using MEG and reaction time. The results show that music has a significant masking effect compared to noise. The manuscript is clear and well written. I do not see any significant methodological deficiencies. The results are well presented, and they are interesting. Regarding the PLOS Data Policy, the authors provide the ARF amplitude and latencies changes, and response time changes. However, the raw data (MEG signals, each response time) that underlies the manuscript findings is unavailable. I will let the editor decide whether or not this is sufficient to comply with the PLOS Data Policy. For these reasons, I suggest accepting this paper after the following issues are addressed: * Mayor issues 1. In line 114, when you say: "The frequencies of the probe tone (250 Hz) and the contra-sound were separated as much as possible to exclude direct masking effects by the contra-sound of the probe tone.", explain why the frequency separation used in this work is, in fact, the maximum possible frequency separation. For instance, why don't you choose a 200Hz tone or a cut-off frequency of 2500 Hz? 2. Make explicit that the counter-music and counter-noise conditions are not mixed in each experimental session. Although this is clear once one reads the statement in line 125 ("In most cases..."), one may interpret, from figure 1 and the general description in the introduction, that the counter-music and counter-noise conditions might be interlaced in the same experiment. 3.Clarify if the counter-sound and counter-music sessions were counterbalanced. 4. Regarding figures 2 and 3, clarify if you are averaging AEF from counter sounds with different SPL or not. * Minor issues 1. Specify the filter type and order for all the filters (both for the sound and MEG signals). 2. Specify the software, toolboxes, etc. used to process the MEG signals. 3. It seems to me that references to figures 2 and 3 in lines 222 and 223 are mixed. On the one hand, figure 2 is related to the counter-music condition, and figure 3 is associated with the counter-noise condition. On the other hand, line 222 says, "Superimposed magnetic signals with and without contra-music stimuli (Figs 2A and 3A) are shown ..." But, Fig 3A is related to the contra-noise stimuli. Please check this. * Typos 1. Line 110: "Different to the study of Hari and Mäkelä 4) (1988) ..." The 4) should be [4]. Also, I'm not clear if adding the year there is consistent with the citation style. 2. Line 191: "T The influence of contralateral..." There is an extra "T." 3. 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Different contra-sound effects between noise and music stimuli seen in N1m and psychophysical responses PONE-D-21-26422R1 Dear Dr. Kawase, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, I have read the new version of the manuscript and it seems to me that all the recommendations have been considered and it seems to me a more robust manuscript than the previous version. The topic is interesting, the experiments are technically well conducted and it brings new information to our field, for which I have recommended its publication, congratulations Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all the comments raised in the previous review. ---------------------------- ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Alejandro Weinstein |
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PONE-D-21-26422R1 Different contra-sound effects between noise and music stimuli seen in N1m and psychophysical responses Dear Dr. Kawase: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Paul Hinckley Delano Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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