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PONE-D-20-40415 Changes in sex equity at American Psychiatric Association annual meetings over 10 years (between 2009 and 2019) PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wissam El-Hage, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We do need to highlight whether there is an existent sex disparity or not. Hence, this I think that topic is relevant in terms of academia. However, the topic does not represent the paper well. I would not use the word 'equity' here. The introduction could have more updated references relating to sex differences in academia. There are several recent papers published on this topic. The methodology is weak. The authors should use hierrchial regression technique in their statistical analysis. That would give more insight into the results once partial pooling is used. At present, frequencies and chi square analysis have been applied in the analysis. This analysis does not do justice to the objective of the paper. The discussion could be made stronger by using updated references. Once the authors have incorporated the changes suggested by the editor and the reviewers, we would be happy to review the paper again. Thank you. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 10th 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study addressed an interesting and nice topic, and especially for the first time in psychiatry. It was appropriately planned and analyzed as well as was written in a well-fashioned manner. The aim of the study, methodology, and conclusions were perfectly synchronized. Minor suggestion: The authors mentioned, “National demographic data were obtained from the website of the Association of American Medical Colleges for 2007 and 2017 as data for 2009 and 2019 were not available”. It represents that, these were the latest data, that is data for 2008 and 2018 were also not available. I would like to suggest adding this to the statement. Reviewer #2: Comments 1. Is the title is a current public health issue? NO 2. Is the objective is clear and measurable? NO 3. Is the method clear and explained well? NO 3.1. Who is your study population? 3.2. What is your study design? 3.3. What is sampling technique? 3.4. What is sample size? 3.5. What about exclusion and inclusion criteria? 3.6. What is dependent variable? 4. Is your data is primarily or secondary? If primarily, how you collect through ten years? Or if secondary data, explain it also. 5. The recommendation needs major revision. Based on specific, measurable, time bound and reasonable. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-20-40415R1Representation of women at American Psychiatric Association annual meetings over 10 years (between 2009 and 2019)PLOS ONE Dear Dr. El-Hage, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 05 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Marc Potenza Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I had some minor revisions, all were addressed. The study can be published, on the merit of their specific presentation on the change in participation of female; if queries by other reviewers are addressed properly. Reviewer #3: Referee Report PLOS ONE, PONE-D-20-40415R1 Representation of women at American Psychiatric Association annual meetings over 10 years (between 2009 and 2019) A. Summary This paper studies the change in women’s representation in academic Psychiatry, which is an important and timely topic, by comparing the female share of women in the American Psychiatric Association annual meetings in 2009 versus 2019. B. Overall takeaway This paper finds that the percentage of female speakers was larger in 2019 than 2009, which implies that the representation of women at the APA annual meetings has increased during the period. C. Major comments 1. Statistical method and interpretation As the authors responded to reviewer #2, the population of this study is “the speakers at the 2009 and 2019 APA annual meetings,” and the data of this study are not sample data, but population data: “We collected the data for all the speakers of the 2009 and 2019 APA annual meetings.” Here, the parameters of interest are the percentages of women of all the speakers in the meetings, which can be found by simply calculating the percentage using the population data the authors have. In other words, the parameters of interest are known, so it is inappropriate to perform any statistical estimation (i.e. z-test, Chi2 analysis, p-value, etc.), which is the process to use sample estimates to approximate the value of unknown population parameters. See similar previous papers (e.g. Gerull et al. 2020, Sleeman et al. 2019, and May and Dimand 2019) which simply report the number/percentage of women without any tests and perform statistical tests only when they need to estimate some unknown parameters. In the result section, the authors repetitively report estimates, p-values, and statistical significance of the estimates. For the reasons I mentioned above, however, I am neither persuaded that these statistical analyses in this study are well performed, nor that the interpretation and discussion of the results are presented in an appropriate/intelligible fashion. 2. Logistic regression The authors mechanically report the result of the logistic regression without any interpretation. I cannot find any consideration as to why the explanatory variables are chosen or what the estimates mean. The authors added this analysis responding to a previous reviewer who suggested to use a hierarchical regression technique, but the logistic regression was not performed as such. 3. Suggestion This paper would be more substantial if the authors went beyond the current research question: whether the percentage of women in the APA meetings increased between 2009 and 2019. The question would be easily answered by simply calculating the percentage of women in the data without any statistical inferences. A possible question which can be further studied with the data is which factor explains the increase in the women’s representation (this is the question where statistical estimation is really needed). Although the authors suggest some possible explanations in the discussion section, they are weakly supported by the data. For example, an interesting question left for future research is “the impact of the sex of the chair on the choice of speaker at the APA annual meetings,” as suggested by the authors in “Strengths and limitations.” If the data provide the information on chairs of each APA meeting session, the authors would be able to regress the percentage of women in a session on the gender of the chair of the session controlling for other explanatory variables. D. Minor comments 1. Consistency with the national demographic data The authors could provide more empirical analyses, especially in terms of the limitations of this paper mentioned in the subsection “Strengths and limitations.” For example, one of the limits is that the speakers of the APA meetings are not necessarily U.S. researchers; they also consist of researchers from other countries. The authors could reduce this concern by collecting data on the speakers’ institutions (as the authors collected the gender of the speakers) to determine whether the speakers working within or without the U.S. 2. Referring to figures Although a previous reviewer suggested to “ensure that you refer to Figure 1-2 in your text,” such figures have not been explicitly referred to by the text. The authors could mention figures 1-3 somewhere in the subsections “Roles,” “Topics,” or “Sessions” of the Results section. E. Citations Katherine M. Gerull, Brandon Malik Wahba, Laurel M. Goldin, Jared McAllister, Andrew Wright, Amalia Cochran, Arghavan Salles. Representation of women in speaking roles at surgical conferences. The American Journal of Surgery. 2020;220(1):20-26. Katherine E. Sleeman, Jonathan Koffman, Irene J. Higginson. Leaky pipeline, gender bias, self-selection or all three? A quantitative analysis of gender balance at an international palliative care research conference. BMJ Supportive & Palliative Care. 2019;9:146-148. Ann Mari May, Robert W. Dimand. Women in the Early Years of the American Economic Association: A Membership beyond the Professoriate Per Se. History of Political Economy. 2019;51(4):671–702. Reviewer #4: I applaud the effort of the authors to study the trends and gender differences in APA conferences over the years. The inclusion of women at conferences is similar to that of workforce. However, still there is no parity in the workforce which is likely impact of slower growth. Abstract: It will be advisable to add how sex was determined in the study in methods. Introduction: Well written. There are new acronyms being used such as WIM, WIC. It will be good to use WIP: women in psychiatry as a new acronym and use it throughout the manuscript. APA is not defined and used directly. Methods: The design is intuitive. However, would need to clarify and improve a few things. How and who made the decision regarding adding unmentioned 2009 topics to enter into a different group in 2019. As mentioned some authors were included in multiple sessions, how about comparing the repetition of male vs female authors. As in the past similar studies, women have fewer repetition compared to men. Results: The above website provided updated data up to 2019 for women pshyciatry fellows, those could be mentioned rather than 2007 and 2017. “Compared to 2009, the proportion of female chairs increased by 12% in 2019, though not significantly (42% vs 47%; p=0.70).” There seems to be an increase of 5%. Also, it will be good to give absolute number first and then percentages in brackets to show the numerical increase as well and in compliance with scientific documentation. It will be also good for the results section to be direct rather than negating it. Eg.: “Compared to 2009, the proportion of female chairs increased by 12% in 2019, though not significantly (42% vs 47%; p=0.70). Can be modified to The proportion of female chairs remained similar from xxx(42%) in 2009 to yyy(47%) in 2020. Or There was no significant trend in …. This can be implied throughput and the word count will decrease. Eg: The percentage of female speakers in addiction psychiatry decreased dropped by 21%, Remove either one of the bolded as they are synonymous Discussion: Starts with again mentioning about methods and rationale which can be cut short for the first paragraph by removing first 2 lines. The discussion seems to be very well written and compared with all specialties. It will be also good to compare with cardiology and women leadership as well in the discussions section and consider citing the following paper. https://www.ahajournals.org/doi/full/10.1161/CIRCOUTCOMES.120.007578 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2589790X21000986 https://www.ahajournals.org/doi/full/10.1161/CIRCULATIONAHA.119.044693 ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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