Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 19, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-21410 Sharp increase in inequality in education in times of the COVID-19-pandemic PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Haelermans, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 04 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In general, the article looks interesting and gives good and useful information. There are, however, some minor points that must be corrected before publication. - One of the most important arguments of this article, compared to previous similar publications is: "we look in greater detail at background differences between students and present results showing that the learning loss due to the school closures are unequally distributed and that students from disadvantaged backgrounds have suffered much more than their fellow students." I would like to understand better what is the meaning of "greater detail" since a new publication should offer something different and it should be clearly explained. - Getting data from 2018 regarding internet access in Dutch households seems to be a source of information that can be updated for sure with more recent data sources. - Materials and methods: Standardized tests had the same format in the pandemic? Were they online or face-to-face? I think authors should (if possible) to describe a little bit better the correction CITO made related to the delay in the tests. This fact is very important because authors are analyzing differences in those tests, actually. We must be sure that there is not any influence in that sense. - Another point that can be improved is the selection of groups when analyzing parents' conditions. It could be done with easy clustering algorithms to check if their groups are correctly separated. Alternatively, a better explanation about why authors selected three groups (instead of four or two, for example) could be adequate. -Typos: "the school closures and the COVID-1919-pandemic than others" "paper comes down to 201819 students in 1178" "This is implies that during the" ... Congratulations for your nice work. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: G. M. Sacha [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-21-21410R1Sharp increase in inequality in education in times of the COVID-19-pandemicPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Haelermans, Let me first apologize for the delay in processing your manuscript on behalf of PLOS ONE. I took over the editorial duty and, because I always aim to obtain two expert opinions on every manuscript, decided to ask for an additional expertise. You will find the review at the bottom of this email. As you will see, this second reviewer is quite positive about your study but asks for some clarifications. I concur with the reviewer that your study is timely, interesting and relevant and I would encourage you to address the reviewer's comment. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 03 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Jérôme Prado Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #2: This an interesting and very timely study on pertinent issues in education policy. Below are some concerns I have about the study. Clarifying those would be helpful. Major Comments: 1. How does the sample used in the study compare to the overall school population in the Netherlands? In other words, how representative is the sample of Netherlands nationally? The authors refer to using a national sample in calculating weights. How do averages of various variables in the study sample compare to those in the national sample? 2. Relatedly, what proportion of total schools in Netherlands does the sample of schools, students and test records in Table 2 represent? 3. On page 6 authors mention that “Test supplier CITO made a recalculation for all test scores to correct for this delayed testing.” Is CITO the only supplier that did this recalculation or did other mentioned suppliers did it too? What kind of impact can we expect this calculation to have on the scores, especially in comparison to other suppliers and to previous years scores? While authors cannot get to the actual calculation CITO did, some explanation would be helpful. 4. Do the authors have any information on teachers or school level variables? Does the study account for teacher and school level effects in their estimations? For example we can expect some teachers to do better in remote instruction that others. Are/Can the estimations accounting for this in any way? 5. Parental Education: They mention on page 7 that “Parental education is defined as low when the highest obtained degree of (one) the parents is in pre-vocati…..”. They mention further down in the text that they use the higher of the two parents educational attainment. Would it not be pertinent instead to also look at this my mother/father or by the parent with the larger share of child responsibilities? Perhaps, if we expect the parent with lower educational attainment to be more responsible for child caring, look at estimates along that margin? 6. The school closure periods mentioned on page 4 is not very long. How do authors see this in light of closure in other parts of the world e.g. U.S. where schools remained closed for extended periods of time? Can we expect more widening of gaps across different groups if closure remained longer? 7. During the time period of the closure, the vulnerable kids were apparently still allowed to attend schools. How does this, if at all, interact with the income and education of the households. Are authors able to identify students who continued attending during the closure? 8. Results: Education literature generally finds that educational interventions bring a larger change in math and a smaller change in reading scores, partly because reading is not just dependent on what is taught in school but requires stronger input from home also. It would be nice to tie in that literature with the Math vs. Reading losses the authors estimates 9. How should we see migrants in terms of income and education? In other words what is the average education level of migrants in Netherlands and what income category should we expect them to fall into. In other words, more clarity on needed for the reader on analysis over migration vs. income or education. 10. It is not clear what Table 3 is showing. Is it the number of test score observations? If yes, why do we have decimals? If no, then are these some averages of test scores ? 11. Figure 5, 6 and 7 need to be clearer. I could not understand what was being shown by each line. Minor Comments 1. Relevant study to cite on the effect of pandemic on student learning : https://gpl.gsu.edu/download/student-achievement-growth-during-the-covid-19-pandemic-report-appendix/?wpdmdl=2101&refresh=614b7200638111632334336 2. Contribution: I think in terms of contribution the authors need to think beyond the Dutch data. They emphasize on page 3 the comparison to other work that uses Dutch data. I would urge them to look at other studies, in different countries, that look at inequality in education outcomes during the pandemic and situate their study in the wider literature. 3. The authors mention on page 3 their contribution compared to an existing study on Dutch data. I don’t think having an 18% vs 15% sample is a contribution, unless the new sample is more representative for some reason. The other points about having better and richer background info is certainly something to point out. Typos Page 25: “figs” should be replaced by Figures Page 4 : “ At total of 96% of Dutch households “have” internet acces…” Page 2: For higher education the results are less consistent: some find negative effects [6] while others indicate that distance learning might have made students more efficient [7] or see little effects [8]. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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