Peer Review History
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PONE-D-20-30293 Understanding the implementation, impact and sustainable use of an electronic pharmacy referral service at hospital discharge: A qualitative evaluation using Strong Structuration Theory PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Jeffries, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please note that one reviewer recommended Rejection. After considering their comments we feel it may be possible to address these concerns with a thorough revision. However, please bear in mind that further progress will depend on thoughtful responses to these comments. Please ensure that your decision is justified on PLOS ONE’s publication criteria and not, for example, on novelty or perceived impact. For Lab, Study and Registered Report Protocols: These article types are not expected to include results but may include pilot data. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Very interesting study and useful empirical findings. As one of the people who developed technology-enhanced strong structuration theory (TESST), I'm intrigued by how it was applied in this case. I can see the authors have broadly understood the principles behind it and have referenced relevant work. However I'm a bit worried that it hasn't been applied in quite the way we intended. The key unit of analysis in SST (and also in TESST, the technology-enhanced version) is the *conjuncture* - that is, a small-scale social situation such as an encounter between a patient and a pharmacist.This would require ethnography. What's been done instead is a set of interviews in which situations are talked about in the abstract (pharmacists, for example, talk about patients in general rather than a particular incident with a particular patient). The really strong SST or TESST studies I've seen have all done micro-analysis of interactional talk and action in *real* social situations. I accept that this may not have been possible (or thought of in advance), but it does limit the study significantly. In addition, for a rigorous TESST analysis, we really need a *material* analysis of the technologies to ask what social structures have been inscribed in them - for example, how has the software 'configured' the patient (what assumptions about patienthood have been built into the algorithms and how do these features and functions of the technology shape and constrain what happens?). To be honest I think the empirical findings are pretty interesting without SST or TESST - so I think there are two options here: leave out the attempt to use this particular theory and redraft the paper as a simple thematic analysis, OR go for the more theoretically-rich redraft with a bit more analysis (eg. go through the data and find when people are talking about concrete cases and focus the analysis on those). Depends whether your main goal is to contribute to theory or improve the NHS! One further suggestion - the paper would benefit greatly from a general edit to sharpen the message. Abstract for example could be condensed quite a bit. Hope this helps improve the paper. Trish Greenhalgh Reviewer #2: Summary This is an interesting text, in an important and pressing area of research: the assessment of technology solutions applied to healthcare. In this case an electronic pharmacy data management system, with potential to support community pharmacies to track/trace patients medication history when admitted/discharged into/from hospital. An evaluation of the TCAM system was undertaken for patients who receive their prescribed medication via Monitored Dosages Systems to understand it adoption and functionality from the end user perspective, healthcare professional and patient/carer alike. With an increasing pressure on healthcare systems, the use of information technology data management systems is a vital area to ensure clear and reliable communication across and within organisations that manage patient care. An ageing population gives rise to an increase in the number of patients suffering from physical and mental frailty, and systems such as TCAM for MDS can allow data to be joined up and lead to more efficient and effective care for this group. Major Issues There do not appear to be any major issues with this article, which reports some interesting work, presenting and assessing the value of pharmacy electronic data management systems, that operate across organisational boundaries. The study design, research questions and data collected to provide an answer are appropriate. However The following areas may be worth further reflection: Background 1. It could be interesting to refer to other E-prescriptions solutions, and why TCAM was chosen 2. It is worth saying more about how TCAM works, and reporting on it in more detail. 3. Is it worth outlining other frameworks considered (other than ANT), and saying why they were discarded and SST selected as best one to use? Data Analysis 1. Could the data be described in more detail. How many hours of interviews were there in total? What were the job titles or those interviews. Could this be presented as a table 2. It could be helpful to include the interview topic guide/guides, maybe as an appendix. Page10 Lines 192-198 refer to an interview guide, but only gives broad areas interviews were interested in, which all seem to be focused on professionals, not patients/carers. 3. Can more be said about the participants that declined to take part (page 34, line 748). What about professionals who declined. 4. Could the analysis be clearer and reported to show how the themes were present across the data set. Overall is could be good to understand more about the coding process and derivation of themes in general. 5. It may also be supportive of the research findings to include the coding framework that was developed. The authors talk of thematic analysis, and refer to 4 main thematic themes discussed in the results section. Where there any other themes of sub-themes of interest, it could benefit the design of further research to have access to these. 6. The authors give 4 main themes (and sub-themes?) as the foundation of the results of the data analysis, broadly speaking these are: ○ The Network, implementation, use and sustainability § Relationships between different health professionals and what this achieves § Communication and movement of information in the network § Patients and carers (this seems more to fit in with communication- or lack of it, from the patients perspective) ○ External factors and (Technology/materiality) § The previous system and changes in technology § New technology provided new infrastructure ○ Internal factors, changes to work practice (organisational/social) § Adaptation of work processes to the availability of information § Timesaving, speed, and efficiency ○ Outcomes and Improvements (Agency) § Clinicians have more time § There are less prescribing errors Each of main theme is presented as a section, with sub-headings (presumably corresponding to sub-themes). but it is at times difficult to develop a clear picture of how these were arrived at and for the reader to chart a course through the narrative in this format. Could themes be presented/summarised as a table or diagram to give greater clarity. 7. Were these the only themes that emerged, how did they compare between the different interview subject types, a lot of what is reported seems from the perspective of the professional, perhaps this is understandable given they provided more data. Could community pharmacists provide indirect feedback from patients regarding the system? 8. What techniques for "trustworthiness" (reliability) in the analysis were used (inter-rata coding, etc)? 9. What are the boundaries of the research findings ("transferability"). Page 34 Line 734 says the study did not aim to be generalisable, but some of the findings may well be, especially if echoed from more than one participant (triangulation). Minor issues 1. Title. Could '…and sustainable value…' be a clearer word than 'sustainable use', which seems assumed in the concept of sustainability? Given only the TCAM is evaluated, could this not be in the title? (i.e. "The TCAM electronic pharmacy referral service at hospital discharge: A qualitative evaluation using Strong Structuration Theory") 2. The page numbers on the COREQ checklist do not seem to match the article (25 and 26 refer to the coding and derivation of themes as being on pages 11 and 10 respectively, however these could not be found there. 3. Page 11 Line 209. The payment for participation seems quite considerable, was this raised at ethics? Why were staff paid more than patients? I am not sure that specifying the actual amounts benefits the article. 4. While clearly data should remain unidentifiable, but could participant demographic data (gender, age, etc) yield some insights, especially in terms of subsequent meta-analysis and research into technology adoption. 5. It appears TCAM can apply to admission and discharge. In the title is says this is about discharge, but some places this is not always clear (Page 22 465-473 , the pharmacists seems to be taking about admission). Can this duality worth further exposure in the discussion and conclusions? Could understanding how they are different be helpful? Conclusion Overall this work should be given full consideration for publication, especially given there is so little published in terms of TCAM, or the evaluation of pharmacy electronic data systems, from the perspective of patient drug safety at discharge. Socio-technical Systems and Strong Structuration Theory, are ideal to provide an appropriate lens to better understand the interface of healthcare information technology and the cultural, social and organisational aspects of shared work activity. Their reporting will also allow to build up the evidence base of socio-technical theory based research in healthcare and provide a focused perspective on this challenging area. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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