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PONE-D-21-08795Positive and negative mood states do not influence cross-modal auditory distraction in the serial-recall paradigmPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kaiser, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. I have now received the comments from two experts, who were mainly positive about your manuscript. There are, however, a few issues that you should consider before publication, which are mainly related to the mood induction procedure (between-subjects). I invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 23 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors examined the potential for a person’s mood to influence the size of their distraction from auditory distractors in a serial recall paradigm. The logic of the series of experiments was clearly spelled out in the introduction, and the clear writing continued throughout the manuscript. The experiments were well designed, included appropriate sample sizes to detect the relevant effect(s), and the data are available via OSF. The authors are to be commended for their excellent work. In the literature on serial recall in the presence of auditory distractions, there are two main views: a unitary attentional view and a duplex-mechanism view. The authors took care to include both auditory deviant and changing-state conditions and contrasted these with the steady-state sounds condition to determine the size of the relative distraction effects. To distinguish between the unitary and duplex-mechanism views, it is important to have both “effects” in the same sample. Through four experiments, mood induction techniques were adjusted and modified to ensure that mood was, in fact, changed by the manipulations. Despite clear effects of the mood induction and despite 4 experiments to self-replicate and to include both positive and negative mood states, there were no interactions between mood state and size of the auditory distraction effects. Can the authors speculate on how the presence of a silence or quiet condition would influence the results? Perhaps having some type of sound on every trial led to a different level of resistance to any mood x distractor interaction, as compared to examining any type of sound relative to a quiet condition and the potential interaction with mood state. Indeed, the expectation becomes “there is always a distracting sound” and might that differ from the expectation of “there is sometimes a distracting sound”? Prior research has demonstrated that expectations are important in determining how irrelevant auditory stimuli are processed. This question of which auditory conditions to include or to exclude seems to be an area of the literature that has not been explored in enough depth and may help to clarify the differences between the unitary and duplex-mechanism views in future research. I support the publication of this strong manuscript with minor revisions. I noticed only minor typos: Page 3. Line 36 “exciting” and not exiting Page 26 line 610 was powerful “enough”? The word “enough” seems to be missing. Reviewer #2: This interesting study examines the effects of mood induction (positive/negative, versus neutral) on auditory distraction. They use two mechanisms of distraction: “changing-state effect”, produced by sequences of different distractors over time. The subject processes more the order of these distractors, instead of the order of the targets required by the task, and this causes interference (i.e. interference-by-process). And an “auditory-deviant effect”, produced by deviant distractors. In 4 behavioral experiments, mood induction is done with either autobiographical recall and music, or emotional pictures from IAPS. The authors conclude that mood does not affect auditory distraction in any case. The paper is well-written and clear (but see below), with clear and interesting conclusions. The methodology seems sound for the posed questions, although I have the following comments/questions: -The large sample size is appreciated (~200 per experiment). However, how many trials per condition were analyzed in each experiment? Was it 8 trials per distraction condition? (page 11) This number seems low for a reliable interpretation of the results. Please justify. -It seems like the subjects were all different individuals from experiment to experiment. Was this the case? Please clarify when presenting experiments 2, 3 and 4. -About the serial recall paradigm, it is said that “The immediate recall of information is severely disrupted when auditory distractors have to be ignored.” However, if the task is sufficiently difficult, auditory distraction may also be reduced (e.g. SanMiguel et al., 2008). One may wonder whether a task with a certain difficulty, such as this one, may hinder any effects of mood state, or any other contextual effects, on distraction. This could be briefly mentioned. -In page 5, it is said: “…distraction by changing-state sequences is thought to arise from the obligatory processing of the auditory distractors, the changing state effect is assumed to be largely independent of the individual’s emotional-motivational state.” Then: “the auditory-deviant effect is the result of a trade off between the deployment of attention to the visual primary task and the allocation of attention to the task-irrelevant modality. Consequently, the auditory-deviant effect should be directly influenced by emotional-motivational factors that modulate this trade-off.” From this explanation and the text below in the same page (or the Discussion), I don’t see why one type of distraction should be more “obligatory” than the other, or “more independent of mood” than the other. Please explain in different words to clarify. -Mood induction (positive/neutral in exp. 1-3, or sad-negative/neutral in exp. 2-4) was implemented in 2 different groups of participants. This is, in my opinion, a limitation, as the mood effects (or lack thereof) reported are actually group effects, and this could always be susceptible to confounds, even if mood induction worked as expected in either group. For instance, were individual anxiety levels similar across groups? But other group factors could also be affecting the results. In fact, in experiment 1, the positive mood group had a more positive mood from baseline, compared to the neutral group, which may have caused some sort of ceiling effect of mood on the subsequent distraction paradigm. It would have been perhaps more suitable to test the same sample of participants with both the control (neutral) and the emotional condition, perhaps in 2 different days, or performing the serial recall task both before and after mood induction in the same session (by e.g. counterbalancing the order of neutral/emotional mood inductions across subjects, to control for possible learning effects of the task). This could be at least acknowledged in the discussion. -Another limitation of experiments 1 and 2 is the fact that mood induction is only implemented at the beginning of each experiment, and mood effects could have faded out over the 30 mins of duration of the whole session. In fact, in experiment 2 there seems to be decrease in negative affect over time in the sad-mood group. Also, the arousal effects (which could play a role on the effects on distraction) may have also disappeared, even if mood remains. The authors perform the next 2 experiments to overcome this limitation by using pictures, and this time interspersing the emotional pictures in the distraction task, which seems more appropriate. But this is a different way of inducing mood. So, in experiments 1, 2 and 4, did mood x distraction interactions remain invariable (non-significant) over time? The effects of mood on distraction could have appeared only at the beginning of these experiments (even when no apparent changes in mood are observed over time). This is only formally tested in experiment 3 (with no effects of trial order). This is relevant, especially for experiments 1 and 2, as their results contradict those in Pacheco-Unguetti & Parmentier (cited in the text). -In experiments 3 and 4, pictures and distraction trials were separated in time by about 20 seconds. This is long comparatively to other studies showing that distractors and emotional stimuli had to be close in time for emotion effects to occur on the processing of the distractors (e.g. Selinger et al., 2008, Dominguez-Borras et al., 2017). To my knowledge these studies did not address mood induction directly, but delay of the distractor onsets relative to emotional stimuli might be affecting the results. Minor: -Page 5, line 94: there is a typo in “stimulus-aspecific”. -Page 15, line 323: “..which correspondents to…” should be “which corresponds to…” -Significant effects should be depicted in the Figures (bar graphs). References Domínguez-Borràs J, Rieger SW, Corradi-Dell'Acqua C, Neveu R, Vuilleumier P. Fear Spreading Across Senses: Visual Emotional Events Alter Cortical Responses to Touch, Audition, and Vision. Cereb Cortex. 2017 Jan 1;27(1):68-82. SanMiguel I, Corral MJ, Escera C. When loading working memory reduces distraction: behavioral and electrophysiological evidence from an auditory-visual distraction paradigm. J Cogn Neurosci. 2008 Jul;20(7):1131-45. Selinger L, Domínguez-Borràs J, Escera C. Phasic boosting of auditory perception by visual emotion. Biol Psychol. 2013 Dec;94(3):471-8. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Emily M Elliott Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Positive and negative mood states do not influence cross-modal auditory distraction in the serial-recall paradigm PONE-D-21-08795R1 Dear Dr. Kaiser, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, José A Hinojosa, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-21-08795R1 Positive and negative mood states do not influence cross-modal auditory distraction in the serial-recall paradigm Dear Dr. Kaiser: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. José A Hinojosa Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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