Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 24, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-09724 Predicting future hospital care utilization by patients with multimorbidity using electronic health record data PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Verhoeff, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 07 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Ram Chandra Bajpai, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): As it seems a model development study. Authors should include it in the title and clearly mention in the methods section. Forward stepwise variable section is not recommended when building a prediction model as regression coefficients may be unstable and some important combination of predictors may be missed. Authors should use recommendations by Heinze et al 2018 for variable selection (https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/full/10.1002/bimj.201700067). Patient selection process should be better represented by a flow diagram so authors should consider it. Why did authors not formally calculated power for each outcome of interest? Authors should use Riley et al 2020 (https://www.bmj.com/content/368/bmj.m441) to demonstrate appropriateness of study power for each outcome. Authors have used a weighted split-sample procedure for internal validation. This statement required a proper citation. Authors should also consider some additional model calibration measures such as Brier score, and expected /observed event ratio etc. Model algorithm (or final equation) for each outcome must be presented in the manuscript so others will know about how to calculate risk for a given patient. Included figures are not clear and readable. Kindly add high resolution figures. Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Thank you for including your ethics statement: "The local institutional review board104approved the anonymous use of thesedata for research purposesanda waiver of consent(Gelre LTC 105number2019_02)". 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the submission of the manuscript entitled "Predicting future hospital care utilization by patients with multimorbidity using electronic health record data". The authors have written a very succinct and interesting manuscript, which will contribute to the knowledge base of multimorbidity. I have included suggested revisions below and would be happy to review a resubmission. -Could the authors please further clarify why these separate groups of patients were created : "who had received outpatient clinical [care?] for two or more chronic diagnoses, two or more oncological diagnoses or at least one chronic and one oncological diagnosis in 2017 and who had received hospital care for at least one diagnosis in 2018"? -Please change "multimorbid patients" to "patients with multimorbidity" -Please change "probability for patient" as it is not clear what this sentence is describing -Could the authors please clarify whether data about the reason(s) for hospitalizations, emergency department visits or outpatient visits were available? -If this data were not available, what potential insight would this data provide and if this data were available, why was this data not included in the analyses? Reviewer #2: This paper seeks to establish whether data from electronic health records can be used to predict future healthcare utilization as measured by >=1 acute hospital stays, >=2 ED visits, or >=12 outpatient visits. Numerous studies have been conducted on this topic, but this is unique in that it is focused on the population with multimorbidity, defined as 2 or more chronic conditions. The results show that with basic information from the EHR, future health utilzation can be predicted with mild accuracy (c-statistic around 0.70) Overall, the manuscript was technically sound, and the results presented are appropriate. The sample size is large enough for the methods used. One strength is the authors used the train/testing approach to build their models on 2/3 of the data, and validate on the remaining one-third. The results presented in the manuscript and supplementary material provide a good deal of transparency, and the methods are described well enough to replicate the study. Although the methods used are valid - they are not state-of-the-art when it comes to building models where the main goal is prediction (as opposed to inference). Linear Regularization methods like LASSO and Elastic-Net generally perform better at prediction than stepwise logistic models. Further, methods like classification trees and Random Forest, may do better if there are important interaction effects between predictor variables. The authors should address this in the limitations. Further, they may want to highlight some of the strengths of the model they used, namely that it is interpretable, compared to many other "black box" methods. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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Development and internal validation of prediction models for future hospital care utilization by patients with multimorbidity using electronic health record data PONE-D-21-09724R1 Dear Dr. Verhoeff, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ram Chandra Bajpai, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thanks very much for your responses and revisions based on reviewer feedback -- I believe that this manuscript is acceptable for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-09724R1 Development and internal validation of prediction models for future hospital care utilization by patients with multimorbidity using electronic health record data Dear Dr. Verhoeff: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ram Chandra Bajpai Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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