Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 5, 2021 |
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study describes the test of previously published primers for the barcoding of french bat species, using both wing punch from bat carcasses and faecal pellets. Results showed that the method is successful in identifying at least 22 from the 35 bat species described in France. This technique allows to correct 12.5% of morphological misidentifications among 167 samples, and identify 24 samples that could not be morphologically identify in the field. This study provides new and important tools for the correct identification of bat species, which is of primary importance for ecological and pathogen-associated studies of bats. I enjoyed reading this manuscript which is globally well written. However, I recommend the authors to add the line numbers on the manuscript to help the reviewing process. My two major concern are the lack of information for the phylogenetic analysis and D-loop PCR. The authors should better explain why they perform the phylogenetic analysis in addition to the BLAST, and better present the results of the grouping in the tree. Also throughout the manuscript, it is not clear why the authors also performed PCR on the D-loop, but only for 1 bat species and on a very limited number of samples. Please see below for more detailed comments. 1) Page 1, title: Please correct “pathogens surveillance” to “pathogen surveillance”. 2) Page 5: please correct ‘bats species’ to ‘bat species’. 3) Methods, page 6: were the faecal pellets collected directly from bat handling or from the environment? 4) Methods, sequencing and phylogenetic analysis: please provide more details on which criteria were used in the BLAST output to identify bat species? And for the phylogenetic tree analysis? A better explanation of phylogenetic results would also be valuable, for example, whether or not the tested samples clustered with previous reference sequences (=are the species-clusters are well supported or not). Did you assume correct identification if the sample clustered with reference sequences? 5) Page 11: genetic distances were calculated but I did not see the results of this analysis. 6) Results, page 12: please remove ‘by’ in ‘by followed…’ 7) Results, page 12: what do the authors mean by ‘optimization’? I don’t see any description of the(PCR?) optimization in the methods. I don’t understand if the protocol was different for the 37 samples used for optimization. Please provide more details in the methods and results. 8) Why only serotine bats were tested for D-loop and only 6 individuals? I understood later from the discussion that the D-loop PCR was performed because there were no amplification with the cytb, and this allowed confirming the ID for E. serotinus. But why the D-loop PCR was not done for the other non-cytb amplified samples (one E. nilsonni and one V. murinus)? 9) Page 12: Pl. auritus should be P. auritus. 10) Results, page 12: Genetic identification of bat carcasses: ‘the panel of genetically…M. schreibersii (n=1)’. It looks like that the authors give here the results of the cytb genetic identification. Is it not just the listing of the samples used in this analysis (same as in table 1A). If so, this is a bit redundant with information presented in the methods. I suggest to remove this sentence and present directly the comparison of morphological/genetic identification. 11) Figure 3: It is not clear what are the sequences produced in this study. Please used bold or color to highlight them. Please also add posterior values at the nodes. Is the tree well supported? It may also be clearer if the different bat species were better delineated (using colored boxes for example). 12) For the 25 sequences included in the tree, was the BLAST results the same as the tree classification? Why only 25 sequences were included in the phylogenetic tree, and not all the sequences produced (n=167)? Why all these sequences were not submitted to Genbank? 13) Page 14: ‘Sequences analyses using BLAST… following species…’. I don’t understand this result. Authors mentioned above that errors of morphological determination were observed for 11 species. 14) Page 13: Genetic identification of bat faeces: ‘1 was not determined’. Does this mean the BLAST and phylogeny analyses did not give any conclusive results? 15) Discussion, second paragraph: ’It is rare…’ I’m not sure to understand the relevance of this paragraph. Is this to justify the non-homogeneity of number of samples per bat species? If so, I would just state that : “the fact that all bat carcasses…ANSES Laboratory, leading to an over representation of P. pipistrellus in our sampling’. 16) Page 21: please give details on what is the discrepancy between the present study and that of Walker’s, to make it clearer for non-specialist readers. 17) Page 22: the authors suggest that the non-amplification of the cytb for 8 samples (including E. serotinus, E. nilssonii and V. murinus) could be due to the short length of the PCR fragment. Why exactly? But they were successful in amplifying these 3 species for other samples and for the same gene fragment. I would rather suggest that the non-amplification results from degraded DNA. It would have been valuable to test the integrity of DNA by gel electrophoresis. Reviewer #2: This study identified bats in France from wing punches and fecal material. The results are straightforward and a useful contribution to the identification of bat remains in France. 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Genetic identification of bat species for pathogen surveillance across France PONE-D-21-14577R1 Dear Dr. Picard-Meyer, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have responded to almost all the comments, but there is still incomplete information in the results and some rephrasement to do. Please see my comments below: 1) Line 23 : I think “herpes virus” should be “herpesvirus”. 2) Line 82: “pygmaeus and P. nathusii, or to…”: “and” should not be in italics. 3) Line 131: it is still not clear how the faecal pellets were associated to a bat species, as no capture was done. I guess that the pellets were collected under a monospecific bat colony, and that the bat species was determined by inspected hanging individuals in the colony? Also, how fresh were the pellets ? From the day, or probably several days, weeks ? Were they collected directly on the ground, or some plastic sheets were used ? Might be good to add these details. 4) Table 2 “n.d” in footnotes but not seen in the table. 5) Line 195: please correct “…TCCT-3). With each run,…” 6) Line 196: please explain in the text why only serotine bats were amplified with the Dloop. 7) Please delete “P. pipistrellus”, because of a repetition with “this bat species”. Reviewer #2: Only one edit: Replace reference - Chipps AS, Hale AM, Weaver SP, Williams DA. Genetic diversity, population structure, and effective population size in two yellow bat species in south Texas. PeerJ. 2020;8:e10348. WITH Chipps AS, AM Hale, SP Weaver, and DA Williams. 2020. Genetic approaches are necessary to accurately understand bat‐wind turbine impacts. Diversity 12:236. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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