Peer Review History

Original SubmissionApril 8, 2021
Decision Letter - Wenbin Tan, Editor

PONE-D-21-10636

No evidence of SARS-CoV-2 in hospitalized patients with severe acute respiratory syndrome in five Italian hospitals from 1st November 2019 to 29th February 2020

PLOS ONE

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PLOS ONE

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer #1: All the sections of the manuscript need to be rewritten or to be rephrased with more focus on the aim of the work and the value of the results. the sections need to be better connected to show the importance of the findings. There are some drawbacks in the sampling and storing. These drawbacks should be discussed to clearly show their effects on the results and their reliability.

Reviewer #2: Please address the following points:

1. Were the tests for all the viruses done simultaneously? The authors have to rule out the possibility that RNA in the samples was not degraded to yield a positive test for SARS-CoV-2.

2. Are the authors sure that the RT-PCR tests were real time?

3. Which of the four cities are located in Northern Italy (the worst affected region)?

4. ECDC? European Center for Disease Control?

5. Table 1: What does N/A mean? Explain.

6. Write figure legends or at least their titles.

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Submitted filename: PONE-D-21-10636_reviewer_corrected.pdf
Revision 1

Journal requirements

1) The manuscript meets PLOS ONE’s style requirements.

2) The sentence “The study protocol was approved by the Ethics Committee of the Liguria Region (Genoa, Italy) (n◦ 245/2019) as coordinator center and subsequently approved by all local the Ethics Committees” has been added.

a) In the manuscript, the paragraph “Ethics Statement”, containing the EC approval code and the detail on informed consent, has been added.

3) The sentence “Informed written consent was obtained from each patient, as required by the DRIVE study protocol [15]” has been added.

4) In the Methods section, the description of the hospitals has been added.

Reviewers’ comments

Reviewer #1:

All the sections of the manuscript need to be rewritten or to be rephrased with more focus on the aim of the work and the value of the results. the sections need to be better connected to show the importance of the findings. There are some drawbacks in the sampling and storing. These drawbacks should be discussed to clearly show their effects on the results and their reliability.

Done

As required by reviewer 1, all sections have been rewritten in order to better focus on the aims and results of the study.

All revisions are well visible in the revised manuscript with track change.

Reviewer #2:

1) Were the tests for all the viruses done simultaneously? The authors have to rule out the possibility that RNA in the samples was not degraded to yield a positive test for SARS-CoV-2.

The text has been modified in order to better explain that the molecular analyses for influenza and SARS-CoV-2 were not performed simultaneously. The molecular test for influenza was performed before the test for SARS-CoV-2. The study biases have been better explained.

2) Are the authors sure that the RT-PCR tests were real time?

Yes, all molecular tests were performed by means of the real-time method.

3) Which of the four cities are located in Northern Italy (the worst affected region)?

Genoa is the only city located in Northern Italy

4) ECDC? European Center for Disease Control?

Yes

5) Table 1: What does N/A mean? Explain.

The notation N/A (not available) has been explained

6) Write figure legends or at least their titles.

Done

References have been updated and renumbered.

Figure 2 has been improved.

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Submitted filename: Response_to_reviewers_PONE-D-21-10636.docx
Decision Letter - Wenbin Tan, Editor

PONE-D-21-10636R1No evidence of SARS-CoV-2 in hospitalized patients with severe acute respiratory syndrome in five Italian hospitals from 1st November 2019 to 29th February 2020PLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Panatto,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 07 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:

  • A rebuttal letter that responds to each point raised by the academic editor and reviewer(s). You should upload this letter as a separate file labeled 'Response to Reviewers'.
  • A marked-up copy of your manuscript that highlights changes made to the original version. You should upload this as a separate file labeled 'Revised Manuscript with Track Changes'.
  • An unmarked version of your revised paper without tracked changes. You should upload this as a separate file labeled 'Manuscript'.

If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter.

If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols.

We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Wenbin Tan

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Review Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: All the comments have been addressed. I recommend the authors to rewrite the conclusion section

Reviewer #2: The authors have indicated that the detection for SARS-CoV2 was done on archived samples that were previously tested for Influenza viruses. They found that all the samples were found negative for the coronavirus. The onus is on the researchers to show that the RNA in the samples was not degraded. They should have used some positive controls for these samples. For example test again for the already detected Influenza virus, for example. Furthermore, they should indicate whether they re-extracted RNA from the samples or used already extracted RNA from these samples. These are extremely important points. For this reason, major revision is indicated.

Revision 2

Genoa, 4 November 2021

Dear Academic Editor PLOS ONE,

Thank you for giving us the opportunity to resubmit our manuscript “No evidence of SARS-CoV-2 in hospitalized patients with severe acute respiratory syndrome in five Italian hospitals from 1st November 2019 to 29th February 2020” (PONE-D-21-10636) for publication in your journal. The reviewers' comments were insightful and pertinent.

Below, you will find the reviewers' reports with point-by-point replies and explanations of the modifications made. The reviewers’ comments are in bold, while our replies are in italics.

The revised manuscript has been uploaded to the system in two versions: one with “track changes” and the other without “track changes”.

Sincerely,

Prof. Donatella Panatto

Reviewers’ comments

Reviewer #1:

All the comments have been addressed. I recommend the authors to rewrite the conclusion section

Done

Reviewer #2:

The authors have indicated that the detection for SARS-CoV2 was done on archived samples that were previously tested for Influenza viruses. They found that all the samples were found negative for the coronavirus. The onus is on the researchers to show that the RNA in the samples was not degraded. They should have used some positive controls for these samples. For example test again for the already detected Influenza virus. Furthermore, they should indicate whether they re-extracted RNA from the samples or used already extracted RNA from these samples. These are extremely important points. For this reason, major revision is indicated.

As required by reviewer 2, we have better specified, in the Materials and Methods section and Discussion section, the method of verifying the correct re-extraction of the genetic material from the sample and the integrity of the viral RNA.

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Submitted filename: Response_to_reviewers_PONE-D-21-10636_4112021.docx
Decision Letter - Wenbin Tan, Editor

No evidence of SARS-CoV-2 in hospitalized patients with severe acute respiratory syndrome in five Italian hospitals from 1st November 2019 to 29th February 2020

PONE-D-21-10636R2

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Wenbin Tan

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

Additional Editor Comments:

The 2nd reviewer's comment was well addressed.

Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Wenbin Tan, Editor

PONE-D-21-10636R2

No evidence of SARS-CoV-2 in hospitalized patients with severe acute respiratory syndrome in five Italian hospitals from 1st November 2019 to 29th February 2020

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