Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 21, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-09293 Estimation of sodium consumption by novel formulas derived from random spot and 12-hour urine collection PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kantachuvesiri, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. My observations to be answered: - The study added new information to existing knowledge of Kawasaki, Tanaka, and Intersalt equations. - In the introduction the authors made a literature revision, but there were no reported differences between handling of sodium in the Western, Eastern and Black populations. -- In Methods is important to provide the calculation power performed for the inclusion of patients in the study. The urine collection period was not described when the authors refer to the day or night period and also is important to know the start or end time of it. It is important describe the drugs that the volunteers normally received. - The study analyzed other parameters in results as ages, gender, occupation, medical history, behavior towards dietary salt intake, hypertension and other parameters that were described in results, however, such analyzes were a little out of the objective of the study. The drugs received by patients need to be discussed with regard to the influence on the handling of sodium. - Figures need to be better worked, with better resolution. - In the discussion, it would be important to emphasize the importance of the 12-hour urine collection findings in relation to the 24-hour urine in established calculations and its application in the future in the clinic. - Native English proofreading is required Please submit your revised manuscript by 20 days. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Dulce Elena Casarini, PhD, FAHA Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: The authors described in the manuscript equations/formulas to validated formula for predicting 24h urine sodium excretion from 12h urine collection. The study added new information to existing knowledge of Kawasaki, Tanaka, and Intersalt equations. In the introduction the authors made a literature revision, but there were no reported differences between handling of sodium in the Western, Eastern and Black populations. In Methods is important to provide the calculation power performed for the inclusion of patients in the study. The urine collection period was not described when the authors refer to the day or night period and also is important to know the start or end time of it. It is important describe the drugs that the volunteers normally received. The study analyzed other parameters in results as ages, gender, occupation, medical history, behavior towards dietary salt intake, hypertension and other parameters that were described in results, however, such analyzes were a little out of the objective of the study. The drugs received by patients need to be discussed with regard to the influence on the handling of sodium. Figures need to be better worked, with better resolution. In the discussion, it would be important to emphasize the importance of the 12-hour urine collection findings in relation to the 24-hour urine in established calculations and its application in the future in the clinic. Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. 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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: To authors The current manuscript is interesting and important. It involves prediction about cardiovascular diseases in Thailand through getting sodium urine measurement. The authors carried out urine tests and created new formulas with correlation between former formulas by other researchers and the new formula. My questions: Methods I have not found quotes about participants with heart failure or cirrhosis. These syndromes cause low perfusion, secondary hyperaldosteronism. It can interfere with renal sodium excretion. Approximately 19 % were hypertensives, but I have also found no reports of the use of drugs that block the renin-angiotensin system in hypertensive volunteers. Could these medicines interfere with kidney sodium excretion? I am not sure or I didn't pay attention when reading the manuscript. What was the exact moment when each participant performed the spot urine collection? Was it before, during or after the 12h urine collection? Results What statistical test did you use to compare urinary sodium excretion between HCW and non-HCW groups? And about comparison between age? And hypertesion vs. non-hypertension? Have you performed with the Student's t test? Discussion In my opinion, you should report the primary result found in the in the first paragraph in discussion of the manuscript Authors must perform a detailed review of English. Reviewer #2: Soumach's article and collaborators describe new equations to predict 24-hour urinary sodium excretion. With the equations proposed by the authors, the collection of 12-hour urine, whether collected during the day or night, associated or not with spot urine, correlates significantly with studies that investigated sodium excretion. The study of Soumach and collaborators adds information to existing knowledge. Some suggestions for improving the study • I suggest that the specificity of the population studied is included in the title. Possibly, most (if not all) of the study participants were Eastern. It is known, for example, that black individuals have a distinct handling of sodium. Even in the introduction of the work the authors refer only to the sodium intake of the Thai population. • Although the authors elegantly demonstrate that the proposed formulas predict and validate excretion in a shorter time (12 hours) it would not be important for the authors to evidence the gains in the use of these equations. The discussion of the benefit of using equations takes place in only one paragraph. • How did the authors calculate the number of patients included in each group? Which test was used to calculate the sample? • When the authors refer to the day or night period, the start or end time of the collection is not clear. • Could the fact that patients answer the questionnaire while resting could not determine the increase in blood pressure? • Antihypertensive drugs that alter renal hemodynamics (such as calcium channel blockers) or aldosterone secretion could not interfere with the results? • The objectives of the work were related to the development of the equations. However, the work also makes comparations between ages, gender, the fact that patients are hypertensive or health professionals. The focus of the work seems to me scattered. It would be interesting, the correlation between 24-hour and 12-hour measurements in the different strata proposed by the authors. • What was the statistical analysis software used by the authors? • In equations, I think it should be sororded "UNa" instead of "Una". UK is capitalized ********** 6. 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PONE-D-21-09293R1 Estimation of sodium consumption by novel formulas derived from random spot and 12-hour urine collection PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kantachuvesiri Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The review was adequate and two small points would need to be reviewed, topics that are in line with those also highlighted by one of the referees: - the statistical analysis to Table 2 when the authors discuss age, - in discussion explain the difference between HCW and non-HCW in excretions of sodium and creatinine. Please submit your revised manuscript by September 2nd, 2021. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Dulce Elena Casarini, PhD, FAHA Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): All changes made were appropriate in this new version, and I suggest that the authors observe the note made by one of the referees about adding the statistical analysis to Table 2 when the authors discuss age. Regarding the discussion, the difference between HCW and non-HCW in sodium and creatinine excretions was not highlighted, which was also observed by one of the referees. With these minor corrections the article is in the profile for publication. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors The current manuscript is interesting and important. It involves prediction about cardiovascular diseases through getting urine sodium measurement. All comments have been addressed. Reviewer #2: The study by Sonouch and collaborators brings gains from its original version and is much better organized. The article actually brings two studies, the first that discusses the sodium excretion of 209 Thai participants. The second is the design of equations that increase the correlation between urine collection for 12 hours (daytime or nighttime), associated or not with the isolated urine sample. The correlations when associated with the 12-hour sample when associated with the isolated sample present a high degree of correlation against the gold standard, which is the 24-hour sodium dosage. Because the study is local, I strongly recommend that the study title contain this information. The stratified analysis of the information, verified in table 2, was a gain for the study, but the statistical analysis was lacking in the table when the authors discuss age. I also did not see in the article discussion why the difference between HCW and non-HCW in sodium and creatinine excretions. I still believe that extrapolating mathematical behaviors in a small sample should be taken with caution. The authors do not demonstrate calculations the estimate of the necessary population. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Estimation of sodium consumption by novel formulas derived from random spot and 12-hour urine collection PONE-D-21-09293R2 Dear Dr. Kantachuvesiri We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Dulce Elena Casarini, PhD, FAHA Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors answered all the last questions asked by the referees that improved the manuscript. This latest revision has been carefully done, and therefore the manuscript is accepted for publication. Reviewers' comments: The authors answered all the last questions asked by the referees that improved the manuscript. This latest revision has been carefully done, and therefore the manuscript is accepted for publication. |
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PONE-D-21-09293R2 Estimation of sodium consumption by novel formulas derived from random spot and 12-hour urine collection Dear Dr. Kantachuvesiri: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Dulce Elena Casarini Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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