Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 20, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-20268 The impact of parent mental health on the intergenerational transmission of attachment: A systematic review PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Risi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I was fortunate to receive reviews from two reviewers with expertise on attachment. The two reviews differed a great deal regarding the potential impact of the manuscript, with the first reviewer suggesting rejection and the second reviewer suggesting minor revisions. If you choose to submit a revised manuscript, please address the significant issues noted by reviewer 1 by providing a strong rationale for examining psychopathology as a mediator and addressing differences in attachment measures. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 17 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This paper proposes to examine the roles of psychopathology as a factor in explaining cross-generational transmission of attachment security/insecurity. The issue is a significant one and there is as yet no explanation for the low level of cross-generational transmission. Unfortunately the paper has three significant problems: 1. It is not obvious that psychopathology is the place to look for additional predictive power across generations here. If it turned out that psychopathology contributed to predicting attachment across generations it would not really be a specific contribution to attachment theory. It would just be a generic effect that the disorganization associated with psychopathology has on so many other variables. For example, psychopathology might account in part for inconsistency in arithmetic scores from year to year. What attachment theorists are looking for would be something specifically related to attachment processes, e.g., contribution from the other parent, marital variables, additional demands on the mother such as employment, etc. Something that goes to the processes the theory implicates in attachment development. Even if psychopathology were statistically a significant factor (see below) it would simply raise the question what aspects of caregiving mediate the effect. At that point we would be right back where we are because the problem in not being able to predict attachment security across-generations seems to lie in not knowing what aspects of care (other than sensitivity) are causal. In brief, even if the study had found significant effects related to psychopathology, this would be of limited interest to attachment theorists. 2. The authors find only a few studies from which to extract data. This probably reflects the point mentioned above. Moreover, the few studies use a variety of different attachment measures. The adult measures, in particular, as absolutely not comparable. Despite being entitles "attachment measures" by the people who developed them, there is no evidence that they measure the same constructs. Indeed, there is considerable evidence that they are barely if at all inter-correlated and even this small association is easily accounted for by nuisance variables. In brief, having searched for studies on which to conduct their study, the authors could have determined without any statistical analysis at all that the literature does not support any useful conclusions regarding psychopathology as a mediator of cross-generation attachment transmission. 3. Attachment theorists have gone to some lengths to figure out why cross-generation transmission of attachment security is not as strong as they expect. Numerous studies have examined the issue. In addition, there are numerous conceptual analyses of the problem. Importantly, almost all of this literature refers to work on populations in which psychopathology occurs at very low levels. While one might find some additional significant cross-generational variance in samples that are more diverse with respect to psychopathology, as mentioned above, this would simply reflect generic (rather than attachment specific) effects. It would have little relevance to the problem attachment researchers have set themselves, which is to understand why there is not more cross-generation transmission in ordinary samples. In conclusion, the study is not well designed to address the issue of cross-generational transmission of attachment security. It is hard to agree with the authors that new research (which would entail samples with diversity in psychopathology) deserves high priority. More useful would be new (empirically buttressed) insights into the factors that contribute to attachment development. Even then, the issue will be difficult to resolve because it will always be difficult to distinguish between low consistency arising from design and measurement weaknesses and low consistency that would arise if the answer to the question were that attachment theorists are wrong in predicting greater consistency across generations. Sorry I can't be more positive about the study. It is a difficult issue to address and attachment researchers have not provided what the authors needed. Reviewer #2: PONE-D-21-20268 The impact of parent mental health on the intergenerational transmission of attachment: A systematic review The present study aims i) to review the association between parent’s mental health and the intergenerational transmission of attachment provided in 11 published studies, and ii) to add recommendations for research, and clinical practice. The study addresses an important gap in attachment intergenerational transmission. The manuscript is very well written, the framework is very appropriated, the statistical analyses are performed to a high technical standard, and the results are interesting and relevant although there are important limitations addressed by the authors regarding the studies sample size, the robustness of analyses or diversity of methodological options. Although the manuscript is quite long, I do not recommend an “abbreviated” version. In act, find all information relevant and enlightening. I have two minor suggestions: 1. In table 4 (p.21-24), I believe it is relevant to include information about the statistical analysis performed in each study. Particularly, because the authors discuss this topic. 2. In the abstract, the authors claim that is difficult to draw conclusions based on the published articles, I agree. However, I think they should alight the most significant results and directions found in their review, otherwise, the readers lose interest after reading the abstract. For instance, "Thus, anxiety may function as a serial mediator, interfering with a parent’s ability to sensitively respond to their infant resulting in insecure parent-child attachments." (p. 38). As well as results on parental substance abuse, depression or trauma. Overall, the study gives an important contribution to future research on the attachment field and explores the associations between parental mental health and attachment transmission. The systematic review is well performed and enlightening. I wish the authors good luck in their future research. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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The implications of parent mental health and wellbeing for parent-child attachment: A systematic review PONE-D-21-20268R1 Dear Dr. Risi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: After reading the new version of the manuscript, I find that the authors fully addressed all my concerns. Reviewer #3: The authors had already undergone a revision round with two external reviewers. I think they addressed thoroughly each and every comment and I found this review useful and sound. I agree with the concerns previously expressed by the Reviewers and the authors have properly responded to them. I have no other concern. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No |
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PONE-D-21-20268R1 The implications of parent mental health and wellbeing for parent-child attachment: A systematic review Dear Dr. Risi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Soo Hyun Rhee Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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