Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 16, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-29042Peri-abortion contraceptive counseling: a systematic review of randomized controlled trialsPLOS ONE Estimado Taype-Rondan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 26 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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List the grants or organizations that supported your study, including funding received from your institution. b) State what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role in your study, please state: “The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.” c) If any authors received a salary from any of your funders, please state which authors and which funders. d) If you did not receive any funding for this study, please state: “The authors received no specific funding for this work.” Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for your submission. With regards to publication criteria (https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/criteria-for-publication): 1) This study appears to present the results of original research. 2) Results reported do not appear to have been published elsewhere. 3) Experiments, statistics, and other analyses are performed to a high technical standard and are described in sufficient detail. There are some minor suggestions made by a number of reviewers before publication is accepted. 4) Conclusions are presented in an appropriate fashion and are supported by the data. 5) The article is presented in an intelligible fashion and is written in standard English. 6) The research meets all applicable standards for the ethics of experimentation and research integrity. 7) The article adheres to appropriate reporting guidelines and community standards for data availability. Additional points: - Thank you for submitting your systematic review in a structured format- there's a conflict between whether you've submitted in the 2009 or 2020 format of PRISMA. - I would also suggest reviewing your manuscript with regards to the AMSTAR2 checklist (or an equivalent), to maximise the measured quality of this SR and consider including this as a supplementary file. - It would be useful to clarify whether there are any differences between the PROSPERO protocol and the methods that were followed in the manuscript. - The cut-offs used for heterogenity assessment and the choice to quantitatively synthesise are interesting- it would be useful to reference and give an explaination for why this was felt to be warranted as it could be a point of criticism. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes Reviewer #6: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Gonzales-Huaman and co-authors performed a systematic review about peri-abortion contraceptive counseling interventions. The introduction builds a logical context for the article, the purpose of which is clear and well defined, appropriate physiopathological background is given, and key concepts are defined. I think the motivation for the present research is clearly expressed. Data comprised in the tables is clear and consistent with the article’s content. The statistical methods used are appropriate. The literature is analyzed and critically appraised. Ideas are acknowledged appropriately and accurately; there are no instances of plagiarism, and reference citations are complete and accurate. Reviewer #2: 1. The article has not been published elsewhere. 2. The statistical analysis has been performed appropriately without performing a meta-analysis for counselling provided by physicians and midwives. 3. The article is not presented in an intelligible fashion or is written in standard English. 4. It is not necessary 5. The article adheres to appropriate reporting guidelines and community standards for data availability Reviewer #3: This is a relevant systematic review which is intended to provide robust evidence regarding the effectiveness of peri-abortion contraceptive counseling in several settings towards reduction of the incidences of repeat abortions. The manuscript has been well written with full considerations for the requirements for the condcut and reporting of sytematic reviews and meta analyisis. There are however few gramatical errors that needs to be corrected and suggestiosn towards improving the quality of the report. Please find below further comments on the manuscript. ABSTRACT Comment 1: The time frame for the studies included in the systematic review is conspicuously missing. This should be reflected not in the abstract. Comment 2: Also include the databases searched by the authors ad whether there were language restrictions in the search. Conclusion Comment 3: The authors stated in the conclusion “There is no evidence that involvement of different professionals influences contraceptive use”. It is not clear how this was arrived at since only two studies out of 11 compared influence of the involvement of different professionals in counselling. Rather due to the paucity of RCT that compared the two approaches, there is limited evidence that involvement of different professionals influences contraceptive use. Key messages Comment 4: The key messages from this study has not been well highlighted in this section. The following statements should be deleted from this section during revision: •We conducted a systematic review and meta-analysis of 11 RCTs to determine the effect of peri-abortion contraceptive counseling. • We evaluated the effect of contraceptive counseling on peri-abortion contraceptive use to assess the contribution of this strategy to reducing future pregnancies. Replace the above with information that highlights key messages like whether this was the first RCT on the subject matter, uniqueness of study, findings, conclusions, and recommendations: Introduction Page 4, lines 2-3: Globally, abortion is a complex situation for people with uterus (cis, trans and non-binary people). [2]. Comment 5: This statement may not be relevant to the context. Please delete Page 4, Lines 14-17: Therefore, we performed a systematic review to summarize the available data on randomized controlled trials (RCTs) effects of peri-abortion contraceptive counseling intervention on contraceptive use and obstetric outcomes. Comment 6: Paraphrase to: Therefore, we performed a systematic review to summarize the available data from randomized controlled trials (RCTs) that evaluated the effects of peri-abortion contraceptive counseling intervention on contraceptive use and obstetric outcomes Methods Page 4, line 24, Page 5 lines 1-2: and enhanced the new strategy considered for the trial) and were published as original papers in scientific journals Comment 7: and enhanced counselling as the new strategy considered for the trial) and were published as original papers in scientific journals. Information sources and search strategy Page 5, lines 6-8: We performed a literature search of four sources: PubMed, Central Cochrane Library (CENTRAL), Scopus, and Google Scholar (for this, we only assessed the first 100 results). Comment 8: It is not clear why only the first 100 results from google scholar was assessed. This should be elucidated upon. Outcomes of interest Comment 9: The authors have listed various definition of terms considered for this study but has not referenced these considerations for objectivity in assessment of these studies in relation to widely accepted definitions. This should be included in the revision. Results Page 11, lines 1-2: In addition, the proportion of women leaving the facility with at least one contraceptive method was similar in the “nurse group” than in the “physician group” Comment 10: Change to: In addition, the proportion of women leaving the facility with at least one contraceptive method was similar in both groups Discussion This section has been well written and exhaustive Page 11, line 18: which include six RCTs Comment 11: which included six RCTs Limitations The authors have highlighted the main limitations to this study and interpretation of results. Strength However, to date, this is the most comprehensive systematic review that has assessed the effects of peri-abortion contraceptive counseling, summarizing information that may be useful to informed decision-making. Comment 12: This message should be adapted as part of the key message from this study. References The journal names should be written as they are abbreviated in the list of index medicus for all the references quoted. Reviewer #4: INTRODUCTION: There are some grammatical errors that need to be corrected. The aim of the study in the last paragraph of the introduction on page 4 is not clear. RESULTS: Wrong use of tenses and few grammatical errors. DISCUSSION: In page 12, paragraph 3, in the 1st sentence, what do the authors mean by ' the study had more weight'? Reviewer #5: 1. Summary of Research In this work, the authors sought to undertake a systematic review and meta-analysis of 11 RCTs to determine the effect of peri-abortion counseling. This review concluded that enhanced contraceptive counseling may favour effective contraceptive use but may not affect the rate of obstetric event occurrence, though the certainty of the evidence was low. Below are some comments for the authors: 2. Specific Areas Methods: In the first paragraph under the under the sub-heading ‘outcome of interest’-page 6, authors should kindly note that all injectable contraceptives are hormonal. So the monthly and quarterly injectables are implied. Authors should kindly take note of this. Again, Intrauterine system (IUS) is used interchangeable with hormonal IUD. Language editing is recommended in the 2nd paragraph under the sub-heading ‘outcome of interest’. Specifically “we considered standard care or routine counseling to all interactions with patients preestablished by the hospital, institution or the research group” Limitations and Strengths Were there any limitations in the area of language bias and how was it addressed since the various studies were undertaken in different continents with heterogeneous cultural diversities. 3. Additional Comments Inclusion of line numbers on manuscript could have been helpful for the review processes. Reviewer #6: manuscript needs to be shortened. Authors should also engage a statistician. Consider using the forest plot. also can you include a table that shows the articles reviewed and results at a glance? thank you for great review ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Daniela-Roxana Matasariu Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: DR GODWIN O. AKABA,MBBS,MSc,MPH,FWACS Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes: Dr. Timothy K. Adjei Reviewer #6: Yes: Emmanuel Ugwa [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Peri-abortion contraceptive counseling: a systematic review of randomized controlled trials PONE-D-21-29042R1 Dear Dr. Taype-Rondan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dylan A Mordaunt, MB ChB, FRACP, FAIDH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for your resubmission and for addressing all of the suggestions. This meets the criteria for publication. Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-21-29042R1 Peri-abortion contraceptive counseling: a systematic review of randomized controlled trials Dear Dr. Taype-Rondan: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Dylan A Mordaunt Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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