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PONE-D-21-12199 Decision-making during obstetric emergencies: A narrative approach PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Raoust, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 12 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include a copy of the interview guide used in the study, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information, or include a citation if it has been published previously. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): I have now received feedback from the two reviewers. They both see the value in the paper but make very important points. While one reviewer suggest minor revisions, there is an important question posed about making sure your research question is clear. I think both reviewers' comments merit a major revise and resubmit, which I hope you will do. Please address their comments carefully. I look forward to your revisions. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the paper "decision-making during obstetric emergencies: A narrative approach". Overall, I thought the paper was interesting and the methodology in particular was interesting and conducted with rigour. I do however feel that further work is required before the manuscript is published. In particular, I feel that more needs to be done to justify why the study was needed. Why is there a need to understand how physicians make sense of and give meaning to their decision-making? And how will will understanding their sense making and meaning making processes help us to address a problem/issue. The problem/issue with our current understanding of decision making in emergencies was alluded to but not well defined. It seems like a gap that was trying to be filled was considering team-based decision making (which has evidently been used in anaesthesiology), but if that was the case, why were only Physician’s included? Given the plethora of literature on medical decision making, I felt that the introduction was too short and lacking critical analysis of the existing evidence base and thus lacking the justification for the current study. Typically, qualitative research is used to answer a research question. I wasn’t clear what the research question was that was being answered in the study. I thought the method and description of the approach was good, though I wasn't clear why median years experience was chosen rather than the traditional mean and standard deviation, which gives more indication of spread, was chosen. Age is also commonly reported though is perhaps less relevant for some reason in this study. Given the study was a 3 different units, I was interested in whether the unit they worked in influenced the themes and style used. Perhaps this was considered and was not of interest as experience drove most of the effect, but I would be interested to know. The use of the images was fascinating and I can see how it may have lead to richer data by breaking down the typical interview process - particularly for those with who likely have strong associations of the norms associated with the format. I think this is a particular strength of the study. I think the results could be strengthen by restating with the research question/aim to situation the themes. I was a little confused about how the two different sets of themes were related, though this was somewhat cleared up later in the paper. In terms of discussion, and partly related to the issue outlined with the introduction, but I struggled to understand what is novel and new about the findings. Experience as a variable affecting decision making is widely researched and understood. The authors also themselves state that their findings mirror some of the common models on decision making. I think more needs to be done to explicitly highlight what this paper adds in terms of a) practical implications (which is somewhat done in the conclusion) and b) theoretical implications. I would also recommend that the restating of the method is removed from the conclusions section and that this section is strengthened so that the contribution is more specific and explicit and less vague. While I enjoyed and was thankful for the self-reflexivity section, I do think the author (as an insider researcher) needs to say more on how they bracketed their own preconceptions during the data collection and analysis and/or if, as it seems, they leant into their own background, I would appreciate a deeper analysis of the impact this may have had on findings. A final note, a read through the reference list shows a distinct lack of referencing of most of the decision making models in medicine. Dual process theory is briefly mentioned but cognitive continuum theory (as an example), which is arguably relevant is not. I recommend that the authors dialogue with the existing models more directly to position their studies and findings. There has also been considerable work on individual differences in decision making that goes above and beyond the novice/expert and personality perspectives. I wish the authors the best in publishing this interesting methodological paper. Reviewer #2: This manuscript reports on findings from an interesting narrative analyses of interview data from obstetricians and gynecologists in Sweden on their perspectives and experiences of decision making during obstetric emergencies. It is an important area of research, with implications not only for quality of healthcare in obstetric emergencies but potential to add to our understanding of professional decision making processes across a range of healthcare settings. Unfortunately, the research is reported too superficially to realise its potential for understanding decision making even in this specific context, nor the implications for improving decision making processes and outcomes. The authors set a context for their work as being about understanding variations in intervention rates and outcomes, including potentially harmful over-use of medical intervention. However, this premise is not adequately considered in the subsequent analyses and interpretation. What do the findings offer for uncovering possible explanations? How do they fit (or not) with other research on the possible explanations for these variations and/or overtreatment in terms of obstetric/gynecological decision making? There are very interesting nuances in the data presented that are missing from the analysis and discussion altogether. For example, the authors indicate at various times that they observed an apparent lack of easy self-awareness and professional reflection when engaging with research participants on this topic (e.g., “motivations and rationales seemed to exist unnoticed”). Is critical self-reflection and debriefing part of routine professional practice (and/or training)? Further, there is an embedded lack of consideration of the patient’s right to autonomy in decision making processes in the participants’ responses and the author’s interpretations. The invisibility of the birthing woman and indicators that her autonomy is largely unacknowledged in the narratives and interpretations (‘could sometimes be included in the discussion’ etc. etc.) may be an integral finding here that goes unmentioned. These findings are of direct relevance to understanding why there may be unwarranted variations in practice and are key to advancing quality decision making in obstetric emergencies. A much deeper and more critical analyses is needed of what is, and perhaps just as importantly what is NOT, embedded in the narratives reported here. Indicators of control and agency, in particular, require deeper analyses and critical reflection. Related to this, there is insufficient acknowledgement of the role, assumptions and beliefs of the authors and how they may have influenced the research process. The first author/interviewer is noted to be an obstetric and gynecology specialist and senior consultant in perinatology, but much more is needed to understand the researcher bias inherent here. Was the interviewer previously known to participants, and how? What was the power dynamic between researchers and participants? What are the authors’ own fundamental philosophical positions on decision making in obstetrics (including other authors, who are reported to have been involved in ongoing discussions about the findings)? Much stronger reflexivity is needed in both reporting these factors up-front and in consciously acknowledging their influence on analyses and interpretations of the data. The sections of the Discussion on methodological considerations only heighten concerns of bias with a lack of insightful critique on the range inherent assumptions of the research processes. Interesting that at least one quote about midwifery colleagues was so gendered (see lengthy quote starting page 13 with “It’s a special dynamic”). What was the gender of Physician 9? Are there both cross-professional and cross-gendered power dynamics at play here? Social complexity in this context is mentioned as warranting further research, but could be discussed much more within this work as well. The context of maternity care organisation in Sweden and the specific role of obstetricians and gynecologists within it would be helpful to a broad readership. More careful, humanised language is recommended to describe the people being cared for in emergency situations (consider replacing ‘parturient’ with ‘birthing woman’ or ’birthing patient’ if a non-gendered description is preferred). Also consider replacing ‘delivery care’ with ‘intrapartum care’ or ‘care during labour and birth’. Overall, the implications of these findings could be discussed with much more useful degree of specificity, with some reference to key theories or other research that would be useful in their realisation/implementation. There are also some typographical/grammatical errors that should be addressed in any subsequent revisions. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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