Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 25, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-09905 Nicotine treatment regulates PD-L1 and PD-L2 expression via inhibition of Akt pathway in HER2-type breast cancer cells PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Suzuki, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. From the reviews provided, it can be seen that a significant amount of additional molecular/mechanistic data is needed for this to be of interest to PLOS One. As indicated by both the reviewers, the study is premature and does not fully support the conclusions or provide a cohesive, complete story. A significant amount of additional molecular data would be necessary to make this a convincing story and this would be the expectation, if you were to submit a revised version. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 30 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this manuscript, authors investigated the expression patterns of immune checkpoint molecules PDL1 and PDL2 in different subtypes of breast cancer cell lines. Authors show that nicotine treatment was able to reduce the expression of PDL1 and PDL2 in HER2 positive breast cancer cell line SK-BR-3 and showed no inhibitory effect in TNBC cell line HCC1937 and MDA-MB-231. Further, authors have observed that nicotine mediated inhibitory effect on PDL1 and PDL2 in HER2 positive breast cancer cell line SK-BR-3 was dependent on the regulation of Akt pathway and may provide the new therapeutic strategies for the treatment of breast cancer. The data reported here appears to be very preliminary and more in-depth work is required to improve the scope of this manuscript. 1. It is important to investigate the effect of nicotine treatment mediated changes in the PD-L1/L2 expression and the impact on cancer stem cell like properties, proliferation, and migration. 2. nAChR subunits expression levels in these cell lines should be included and its correlation with PD-L1 and PD-L2 needs to be investigated. 3. In addition to qRT-PCR data of mRNA expression, authors should validate the PD-L1 surface expression of PD-L1 and PD-L2 by flow cytometry in all cell lines before and after nicotine treatment. 4. Figure 2D, please provide better quality of immunofluorescence images for PDL1 and also provide immunofluorescence images for PDL2 in figure 2E. 5. Overall, the quality of immunofluorescence images is not convincing 6. AKT phosphorylation with one cell line is not enough. Authors need to perform in multiple cell lines. It also lacks proper positive control with AKT inhibitor to look at PDL1 and PDL2 expression. Or consider knocking down of Akt expression by siRNA experiments. Reviewer #2: Reviewer’s Comment: The present study by Murayama MA et al titled “Nicotine treatment regulates ………. Breast cancer cells” ineptly demonstrated a very preliminary rather a qualitative observation where an active natural tobacco ingredient, nicotine suppresses immune checkpoint molecules, PD-L1 and PD-L2 expression in HER2+ type breast cancer cells which in turn might correlate directly or indirectly with the dephosphorylation status of AKT molecules in these types of cells. Given that the basic concept of AKT phosphorylation depends on the status of the immune checkpoint molecule, PD-Ls expression that majorly studied in the field of gastric cancers, nevertheless, in-depth molecular analysis in the field of breast cancer, especially on this particular subtype (HER2+ in this case) might be of tremendous interest in the field and warrants more comprehensive and mechanistic studies. In a nutshell, the current study is a premature and trivial piece of work without much in-depth molecular analysis and hence does not attract this reviewer in favor of publication. The areas to improve in the study are listed below, 1. How PD-L expressions directly regulate AKT phosphorylation that could be investigated in the breast cancer cells, especially in the context of HER2+ subtypes followed by the modulation upon nicotine administration. Authors should investigate the molecular insight of it. The presented data is just the tip of the iceberg! 2. A single cell line data can always be deceptive and therefore, needs supplementation and/or recapitulation in few more cell lines under a particular subtype before drawing any major conclusion. 3. What is the nicotinic acetylcholine receptor(s) status under the different subtypes of breast cancer cells utilized in the study? A comprehensive RT-PCR panel would have been interesting to correlate the effect of nicotine in these subtypes under the study. 4. To establish the real correlation between PD-L1 and PD-L2 expression with phospho-AKT and nAChRs expression, authors could have done comprehensive ICC/IHC studies on commercially available BC tissue microarrays (TMAs) and could have expanded their analysis on the different subtypes in BC! 5. How nicotine differentially modulates the AKT phosphorylation via modulation of PD-L expression between HER2+ versus TNBC cells though they both express these same set of immune checkpoint molecules? This fundamental question also remains unanswered in the manuscript. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Krithika Kodumudi Reviewer #2: Yes: SahaB [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Nicotine treatment regulates PD-L1 and PD-L2 expression via inhibition of Akt pathway in HER2-type breast cancer cells PONE-D-21-09905R1 Dear Dr. Suzuki, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All comments were addressed by authors satisfactorily. Revised manuscript has included all the key experiments suggested. Reviewer #2: The revised manuscript did not address all the questions raised by this reviewer, satisfactorily! 1. A single cell line data under a specific subtype of BC which also determines the mechanistic insights, can always be deceptive. This reviewer is skeptical about it. 2. Further, this reviewer is not convinced with the answers made by the authors against question numbers 2, 4, and 5. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Krithika Kodumudi Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-09905R1 Nicotine treatment regulates PD-L1 and PD-L2 expression via inhibition of Akt pathway in HER2-type breast cancer cells Dear Dr. Suzuki: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Srikumar Chellappan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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