Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 23, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-33956An open source, lockable mouse wheel for the accessible implementation of time- and distance-limited elective exercisePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bivona III, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, all the reviewers were enthusiastic about the manuscript but there are a few minor changes hat will be necessary to finalize the manuscript. These are fairly minor and can be re-reviewed editorially without need to resend to reviewers. . Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== As you can see in the reviews, there are just a few changes required. These mostly involve addition of references as well as the notation of two of the reviewers that you should eliminate or reword the use of the word hyperphsyiological regarding the amount of exercise performed by mice (they seen to run approximately 3-4km/night under voluntary conditions (see Gerecke et al, 2010) and others referenced by reviewers. Additionally, reviewer 3 asks for some more information on durability of the wheels as well as about how many can be run on a single computer (or can this be expanded by addition of a COM port hub? I look forward to your revised manuscript which should be of benefit to the scientific community. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 06 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The main issues which are successfully dealt with are both scientific (a device which permits to fix time and/or distance limits according to the experimenter will) and practical (a minor cost, compared to commercially available devices). I encourage the reader to long into the link providing the (detailed) video related to piece assembly. My sole critics concern bibliographical issues, which however need to be taken into account: (1) In the 2nd par. of the Introduction, it is indicated that "one drawback of voluntary exercise is the inability to limit running distances". In the authors' mind such a pitfall might probably extend to running times/periods. First, I encourage the authors to read two studies (Dostes et al., Hippocampus 2016; Dubreucq et al., Biol. Psychiatry 2013) wherein the time allowed to run was varied (showing e.g. that exercise-induced neurogenesis is running duration-dependent). Second, whether it is more meaningful to limit running distance or running duration is an open question. Indeed, rodents run for hours but these consist in successive, albeit extremely short, episodes with resting pauses aimed e.g. at drinking, resting, exploring or eating. Moreover, mice do run during the dark phase of the light/dark cycle but their maximal effort is observed during the first 3-4 hours (see the above mentioned study by Dubreucq as an illustration). Taken with the observation that each mouse bears its own active period and its own running speed, it is maybe more relevant to limit the time, rather than the distance, as the variable for wheel locking/unlocking. (2) In the same paragraph, the authors use the word "hyperphysiological" for mouse running behaviour. I sincerely believe that this word should be removed because it might be prone to anthropomorphism. As humans, we consider these distances as enormous. However, mice (and rats) are able to do so without constraint. I encourage the authors to read the excellent review of Sherwin (Animal Behav 1998), which in addition, will allow the authors to change several of their (recent) references by older one which might be more relevant. (3) Legends to the two figures should be separated from the main text and place at the end before the figures (4) Discussion: • The fact that circulating BDNF is not increased by acute exercise is somewhat surprising. How do the authors explain this observation? • The paragraph comparing forced vs voluntary exercise is incorrect. Asz it stands, it seems that voluntary exercise does not increase corticosterone levels. Besides the observation that it is increased with wheel-running (see relevant figures in ref 22), the fact that corticosterone increases with exercise is logical and is also observed in humans (changing corticosterone to cortisol) because it provides a source of energy. • The authors should mention the fact that their device is considered an environmental enrichment which, per se, can alter physiological and behavioural variables (see the abundant bibliography on that subject) hence indicating the need to host control mice with locked wheels (see the abovementioned study by Dostes et al. as an additional illustration). • As mentioned by the authors, "free" wheel-running devices as the one reported in this study allow to easilly measure running performance under voluntary dimensions. However, these devices, by their "free access" dimension, do not permit to selectively measure running motivation. The latter requires operant conditioning paradigms (and hence expensive setups) wherein running access is rendered possible by prior lever pressing (see Iversen, J Exp Anal Behav 1993) or nose poking (see Muguruza et al., JCI Insight 2019) under fixed or variable ratio reinforcement schedules. Reviewer #2: The article, regarding the building and validity of the LOSTwheel is very well done. The authors present clear information about materials, assembly, and implementation of the equipment. In addition, they do appropriate tests to verify their observational analysis of the running behavior of the mice. This is true both for not only whether they run or not, as well as for the distance that they ran. Thus, these results are in keeping with many other studies regarding wheel running behavior in mice, indicating that the design of the LOSTwheel is valid for running behavior. Importantly, access to a low cost strategy to make these wheels is invaluable to the many scientists who study this, but do not have large grants to buy the expensive monitoring cages available on the market. Thus, this research has broad implications for impacting the field, including to make this research more widely available. As someone with little experience with electrical builds, I appreciate the very comprehensive manual with clear, step by step pictures and instructions, as well as the online tutorials. The level of detail and clarity provided make this easily replicable. Reviewer #3: This open source, lockable mouse wheel is a useful tool that may enable investigators to conduct mouse exercise trials without limitations due to equipment cost. Some clarification in the manuscript statements is necessary: 1. Voluntary running wheels that allow restriction of running in time or distance increments are available, although the cost of the equipment may be prohibitive for some laboratories. This is not clear in all sections of the manuscript. 2. Previously published articles, referenced in the current manuscript (see De Bono et al., 2006) and (Gerecke et al., 2010) illustrating the amount of voluntary running that mice will perform in a given period of time (1 day to 90 days) refute the suggestion that mice will voluntarily run at ‘hyperphysiological” levels. 3. Some details about the potential protocols for the LOST-Wheel would be useful if clearly stated in the manuscript. For example, is one week (chronic), the maximum period of time for an exercise protocol (without restarting)? How many wheels and COM ports may be run in a single experiment? Approximately how long do the 3D printed wheel and magnet apparatus work efficiently with continued use and cleaning? The Lost-Wheel manual is clear and appears easy to follow to build the wheel and controlling components. The video links provided are very helpful, however, parts of the Assembly video, especially the final assembly portion of the box housing the microcontroller, Nano, and Hall effect sensor, as well as the connection of the components would benefit from a closer view. Minor comments: The use of Gapdh for normalization of the expression of the gene of interest in qPCR is not a stable comparator in all cases (see(Desseille et al., 2017; Xu et al., 2018; Hildyard et al., 2019)). The housekeeping gene 18S rRNA has invariant expression and provides more stable comparison. Reference #13 should be DeBono JPD (De Bono et al., 2006). References: De Bono JP, Adlam D, Paterson DJ, Channon KM (2006) Novel quantitative phenotypes of exercise training in mouse models. American journal of physiology Regulatory, integrative and comparative physiology 290:R926-934. Desseille C, Deforges S, Biondi O, Houdebine L, D'Amico D, Lamazière A, Caradeuc C, Bertho G, Bruneteau G, Weill L, Bastin J, Djouadi F, Salachas F, Lopes P, Chanoine C, Massaad C, Charbonnier F (2017) Specific Physical Exercise Improves Energetic Metabolism in the Skeletal Muscle of Amyotrophic-Lateral- Sclerosis Mice. Front Mol Neurosci 10:332. Gerecke KM, Jiao Y, Pani A, Pagala V, Smeyne RJ (2010) Exercise protects against MPTP-induced neurotoxicity in mice. Brain Res 1341:72-83. Hildyard JCW, Finch AM, Wells DJ (2019) Identification of qPCR reference genes suitable for normalizing gene expression in the mdx mouse model of Duchenne muscular dystrophy. PLoS One 14:e0211384. Xu H, Ren X, Lamb GD, Murphy RM (2018) Physiological and biochemical characteristics of skeletal muscles in sedentary and active rats. J Muscle Res Cell Motil 39:1-16. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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An open-source, lockable mouse wheel for the accessible implementation of time- and distance-limited elective exercise PONE-D-21-33956R1 Dear Dr. Bivona III, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Richard Jay Smeyne Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): I am excited for this paper to be published in PLoS One and feel that this may have a significant impact on the field; due to its ease of use and low cost. On a personal level, having worked in exercise, I look forward to its publication, at which point I will access the information and give this a try. Thank you for an nice piece of work. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-33956R1 An open-source, lockable mouse wheel for the accessible implementation of time- and distance-limited elective exercise Dear Dr. Bivona III: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Richard Jay Smeyne Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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