Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 7, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-07531 Evaluation of Virtual Roaming in an Online Museum: Exhibition of Architecture of the Forbidden City PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jia, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Two Reviewers evaluated the manuscript and gave generally favorable opinions, however the contribution needs extensive revisions. Especially: - language editing by a native english speaker is still needed - the link to the online exhibition did not work at my first try; you should probably separate it from the final dot (without it, it works) - methodology lacks information, especially regarding the methodological approach for qualitative data - ethical approval was missing. This is necessary for consideration by PLOS ONE - Authors report a pre-test of the questionnaire and an alpha with 18 participants. Is this useful? What was the reliability index with the full sample? - data were partial. First, items in the database are in chinese, they should be translated in english to be readable by international audience; second, qualitative data from interviews were missing. These are also mandatory for consideration by PLOS ONE - figures and more information on participants' experience and tasks within the exploration would improve the readers' comprehension of the research - final discussion says little about the take-home messages for a broader audience: what have we learnt about the design and evaluation of online museums in general? I encourage Authors to perfom extensive revisions taking into account these aspects and all those identified by Reviewers. Please remind that final acceptance of the contribution could not be guaranteed at this step. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an excellent research paper of relevance to museum studies and it should be published. The methods and process are well-described and clear. The paper is well-written. I am not a statistician so I can't evaluate this part. However, I would be happy to use the paper and evaluation tool in my own teaching in museum studies. My "minor revisions" suggestions are very minor. First, on p. 3, ICOMOS should be defined or the name written out fully. Next, on p. 9, in the chart, at Learning D3 the term "Fun of knowledge" is written. This is not correct English usage. Instead, it should say something like "Enjoyable presentation of information." Then, on p. 22, the term "generality" is used in reference to a suggestion by the authors that the concept should become a "vital evaluation standard." The term's application should be defined and an example included, in my view. Last, on p. 18-19 and again on p. 21 the authors refer to inclusivity, inclusiveness and ability. Yet, they do not mention disability (an oversight, in my view), and the solutions offered through disability studies and inclusive design, such as image descriptions, audio descriptions, and so on. For example, see: https://www.acb.org/adp/ There are many such strategies recommended for museums by disability studies scholars and activists--see Amanda Cachia and Georgina Kleege, for example. The paper should direct museum-based readers to look to these and related sources for suggestions. Reviewer #2: The manuscript discusses a research to develop a heuristic evaluation scale based on the existing literature and a case study. The case study is a virtual online museum tour. The proposed evaluation scale includes four dimensions: authenticity, interaction, navigation, and learning. I am not expert in factor analysis, and I assume that the methodology is properly applied. My concerns are related to the description of the case study and the methods. First of all, I suggest the authors to better describe the case study. In addition to the link provided to access the online tour, there is the need to understand the functionalities, how the experience is structured, the peculiarities of the museum as well as the interaction modalities. Adding screenshots of relevant points of interest can help to better understand the case study. Secondly, some details related to the survey are missing: - Since the ethics statement is not provided, I wonder whether the authors deal with the informed consent to involve the participants in the research. - How was the EAFC online experience presented to the participants? I wonder whether the authors provided some instructions to the participants about the navigation and the interface, or just let them free to explore the functionalities. - What was the task to accomplish during the experience? Was it the same for all the participants? - What were the groups and attributes used for the stratified sampling of the interviewees? - It is not clear the reason why the researcher asked “further random questions” during the interview. Is “random” the proper term? - Moreover, it is not clear how the qualitative data from the interviews were analysed and integrated with the questionnaire’s results. Finally, I suggest the authors to introduce the scale by conceptualizing the different elements, as well as to clearly explain how their scale differs from and improve the existing literature. A final comment is about the brief discussion about inclusivity, that I appreciate. Indeed it is a relevant issue to make virtual museum accessible for people with diverse needs and abilities. I hope that the authors will further explore this aspect in details, because the literature is missing such investigations to guide the future design. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-07531R1 Evaluation of Virtual Roaming in an Online Museum: Exhibition of Architecture of the Forbidden City PLOS ONE Dear Dr. li, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Revisions were adequately performed by Authors, but lacks regarding the journal's criteria for publication stay unsolved - the items in the .sav file are still in chinese. Authors are asked to "maximize the accessibility and reusability of the data", so as I said in the previous round of revisions these should be translated in the english language like the rest of the paper materials https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability - the methodological details added on the qualitative research are limited. According to Author guidelines, "Qualitative research studies should be reported in accordance to the Consolidated criteria for reporting qualitative research (COREQ) checklist or Standards for reporting qualitative research (SRQR) checklist" see this page for links to the checklists https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines , I also suggest Authors to consider other qualitative research published on PLOS ONE to see examples of the checklists included as supporting information, such as for example https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0247121 , https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0225534 Again, please notice these are PLOS ONE's criteria for publication so they should be satisfied before the article could be considered for publication Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 19 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Stefano Triberti, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I appreciate the adjustments made to clarify some issues. I found one typo on page 16 line 6: "Frist" instead of "First". ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Annamaria Recupero [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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| Revision 2 |
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Evaluation of Virtual Tour in an Online Museum: Exhibition of Architecture of the Forbidden City PONE-D-21-07531R2 Dear Dr. li, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The authors of the paper has responded and added corrections to the majority of the suggestions highlighted by the previous reviewers. It was a an acceptable paper with justifiable methodology. I would suggest additional information to be added in the methodology section (a few of the suggestions stated below were mentioned in the later part of the discussion section): 1-To clearly state the type of interview carried out (focus group or personal interview) 2-To state the selection process of the respondents and how the questionnaires were distributed (it was mentioned in the flow diagram in Figure 3, however this need to be explained earlier in the method section) 3-The sentence "..212 valid questionnaires were collected." It should be written as "...212 valid responses from the questionnaire were collected." 4-In of of the result's section, the authors mentioned that they conducted the interview by using WeChat (due to the COVID-19 pandemic). The authors need to explain the process of acquiring the contact information of the potential respondents in the methodology section. Reviewer #4: In this paper factor analysis is conducted to obtain a clear pattern of loading. It is a way of carrying out a particular task that is used to reduce a large number of variables into fewer numbers of factors. This technique extracts maximum common variance from all variables and puts them into a common score. The loading purpose indicates the depth of the relationships between items. Each factor will tend to have either large or small loading's of any particular variable. Hence, factor loading is used to assess the validity of an item and to summarize the sort of correlation among variables. Unfortunately, this paper applied the first part but neglected the second part which is related to summarize the sort of correlation among variables. Hence, we think it needs to go further analysis like Correlation analysis to explore the relationships among the variables. The role of correlation is to capture the similarities or differences between the variables. It measures the degree of association between the values of related variables given in the data set. Then, the mutual influence of variables on one another will be traced. It is interesting to note, that the main goal of factor analysis is to identify a group of inter-related variables, to see how they are related to each other or we can say that Factor analysis can be used to identify the hidden dimensions or constructs which may or may not be apparent from direct analysis. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes: Dr.Salahaddin Yasin Baper |
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PONE-D-21-07531R2 Evaluation of Virtual Tour in an Online Museum: Exhibition of Architecture of the Forbidden City Dear Dr. Li: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Prabhat Mittal Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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