Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 10, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-18895Demographic differentials of lung cancer survival in Bangladeshi patientsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Muhammad Rafiqul Islam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 30 Nov, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Summary: This is a descriptive manuscript detailing the demographic characteristics and outcomes of patients with a lung cancer diagnosis in the resource-limited country Bangladesh. The authors found that patient with a poor prognosis exhibited older age, presence of one or more comorbidities, a lower performance status and treatment limited to RT only. Prognosis was better in patients with an institutional education and combined treatment with Radiotherapy and Chemotherapy. They conclude that future studies should focus on that subgroup of patients challenged by limited resources to identify novel approaches to improve their prognosis. MAJOR: This is purely a descriptive study of lung cancer. While classic histology was used to characterize the lung cancer types, it would be worthwhile to know if any mutation analysis was available that could identify genetic drivers of lung cancer. This may well contribute to prognosis irrespective of radiotherapy or chemotherapy. Tobacco exposure seems to be a major factor in lung cancer occurrence. But in cases where it was absent, can the authors speculate on potential non-tobacco related causes? Such as environmental exposure to organic or inorganic dusts, air pollution, smog, indoor smoke exposure from burning fires for cooking. The data are provocative in the sense that it is from a resource limited country where such reporting is often limited so the data are useful to know. It is from a single center although it is a central referral site for cancer evaluation which means people with more advanced disease are likely to be referred so there may be a selection bias toward poorer outcomes. It would be useful to know how decision were made to provide radiotherapy or chemotherapy or both to individual cases. Small cell cancer is treated with chemotherapy and adenocarcinomas are relative resistant to radiotherapy and chemotherapy. Can this be included in the report? MINOR: 1) English usage and spelling will need to be amended throughout the manuscript. It is unacceptable in its present form. 2) Please clarify the exclusion of patients with targeted therapy immunotherapy. Where there no such patients or was the information on them incomplete so unavailable for study? 3) Squamous cell and small cell cancers are classic tobacco related cancers but adenocarcinomas were the second most common lung cancer type. Was adenocarcinoma more common in woman? Was tobacco exposure more common in men? Any speculation on the frequency of adenocarcinomas? 4) There is little comment on the presence of metastatic disease at the time of diagnosis or a part of therapy. Can this be included? Reviewer #2: -This is an important study which shows findings in a developing country. It has noted important determinant factor such as education which is important to highlight. -Education and socio-economic status are closely associated with outcomes even in developed country but in developing country the difference becomes rather stark. -This study did not find any major difference in mortality based on socioeconomic status was surprising but the reason for that was well explained in the discussion. Reviewer #3: I greatly appreciate the importance of studying the demographic features of survival in patients with lung cancer, especially since it is a study that involved such a large number of participants. The article is well written with very few garmmatical errors Abbreviations must be mentioned at the bottom of the tables Reviewer #4: This is an interesting observational study looking at how various demographic factors influence lung cancer survival from a public hospital in Bangladesh. The sample size is fairly large for the one year of data accrual (n=1868) and the authors conclude that older age, comorbidities and poorer baseline performance status and use of RT alone as therapy all have poorer prognosis for lung cancer survival. There are a few areas in this study which could benefit from additional analysis, further explanation and some edits to the grammatical style, particularly in the conclusion. This important article will benefit the body of literature regarding lung cancer prognosis, particularly in a poorer/ resource-limited population with more limited access to financial, medical and social resources, a group which may not often be studied. 1) Lack of background explanation on parameter representing performance status. 1a. A major finding of this manuscript is that “poorer performance status” is a significant predictor of poorer prognosis of lung cancer. The authors use the ECOG score to stratify performance status. While they do give the full name for ECOG [Eastern Cooperative Oncology Group] in the Materials & Methods section, they do not give the full name in the abstract nor in the table 1 legend and they should add it to these areas. 1b. The authors only state that the ECOG score is from 0 to 4 and ultimately placed this cohort int 2 groups with a cut point score of 2 or more. The authors should consider stating what the scores correspond to [i.e., a sore of 0= fully active and score of 4= completely disabled] as not all readers may be familiar with the details of this scoring system. 2) The authors discuss that having a comorbidity also predicts poor outcome for lung cancer but need to give more clear details regarding the comorbidities that they assessed. 2a. In the Materials & Methods section, the authors state, “A patient was considered to have co morbidity if the patient has been suffering or receiving treatment for a major existing condition not related to the cancer or its complication (i.e., diabetes, hypertension, heart disease, or chronic obstructive pulmonary disease).” This sentence is confusing as currently worded. Were the above conditions what was considered a “comorbidity” or were these conditions considered to be related to cancer or its complication ? If these are the diseases being considered then just say that these were considered the comorbidities. 2b. How did the authors determine the co-existence of the above comorbidities: was this based on chart review mentioning one of these disease or was this based on the patient receiving medication to treat one of these diseases ? Please clarify this important point. 2c. It appears that there were 4 comorbidities assessed for (if the above sentence is correct) and the authors appear to have assigned each subject a dichotomous “yes/no” for having a comorbidity. Did the authors do a separate analysis by the number of comorbities for the n=551 who had at least 1 comorbidity. This would be an interesting analysis to see if having 2, 3 or 4 comorbidities conferred an even worse prognosis than just having 1. 3) Tobacco use status could benefit from some additional detail and analysis. 3a. In the Results section, the authors state that, ‘More than eighty percent of patients with lung cancer were smokers and more than half of the patients were smokeless tobacco users.” In table 1, they separate out these 2 different tobacco use categories. There is likely some overlap in the 2 groups which may be a synergistic risk factor (i.e., Both tobacco smoker and smokeless tobacco user). Could the authors provide the information on the number of subjects in the overlap group who used 2 types of tobacco. 3b. Did the authors do a separate analysis on those with both types of tobacco use to see if this was predictive of a poorer outcome ? 3c. Could the authors provide information on the number of patients who were totally non-tobacco exposed (i.e., Not using smoking tobacco or smokeless tobacco) as this information is not able to be determined from Table 1. Was this protective in lung cancer ? 4) Grammatical and typographical errors: Throughout this manuscript there are numerous grammatical and typographical errors which need to be addressed prior to publication. 4a. Introduction, “…unveil useful insight regarding there link to…” The proper word is “their” not “there.” 4b. Materials & Methods section: There is a missing reference in the following sentence. “Body mass index (BMI) was categorized into …. And > 25 (overweight) (Ref).” Please provide the actual reference here. 4c. Discussion section, in the following sentence “accumulate” should not have an “s.” “…incidence of chronic disease like cancer are likely to be increased, patients are more likely to accumulates more risk exposure.” 4d. Discussion section: I the following sentence “female” should be pleural (i.e., “females”). “…for the indifference may lie in the smaller proportion of female in the study.” 4e. Discussion: in the following sentence the word “who” needs to be added in between “those had.” “…didn’t show any survival benefit over those had only primary level of education...” 4f. Discussion: The following sentence needs to be re-worded. “The impact on survival is probably, correlates more with the stage and severity of the disease, rather than by itself.” 4g. Discussion: There is a typographical error in the sentence below and should read as “218 and 2019.” Please replace the “1” with an “a.” “…attend the hospital during the year 2018 1nd 2019…” 5) Please consider standardizing the abstract. 5a. Statistics presented: For some variables the HR is given while for others no HR is given. 5b. Presentation of results associated with higher survival vs. lower survival. It would be more consistent and send a clearer message to give all of the factors associated with increased survival first and then present the variables associated with lower survival. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Demographic differentials of lung cancer survival in Bangladeshi patients PONE-D-21-18895R1 Dear Dr. Muhammad Rafiqul Islam, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Wen-Wei Sung, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have now addressed the concerns raised in the initial review. The revision is acceptable for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No |
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