Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 17, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-11519 Activity of common infectious diseases during the COVID-19 pandemic PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hibiya, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 28 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 3. Please include your tables as part of your main manuscript and remove the individual files. Please note that supplementary tables (should remain/ be uploaded) as separate "supporting information" files. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: My comments (in no particular order) are focused primarily on the authors’ methods and presentation. 1. The graphs indicate “week” along the x-axis. Does this represent calendar week (i.e., starting from January 1) or “seasonal” time (e.g., one might take influenza season as extending from July to June). 2. It is not at all clear to me how one can observe fractional numbers of cases per week (e.g., as with respiratory syncytial virus). 3. The authors present counts from (A) national sentinel surveillance (e.g., Figure 2A) and (B) national notifiable disease (e.g., Figure 2B). Since numbers are much smaller for the former versus the latter, the question arises how well A tracks B. Are there any common diseases to A and B, and if so, are the patterns similar? 4. The authors might formalize the relationship (if any) between disease counts and COVID-19 incidence by examining the cross correlation function between the two time series. It would be of interest if lags could then be identified. 5. One might more readily be able to identify trends or periodicities in the graphs if the authors were to smooth the incidence curves (e.g., moving averages). Given counts from national sentinel surveillance are typically quite small (in the single digits), eliminating to some extent random fluctuations might be useful. 6. In a similar spirit, would it be useful to combine diseases in Figure 3 according to mode of transmission? Would a clearer pattern thereby emerge? 7. Why counts and not rates? And, should not there be age adjustments, or gender considerations? For example, the “usual” U-shaped incidence curve for influenza is lost by pooling across all ages. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors aim to evaluate whether restrictions and interventions in place during COVID-19 in Japan were associated with decreases in reported cases of other infectious diseases. They compare total case counts between the years 2019 and 2020, as well as epidemic curves for weekly cases, and find that several pathogens, particularly those transmitted by the droplet route, had strikingly lower numbers of reported cases during the COVID-19 epidemic in 2020. They also include a very thorough discussion of their results for various pathogens, including results that were unexpected, which I appreciated. Overall, the comparison of epidemic curves, and total cases, between 2019 and 2020 support the overall conclusion that the measures taken to curb the spread of COVID-19 may have also prevented the spread of certain infections. My main comments here are (1) whether a statistical analysis can be used to quantify weekly changes in case counts as well as to tie the story together a bit more clearly, and (2) how much of the reduction in these other infections might be attributable to reduced healthcare seeking and/or reduced capacity to test for other pathogens during COVID-19. Please find these and additional comments described in detail below. Main comments: 1) I suggest using a difference-in-difference regression model to statistically evaluate changes in weekly case counts for each of these pathogens. While I very much appreciate the detailed discussion of the trends for each pathogen, and I agree that the data speaks for itself in many of the examples, I think a quantitative analysis such as this would help pull the manuscript together with a clearer story. This would also help to identify which week(s) during 2020 each pathogen had significantly different case counts from the previous year(s). Examples of this approach can be found in the Sakamoto et al. (2020) JAMA analysis of changes in influenza epidemics in Japan, as well as in the Lee & Lin (2020) EID study on effects of COVID-19 on infections in Taiwan. 2) The authors have very thoughtfully extracted and categorized the reported case data. Is any data additionally available that could be used to examine the impact of reduced healthcare seeking or testing capacities on the conclusions? If possible, this should be investigated further. For example, is information available on changes in number of tests performed or in number of hospital admissions? If so, this could be used to perform a sensitivity analysis of the total 2020 case counts followed by the regression-based analysis described above (see Lee & Lin (2020) EID for an example). If this is not possible, then this potential issue should be discussed in more depth and earlier on in the manuscript (not just in the limitations and discussion of HIV/syphilis). For example, are there certain pathogens this will likely affect more than others in Japan? Might this be different in the sentinel vs. passive surveillance systems? 3) Why was the year 2019 alone used as the comparison for 2020? Why not compare several previous seasons, for example 2014-2019 with 2020, to account for some of the year-to-year variation? Additional comments: • In the abstract, it is unclear what methods and results the authors used to arrive at the conclusions. Additional details and using a structured abstract may help to improve clarity. Including the statistical analysis suggested above may also help in clarifying what the key findings are in the abstract. • I don’t understand what the sentence on lines 68-69 is meant to indicate. Please rephrase or expand here. • In the methods, more details are needed on why the inclusion/exclusion criteria were applied. Why was 400 chosen as the minimum number of cases? Why were fulminant, invasive, and enteric infections other than rotavirus excluded? • I suggest using “common infectious diseases” rather than “representative infectious diseases” throughout the manuscript. If “representative” is meant to indicate something other than “common”, please explain further. • I suggest using the phrase “fecal-oral transmission” instead of “oral transmission”. • In Figure 1, I suggest using the y-axis label “Number of cases per day”. • In Figures 2-3, please use colorblind-friendly colors instead of green and red. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James A. Koziol Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-21-11519R1Activity of common infectious diseases in Japan during the COVID-19 pandemicPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hibiya, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 22 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In general, the revision adequately addresses the issues I had raised in my initial review. I have only minor comments, that might further be addressed: 1. Incidence rather than activity, in the title? 2. Throughout the text, lag rather than rag, when referring to cross-correlations. 3. The authors might mention the impact of mumps vaccine. I suspect the authors’ comments concerning measles vaccine would also bear on mumps. 4. A methodological issue: the authors might mention in the methods what range of values was used when calculating moving averages (e.g., 5 point moving average?) 5. One upshot of cross-correlation values is “interpretation” of the lag (or, range of lags) that leads to maximal or minimal cross-correlation values. E.g., one might speculate that periods of high COVID-19 incidence might in some sense tamp down or delay reported incidence of certain other diseases. Which diseases are or are not so affected would also be of interest. 6. The difference in differences methodology makes some strong assumptions on the putative relationship between the two series. The authors might comment on the validity of these assumptions in their context. Reviewer #2: The authors have very thoroughly addressed my comments. The difference-in-difference analysis helps to show a clear story of reduced reporting of infections transmitted by droplets in Japan in 2020. The analysis and discussion of changes in outpatient behavior is also very helpful for understanding the context of broader health seeking during the pandemic. I only have a few remaining minor points: 1) The cross-correlation results in the abstract lines 36 to 38 and results lines 256 to 257 are hard to follow. What does rag -1 week mean? I suggest using more common language there. Please also provide a definition for what the numbers provided in parentheses represent, and limit to 2 decimal places. In addition, what does “among them” on line 257 refer to if there were no correlations with COVID-19 as stated in the previous sentence (or perhaps that is a typo?). It would also be helpful to include a short explanation of what the implications/importance of this result is, and/or what the rationale was for performing this analysis. 2) I suggest removing the sentence in lines 311 to 312, unless the authors can identify the reason that the CCF analysis “didn’t work”. 3) There are several instances in the text where it sounds like the authors are implying a causal link between COVID-19 measures and reductions in reported cases. For example lines 435 to 436: “Therefore, the COVID-19 control measures did not affect the spread of legionellosis.” The analysis in this study is descriptive, not causal, so this section could read something like: “COVID-19 control measures were not associated with changes in reported cases of legionellosis, which is consistent with the transmission route.. etc.”. Other examples where this should be clarified include lines 426-427, 442-444, 500-501, 511-513. In addition, the titles of these sections (currently: “Effect of COVID-19 measures on the incidence...”) should be revised to read something like: “Associations between COVID-19 measures and incidence of XX” or “Patterns in incidence of XX pathogens during the 2020 COVID-19 pandemic”. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James Koziol Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Martial L Ndeffo Mbah, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: My comments pertaining to analysis/results/discussion have been addressed. I have a final editorial/clarification suggestion: In the abstract, the section describing the cross-correlation is still too technical and does not describe what the findings of this analysis actually mean: "The cross-correlation functions between the two-time series of common infectious and COVID-19 disease counts were examined. Many droplet-borne diseases, infectious gastroenteritis (rotavirus), and measles showed a negative correlation against COVID-19 in the lag from minus 20 weeks to 0 weeks." The "lag minus 20 weeks" portion can be included in the methods/results, but the abstract should read something along the lines of: "We examined correlations over time using a cross-correlation analysis. We found that weekly cases of measles, rotavirus, and many droplet-borne diseases were negatively correlated with with COVID-19 cases up to 20 weeks in the past". ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: James Koziol Reviewer #2: No
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PONE-D-21-11519R2 Incidence of common infectious diseases in Japan during the COVID-19 pandemic Dear Dr. Hibiya: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Martial L Ndeffo Mbah Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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